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This is a discussion on Paaband nazam -- Sadaa e Dil within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Doston aap sab kii khidmat meN aik paaband nazam paiSh kernay kii jurrat ker raha hooN ... Bazaahir to yeh ...
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![]() Doston aap sab kii khidmat meN aik paaband nazam paiSh kernay kii jurrat ker raha hooN ... Bazaahir to yeh aapkii ghazal lagegii, magar mujhper yaqeen rakhiay, yeh nazam hai Yeh merii aik puraanii nazam thii jissay maiN ne revise kiya hai, aur isay na'ii shakl day dii hai! Abhii mere paas Urdu meN likhne ka waqt naheiN thaa iss liay sirf Roman meN post ker raha hooN, inSha'Allah kal Urdu image post kerdooNga ![]() ![]() Sadaa e Dil jab diya dil ka mere bujhne laga kee taRapker dard se aah-o bukaa kya bhalaa kerta kisii se maiN gilaa woh huvaa qismat meN tha jo bhii likhaa kya huvaa gar paas tum mere naheiN faaSloN se dil naheiN hote judaa! haaN! magar furQat ne terii naazneeN karb ka toofaaN hai barpaa kerdia roz iss toofaaN meN jeetaa merta hooN ban gayaa hai ab yeh meraa maShGhalaa baawajood iss kay bhii maiN chup hee rahaa uff! talak lab per naheiN aane diya poochhio na zabt ka maiN ne safar saa'ay meN Ghurbat kay kaise tay kiya jaam-e raahat k liay terii qasam ban k majnuu dar ba dar phirtaa raha aagayaa honToN pe dam hooN jaaN balub baar furQat ka naheiN mujhse uThaa ab dam-e ruKhsat meraa nazdeek hai aaKhrii hujjat merii sunlo zaraa marg se pehlay ho maatam hai zabooN haaN! magar tum se merii hai iltejaa faatiHaa paRhker merii tum qabr per rooh k riShte ko youN daynaa jilaa QASSIM MIRZA ALI :QASSIM:
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#2
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| Qasim Buhat achi Nazam hay lekin agar ise app urdu main bhi post kardain gay tu buhat acha hoga kiun ke zara rawani se nahen parhi ja rahi Roman Main Khush Rahiay Abad rahiay
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#3
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| hmmm...ye nazm pehle bhi aache lagii thii dobara per k aor aacha laga. khush raheye inam
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![]() Mehtab bhai muhabbat bare lafzoN k liay mamnuun hooN ... MaiN abhii urdu meN hee type ker raha hooN, InSha'Allah kuch hee dair meN yeh kaam bhii pooraa ho jaa'ayga! ![]() Qassim Mirza :Qassim: |
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bohat khub................ .bohat acha likha .....![]()
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#6
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| aaha behud haseen jete raho khush raho
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![]() aadaab arZ hai mohterma ![]() Qassim Mirza :Qassim: |
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| bahot khoob Qasim bhahi,bahot hi khoobsurat nazam kahi ap ne,daad qabool kijiye, ![]() bahot khush rahiye.
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