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05-25-2004, 04:05 PM
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/aoa kal bas aesey hi bathey bathey do chaar shair likhkhey hain, in pay zara, qafia behr, radeef, wazan, khayal, alfaaz, zuban aur grammar, jis bhi havaley sey koi khami waghera nazar aaye, apni tajaveez, aara, tanqeed, tareef,aur islaah sey navaziye ga, khusoosan zuban ke havaley sey kyunkey Punjabi bas guzarey laiiq hi atei hai so ho sakta hai us wajah sey ashaar ka mafhoom kuchh ka kuchh ban gaya ho, khair mashq-e-sitam keliye ye natawaan si ghazal hazir hai 1.gif ")1") Ohnun dassya kuj vi naeen Kehan noon bachya kuj vi naeen Ishq di manzil koi koi pujda aiwein labbya kuj vi naeen Haley paar utar sakdey aan haley dubbya kuj vi naeen bas do bol muhabbataan waley hor tey mangya kuj vi naeen dil dey totey hogaye yaro inj tey pajjya kuj vi naeen khush rahiye aur duaon mein yaad rakhiye /AH
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05-25-2004, 06:04 PM
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Haley paar utar sakdey aan haley dubbya kug vi naeen bas do bol mohabbatan waley hor tey mangya kuj vi naein zabardust sha'r hein janab. behr k hawaley sey kehna muskhil hey, k punjabi lehjey sey mein zeyada waqif nahein. Pehley sha'r ka dusara misra samag nahein aaya (bachya??). Behar hall ye do sha'r bohat pasand aaye. likhtey raheye aadab
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05-26-2004, 08:31 AM
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Ohnun dassya kuj vi naeen KehaN nu bachya kuj vi naeen Aur yeh do ashaar tu jaan haiN ghazal kee Haley paar utar sakdey aan haley dubbya kuj vi naeen bas do bol muhabbataan waley hor tey mangya kuj vi naeen Aap kee shaksiyat ka yeh rang bhee acha lagga /flowers
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05-26-2004, 02:23 PM
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Inam bhai bohut shukrya aapki hausla afzaai aur pasandeedgi ka, bachya sey meri murad bachna thi yani shehar mein kuchh bhi nain bacha, albatta Aatif bhai ki tajveez zabardast hai yani kahn nun bachya kuj vi naeen duaon mein yaad rakhiye ga /AH |
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05-26-2004, 02:27 PM
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janab-e-man bohut shukrya aapki pasandeedgi ka, main ney to bas aesey hi likh di thi , aapki tajveez bohut zabardast hai, misron ka sahih rabt ban jata hai..../good1 aur bhi koi kami baishi nazar aaye to aap hazraat ki tajaveez ka intezaar rahega duaon ka talib /AH |
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05-26-2004, 02:52 PM
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Nice jee....@};- punjabi to khair meri bhi.../dontsee lekin acha likha hai...:flower agar me theek samajh gaye hoon to..../ohno1 Khush rahie....:flower
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05-26-2004, 04:11 PM
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/aoa danish bhaii! waahh bhai ji ,zaberdast bara dilchasp likkha hai,Pajaabi mujhay bhi itni achhi to nahi aati per atak atak k samajh hi gaya aakhir /khikhi bohat achhay ashaar hain Haley paar utar sakdey aan haley dubbya kuj vi naeen kia baat hai Soft voice/violin |
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05-26-2004, 08:49 PM
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/aoa Danish bhai Bohat khoobsoorat ashaar hain bohat hi achay lagay cute hain  Khush rahain :flower Allah Hafiz .
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