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**Noor-al-sabah** · #11 10-26-2007, 05:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Saraabs

Saye ki tarah jo saath rahe, kab insaaN uski baat sune
Jo apna kabhi na hopaye, dil uske asar maiN rehta hai

Kia ramz-e-muhabbat samjhayeN, kia us se dil ki baat kaheN
HaiN paoN zameeN se apne juRay, wo shams-o-qamar maiN rehta hai

Bhai wahhhhh mohtarma, hamesha ki tarah aap ne is baar bhi bohot hi umda ghazal kahi hai, bohot si daad qubool kijye

aap ki mamnoon hun aap mera kalam parhte hain.

**Noor-al-sabah** · #12 10-26-2007, 05:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rida jabeen

Asslamo alikum Noor kaisi hain aap bhaee waah shaira hone k saath saath aap
designer bhi ban gai bohut acha laga aap k haath se ki gai designing
and shairi ka to humesha ki tarha koi jawab nahin

matala k neechay walay 3 ashaar bohut pasand aye
daad qubool kijye

walaikum assalam

aap kaisi hain Rida?meri design aur ghazal pasand ki aap ne

shukriya.aap sab parhte hain to likhne ki tehreek milti hai.

khush rahein hamesha.

**Noor-al-sabah** · #13 10-26-2007, 05:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo

jo apna kabhi na ho paye.. dil uske asar maiN rehta hai..

wahhh... bohat khubsoorat kawish.... umda khayalat...

bohat khush rahiye

aapki shukrguzar hun hosla afzai ke liye.

**m a natiq** · #14 10-26-2007, 09:46 AM

Wah Noor Sahiba..........Kiya Kehny........Bohat Hi Umda Gazal Kahi App Ne
Kia ramz-e-muhabbat samjhayeN, kia us se dil ki baat kaheN
HaiN paoN zameeN se apne juRay, wo shams-o-qamar maiN rehta hai

Bohat Si Dad Kabool Kijiye Is Khobsurat Gazal K Liye........

**luckylibra** · #15 10-26-2007, 09:58 AM

very nice bohat khooob
dheeroon daad qabool kerin meri terf say

bohat bohat ziada duaon kay sath
jaahan rahin bohat boht khush rahin
emmran

**Tariq Aziz** · #16 10-26-2007, 02:18 PM

na sehraon ma chain aye, na do pal ghar ma paye sakoon
dil apna aisa musafir ha, her waqt safer ma rehta ha

noor apki pori ghazzal bohut khubsurat apki poetry ma aik khaas baat ye ha kay her baar aik munfarid aor bilkul naya khayal parnay ko mil jata ha, aor apki poetry ki yahee quality apko aik buland muqam ata karay gi inshallah, apki poetry her baar aik naya andaz lay ker ati ha, mujy apki ye quality daik ker bohut khushi hoi aor meri dowa ha Allah apko isi tarah apnay khazano ma sey daita rahay.
humaishah bohut bohut khush rahoo

**withlove** · #17 10-26-2007, 02:41 PM

jo apna kabhi na ho paye, dil uske asar mein rehta hai..

wahhhhhh.. kya kehnay.. nazmon ki tarah ghazal bhi umdah kehti hein .. MashaAllah dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen iss achi ghazal ki nazr..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

**WanderingThoughts** · #18 10-26-2007, 04:24 PM

as-salam-o-alaikum Noor,

ap ne bohat arse bad poets club meiN kuch share kiya, shayad designing meiN ziada masroof haiN

baei wah, kya khoob ghazal kahi hy is bar bhi, bohat umda, acha laga ye ghazal paRh kr.... her shair apni jaga bohat kuch convey kr raha hy, Tariq Aziz bhai ki bat hi ko aagy baRhaoN ga k koshish kreN k aap k kalam meiN yahi infiradiat qaaim rahy, Allah kary aap ka ye safar isi trha jari-o-sari rahy aur aap isi trha manazil tay krti raheN, Allah Mola aap ko is safar meiN aagy baRyny ka hosla aur huner ata kary.

meri janib se is ghazal pr boaht si daad qubool kreN, isi trha khoob se khoob ter likhti raheN, aur ham se share krti raheN, khush raheN, aabad raheN...

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