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RulesThis is a discussion on Neeli jheel k ander dekha within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum dosto! aj aik nai ghazal k sath hazir huaN... umeed hy ap apny kuch qeemti pal isy enayat kreN ...
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#1
03-25-2007, 01:46 AM
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As-salam-o-alaikum dosto! aj aik nai ghazal k sath hazir huaN... umeed hy ap apny kuch qeemti pal isy enayat kreN gy.  ::: --- ::: --- ::: neeli jheel k ander dekha, maiN ne khawb se bahar dekha. tum sa lagny ki khawhish maiN, phooloN ne bhi saj kr dekha. khawb maiN jab ham neind se jagy, be-manzar sa manzar dekha, phir wo daur bhi aaya k jab, khushioN ne mera ghar dekha. dil zid'di lekin na beh'la, ham ne to sab kuch kr dekha. pyaasi aankhoN ne Faizan, derya ko bhi banjar dekha. ::: --- ::: --- ::: aap ki aara ka intzar rahy ga. ws-salam Faizan Ahmad. Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 03-25-2007 at 02:00 AM.                  |
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03-25-2007, 01:50 AM
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WalaikumAssalam  Poori Ghazal Hi Bouhat Pasand Aai.. Kai Shair Bouhat Umda Hai'n But Mujhay 2nd Shair To Bouhat Hi Pasand Aaya Hay..Bouhat Hi Khoob Likha..Lutf Aa Gaya..Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye..
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03-25-2007, 08:56 AM
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aur is liay bhi shukriya k aap ko ghazal pasand aai... khush raheN, aabad raheN.... |
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03-25-2007, 09:10 AM
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phir wo dour bhi aya k jab khushioN nay mera ghar dekha... wah faizan bhai.... zabardast ghazal hay... buhat shandaar kawish aik baar phir maqta to kia hi shandaar hay  issi tarhaaN likhtay rahiye...  aur share kertay rahiye
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03-25-2007, 09:13 AM
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Bohut Hii Khoobsorat Ghazal Kahii Aap Neyn Likhtey Raheyey Khush Raheyey Sadda@};-
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#6
03-25-2007, 11:33 AM
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wah bhayya, kaafi arsa baad poets club ka chakkar laga aur itni hasen ghazal sey aghaaz howa k mazeed parhne ka mood ban gaya hai 1.gif ")1") ghazal behud behud aachi hai khaas kar humain matla' bohat aacha laga behud daad qobool kejeye khush raheye hamesha aur likhte raheye k ghazab ka likhtey hain
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03-25-2007, 12:08 PM
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Faizan bhai bohat khub khasusan yeh sher to bilkul besakhta hay tum sa lagny ki khawhish maiN, phooloN ne bhi saj kr dekha. regards sohail
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03-25-2007, 02:29 PM
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pyaasi aankhoN ne Faizan, derya ko bhi banjar dekha. BOHUT KHOB MASHALHA BOHUT AHI GHZAL KAHYI AAP NAY
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03-25-2007, 06:38 PM
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Neeli jheel k ander dekha 
