Urdu Poetry Forum

I want to visit Disney Land
I hope it's like my Dream Land
Everyone living with love and peace
With noone at all to make them cease
One night my wish came true
With happiness I was running tro and fro
I saw them in a chain of love
As if I was looking at a flock of dove
For sure they knew the meaning of life
How joyfully and lovingly they survive
I wished that the entire world was with me to see
Even cartoons living peacefully as could ever be
They pledged for a united Disney Land
I hope this was the pledge of our Home Land
I remembered my world
But then I curled
'cause of the shame
Of the fail of our aim
My world had bloodshed almost everywhere
But I didn't want the cartoons to hear
Jobless people on the way to suicide
At this moment I really cried
Drug abusers have a large population
Blood in most people is full of
corruption
People caring for them selves only
Children dreaming of the future that's lonely
People spliting apart from each other
Like thin little threads from a bird's feather
Mickey came to me and said
"Do you wanna meet the CN Flinstone Fred?"
I hoped he never saw my tears
But at last true came my fears
"Dearest Alina why crying like that
You look like a without ball bat"
I replied with a cry and hopeless eyes
And tried to hide all my cries
"My world is not at all like urs
And it makes me cry ofcourse"
"Just don't worry and go on start
And pray to GOD with a true heart
I know he will never let you down
And now never again do frown"
He saw the hope in my eyes and Rubbed up all my cries
Suddenly.... my eyes opened
By the ring of alarm I wakened
I saw people living in an unpeaceful way
Even now up to this very day
Still I prayed and prayed to GOD
Help my world, Oh My LORD!!!
Right now I can't see my wish coming true
Nor do I see a little peaceful clue
As a student I have a scope
A better Pakistan I really hope
A peaceful nation
Full of creation
A place full of happiness and love
Pakistan sign of love instead of dove
Pakistan doesn't at all need lectures
But just some peaceful archetectures
To make a building of stable Pakistan
The united ,deciplined and best Pakistan
I hope my world was like Disney Land
I hope it was like my Dream Land




Hehehehehe.... :blush
I know barii lambi hai ....
mukka dil mut toornaaaaaaaaa /sad
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzz /aw

<!--QuoteBegin-£øVåߣ€ ®ø§€+Aug 18 2003, 01:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (£øVåߣ€ ®ø§€ @ Aug 18 2003, 01:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I want to visit Disney Land
I hope it's like my Dream Land
Everyone living with love and peace
With noone at all to make them cease
One night my wish came true
With happiness I was running tro and fro
I saw them in a chain of love
As if I was looking at a flock of dove
For sure they knew the meaning of life
How joyfully and lovingly they survive
I wished that the entire world was with me to see
Even cartoons living peacefully as could ever be
They pledged for a united Disney Land
I hope this was the pledge of our Home Land
I remembered my world
But then I curled
'cause of the shame
Of the fail of our aim
My world had bloodshed almost everywhere
But I didn't want the cartoons to hear
Jobless people on the way to suicide
At this moment I really cried
Drug abusers have a large population
Blood in most people is full of
corruption
People caring for them selves only
Children dreaming of the future that's lonely
People spliting apart from each other
Like thin little threads from a bird's feather
Mickey came to me and said
"Do you wanna meet the CN Flinstone Fred?"
I hoped he never saw my tears
But at last true came my fears
"Dearest Alina why crying like that
You look like a without ball bat"
I replied with a cry and hopeless eyes
And tried to hide all my cries
"My world is not at all like urs
And it makes me cry ofcourse"
"Just don't worry and go on start
And pray to GOD with a true heart
I know he will never let you down
And now never again do frown"
He saw the hope in my eyes and Rubbed up all my cries
Suddenly.... my eyes opened
By the ring of alarm I wakened
I saw people living in an unpeaceful way
Even now up to this very day
Still I prayed and prayed to GOD
Help my world, Oh My LORD!!!
Right now I can't see my wish coming true
Nor do I see a little peaceful clue
As a student I have a scope
A better Pakistan I really hope
A peaceful nation
Full of creation
A place full of happiness and love
Pakistan sign of love instead of dove
Pakistan doesn't at all need lectures
But just some peaceful archetectures
To make a building of stable Pakistan
The united ,deciplined and best Pakistan
I hope my world was like Disney Land
I hope it was like my Dream Land




Hehehehehe.... :blush
I know barii lambi hai ....
mukka dil mut toornaaaaaaaaa /sad
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzz /aw [/b][/quote]
wowwwwwwwwwww realy nice 1 @};- /flower @};-

v niceee

<!--QuoteBegin-BEWAFA+Aug 17 2003, 11:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (BEWAFA @ Aug 17 2003, 11:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> v niceee [/b][/quote]
Thnx alot 4 da appreciation