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Palat K Waapsi Ka Ab Koi Rasta Nahin Baaqi

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Old 11-08-2007, 07:38 AM
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very nice..............si so bohat aacha likha aap ne pehle bar parha aap ko bohat aacha laga parh kar
sada khush raho
bahot saara jazakAllah dua e sehar pasandedgi k liye aur dua k liye...Allah paak tumhain bhi bahot saari khushiyan ata kare aameen
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aik tarap hai aap ki is nazm main.har lafz jaise us ahsas ke sath poora insaf karta hai jis ki aap ne akkasi ki hai.is dil main utarjane wali nazm ki kya tareef karun ise bar bar parhne ko jee chahta hai.aap waqai itnisari salahiaton ki malik hain.ummid hai isi tarah likhti aur share karti rahengi.

buhat sari daad is bemisal nazm ke liye.

itnay khoobsurat alfaaz mein meri kawish ko sarahnay k liye bahot sara jazakAllah Noor
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Bayhadd umdaah khiyaal bandha hai aapi

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jye, khush rahyebohut khub nazaml kahi , daad qabool ki

nazm ki pasandeedgi aur dua k liye bahot sara jazakAllah Khalidrawat...Allak Paak aap ko bhi bahot dhair saari khushiyon se nawazay aameen
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is nazm koi aisi baat zaroor hy jo dil ko gudaaz kr gae or sachi baat hy udaas kr gae...ab is nazm ki midhat main or kiya lafz kahon..her misra apnay andar boht kuch samaitay hoaiy tha..
itni achi nazm ,or shabnam aap desighner bhi hain to isay roman main q share kiya? lgta hy boht jaldi thi ...
sada khush rahain...
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WALAIKUM ASSALAM,
areyyy...ye kya...humara to khayal tha k humney is nazam ko parrh ker iska reply kiya hai...per pata nahin yahan dekha to pata chala k shayad bhool gaey...
humari taraf sey dheroN daad qubool kijyey itni shandaar nazam per...
ALLAH karey ilm-e-sukhan aur zyada...
Humesha khush rahen.AAMEEN,SUMMA AAMEEN
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aaj bohat arse baad idhar aana hua ... ye dekh kar be.had musarrat hoii k puraane saathiyoN ka khuub se khuub.tar ka safar nawaazne wale ki meharbaani se bohat pyaara guzar raha hai ...

nazm kal aur aaj jese do zamaanoN par muheet hai ... daad.o.tehseen kia pesh karuuN ... Majaaz ki ye satuur aap ki nazr karna chaahuuN ga k:

kal
har taraf bikhrii hoii rangeeniyaaN ra'anaaiiyaaN
har qadam par ishrataiN letii hoii angRaaiiyaaN

aaj
raaste mein ruk k damm le luuN meri aadat nahi
lauT kar waapas chala jaaooN meri fitrat nahi
aur koii hum.nawa mil jaaye ye qismat nahi

aye Gam.e.dil kia karuuN - aye wehshat.e.dil kia karuuN


Nawaazne ka shukriya ~
Bohat Adaab!
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