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RulesThis is a discussion on num huwi aankhain beeton guzri gharri yaad karkai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; mai nai koshish ki ajj muskuranay ki phir sai ki koshish khud ko ajj bahlanay ki phir sai taranum bhari ...
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#1
01-09-2006, 04:37 PM
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mai nai koshish ki ajj muskuranay ki phir sai ki koshish khud ko ajj bahlanay ki phir sai taranum bhari awaz mai kabhi ghamgeen ho kar kabhi naghma sira howa kabhi chillaya bhi manoos hain mujhse un dewarron per hath rakh kar chomain mairaay qadmon ko us chokhat per sar rakh kar nighaoon mai us ka khilkhilata chehra bharr kar kabhi apna geet gaakar kabhi khud ki ghazal parh kar mojood apni sansain apni dharkan sun kar hairaan apni rooh ko wiraan jism ko samait kar han ki koshish ajj muskuranay ki mai nai phir sai per num huwi aankhain beeti guzri gharri yaad karkai
__________________ doorejadded ka meer hoon sadion ko yad rakhta hon mai taqqi oo dard ki khaaq hoon sahib hoon meer takhallus rakhta hoon meer Last edited by Diya; 01-09-2006 at 08:35 PM.                  |
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#2
01-09-2006, 05:08 PM
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 bohat khooob kawish hai bhai @};- khush rahiye
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01-09-2006, 08:38 PM
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aap ki ghazal mein kuch ghaltiyaan theen unhain theek kardiya hai 1.gif ")1") aur ghazal aap ki bauhat umdah hai..lafz ka chunao bhi bauhat khoob hai  wakai jo rooh mein bas jain un kai bina phir zindagi guzarna mushkil hoti hai bauhat khoobi sai aap nai manzar kashi ki hai khush rahiyai
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01-10-2006, 12:58 AM
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buhat khub bhai................ .........  khush reheiye............: )
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#5
01-14-2006, 12:21 PM
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salam bhut bhut shukria or eid mubarak to all |
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01-14-2006, 12:42 PM
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acha likha meer bhaii  3
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01-14-2006, 02:58 PM
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sahab ghazal tu achi hai.... khayyal aur alfaaz ka chunao aacha hai ... per ik kami jo nazar aai wo qafiye paimaai k barey main hai .... us pe zara si tawaj'ju dejeye tu yaqeenan kalaam ka husn nikhar aay ga bohat khush raheye hamesha
__________________ hai zindagi sey nibah mumkin!!!! Main zindagi sey nibha rahi hoon Hai us nay pocha udaas ho tum! main tunziya muskura rahi hoon Shagufta Basit |
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#8
01-14-2006, 06:39 PM
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Meer ji acha likha hai , maggar samjh nahi aa raha k yeh ghazzal hai ya nazzm, per jo bhi hai khoob hai, alfaaz aur theme bohat acha tha, khush rahein abad rahein !
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