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**mystique** · #1 10-26-2007, 03:54 PM

assalam alaikum doston
kaafi dino k baad apni aik nazm aap k sath share kar rahi hon hamesha ki tarah aap sab ki qeemti aara ka intezaar rahega

palat k waapsi ka ab koi rasta nahin baaqi

nigahon mein jo roshan thi woh qandeelain dhuwaan hain ab
lahu mein daurti us pyaas ki shiddat sawa hai ab
k jis shiddat ne mere har taraf ik jadui manzar banaya tha
chamkti aab khushboo aur ghanay pairon ka saya tha
jahan tum the tumhari chahton ka abr chaya tha
magar mera qadam partay hi sab manzar hue ojhal
na khoshboo thi na saye the
na teri aankh mein chahat ka darya tha
chamakti dhoop ki shiddat
sulagta jalta sehra tha
humari ruuh pe bas aablon ka jaal phaila tha
humaray pair zakhmi they
humaray hauslay bedum
ukharti saaans aankhon mein jalan
lekin
palat k waapsi ka ab koi rasta nahin baaqi
jala kar kashtiyan saari
hum is sahil pe utray the.....

**withlove** · #2 10-26-2007, 04:07 PM

palat ke wapsi ka ab koi rasta nahi baqi..

wahhhhhhh.. kya kehnay... MashaAllah Allah ne ap ko bepanah salahiyaton se nawaza hai ..inhen baroo-e-kaar laati raha kijiye.. likhti rahiye aur share kerti rahiye.. nazm bohat myari hai.. daad qabool kijiye..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

al_afzaal · #3 10-26-2007, 04:18 PM

wah wah wah
kai kehnae hain
jala kar kashtian sari ham is sahil pae utre thae ......
aap kae alfaaz or alfazon main ayan haqiqat aap ki umda or alla soch or wasi-o-arieez tor par pheltae huwae takhaiyal or khwahishon kea lazat bharat un lamhaat ki akasi karti hae kae jinko bhoolna asan nahin ........
waise mera naam afzaal hae pakistani hoon lain dubai main settle hoon jab kabhi tanhayaion kae samndar main apna safeena akail nazar ayae to kisis na kisi tarhan apnea app ko masroof rakhta hon or aksar aiseae main yeh site kholta hoon ,,,appki poetry parhi bara acha laga ...mola aap kae qalam ko itni taqat dae kae apnae alfzanon sae hamarae dard chun chun ke kaghaz kae seenae pae utartae rahen or mehfooz kartae rahen kion kae yeh alfaaz ..wo moti hain jo dil ki ghehraion main miltae hian .....
well done
buhut aumdah
agar ho sakae to mujhe apni khaas collection bahaijen (al_afzaal72@yahoo.c om..or afzaal_72@hotmail.co m

**mystique** · #4 10-26-2007, 04:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by withlove

palat ke wapsi ka ab koi rasta nahi baqi..

wahhhhhhh.. kya kehnay... MashaAllah Allah ne ap ko bepanah salahiyaton se nawaza hai ..inhen baroo-e-kaar laati raha kijiye.. likhti rahiye aur share kerti rahiye.. nazm bohat myari hai.. daad qabool kijiye..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

aap k jaisay achay shair ki daad mere liye bahot maanay rakhti hai jazakAllah bahot saara

**mystique** · #5 10-26-2007, 04:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by al_afzaal

wah wah wah
kai kehnae hain
jala kar kashtian sari ham is sahil pae utre thae ......
aap kae alfaaz or alfazon main ayan haqiqat aap ki umda or alla soch or wasi-o-arieez tor par pheltae huwae takhaiyal or khwahishon kea lazat bharat un lamhaat ki akasi karti hae kae jinko bhoolna asan nahin ........
waise mera naam afzaal hae pakistani hoon lain dubai main settle hoon jab kabhi tanhayaion kae samndar main apna safeena akail nazar ayae to kisis na kisi tarhan apnea app ko masroof rakhta hon or aksar aiseae main yeh site kholta hoon ,,,appki poetry parhi bara acha laga ...mola aap kae qalam ko itni taqat dae kae apnae alfzanon sae hamarae dard chun chun ke kaghaz kae seenae pae utartae rahen or mehfooz kartae rahen kion kae yeh alfaaz ..wo moti hain jo dil ki ghehraion main miltae hian .....
well done
buhut aumdah
agar ho sakae to mujhe apni khaas collection bahaijen (al_afzaal72@yahoo.c om..or afzaal_72@hotmail.co m

aap ne tou sharmindah karnay ki had tak meri tareef kar di hai.

bahot saara jazakAllah itni hausla afzayi aur itni purkhuloos duaon k liye...Allah Paak aap ki har pareshani har ghum ko duur kar de aur aap ko sukoon aur sachi khushiyan ata kare aameen

agar ho sakae to mujhe apni khaas collection bahaijen

aap ko ye collection meri apni likhi hui shairi ka chahiye ya meri pasandeeda shairi ka?

**m a natiq** · #6 10-26-2007, 05:37 PM

wah wah.......bohat khooob........kia kehny jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai...very nice thinking.....zabr10

iss khobsurat nazam k liye bohat si dad kabool kijiye........

sada khush rahiye......

**SAGARKHAN** · #7 10-26-2007, 07:52 PM

Bohut umdaah aur khoobsorat nazam aapo kam kam likhtii heyn per kamaal likhtii heyn khush raheyey sadda

**13 Mera 7 Rhey** · #8 10-27-2007, 12:35 AM

wawawawa je awawa ...... khubsurat kawish hey ......... dad qabool karin ...

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