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This is a discussion on Nazr bachaane ka afsaana ,.... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Bohat dinoN baad aik ghazl lagaane ki jisaarat kar rahi hooN iss umeed par ke aap apni araa se nawazeiN ...
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| Bohat dinoN baad aik ghazl lagaane ki jisaarat kar rahi hooN iss umeed par ke aap apni araa se nawazeiN ge ,... ![]() Nazr bachaane ka afsaana dilfareb laga Humare dil ko yuN tarpaana dilfareb laga Sajayee yaadoN ki mehfil to yaad aayee teri Phir apne dil ko yuN behlaana dilfareb laga Na pooche koi mohabbat meiN rog kaise haiN HumeiN ghamoN ka yeh meh khaana dilfareb laga Tu kaj kalaahoN ki mehfil meiN bawqaar raha DukhoN meiN mujhko yuN uljhaana dilfareb laga Gaya jo chhor ke tanha to chup se hum bhi rahe Gaya to ho ke jo begaana dilfareb laga Kabhi to hum bhi kaNwal mehfiloN ki jaan hue Kabhi humeiN bhi yeh Veerana dilfareb laga
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#2
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| Dilfareibbbbbb!! bohat arsey baad hi sahi per achha share kia hai aap ne or no doubt pehlay se bohat improve kia hai aap ne,yehi aik achhay or mehnati student ki nishaani hai.. Aap ki is khubsurat takhleeq pe bohat si daad haazir hai. keep on sharing Kanwal Soft voice
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#3
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| boht khob sorat likha hai app ne bohat achha laga parh kar aik achhi kosish hai apki bohat daad qabool karoo
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#4
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| bai wah... mera khyaal hy pehli bar aap ka likha kuch parh rhaa huN... kya achi ghazal kahi hy Jnab! her sher lutf de raha hy... sirf aik lafz ki typo hy, may-khana maiN "meem" k bad "hay" nahi "yee" aati hy aur isy akatha likhty haiN..... bohat si daad is qadar achi ghazal ki nazr, mazeed ka intzaar rahyg a. Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary.... khush raheN, aabad raheN...
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) |
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#5
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| wha kia batt hi.................. ..
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#6
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| kanwal bohat achi ghazal kehi hay aap nay regards sohail
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#8
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| wah wah bohatttttttttttt khoob kanwal. |
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#9
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| Asslamo alikum kanwal kahan gum thein aap itna achha likhety likhtey najanay kiyon itna kam likhti hain jaldi jaldi share kiya karein bohut saari daad is ghazal ki nazr
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