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RulesThis is a discussion on Nazm - Lamha-e-Fikriya within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! kuch arsa qabl ap sab se apni aik nazm "Tabdeeli" share ki thi... shayad ye nazm "lamha-e-fikriya" usi ...
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#1
10-10-2008, 07:49 AM
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As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! kuch arsa qabl ap sab se apni aik nazm "Tabdeeli" share ki thi... shayad ye nazm "lamha-e-fikriya" usi nazm ki continuation hay... Khuda hmaiN apny ravaioN ko tabdeel krny ka hosla aur taufeeq ata kary... nazm kuch youN hay:  ================ Lamha-e-Fikriya ================ ye nanhy munhy ghareeb bachy, namaz paRh kr nikalty logoN se choti choti haThailioN ko uTha k kehty haiN ay khuda k azeez bando! ay naik logo! hamari ammi bohat hi beemar haiN, aur abu to is jahaN se chaly gaye haiN, ay mery bhaiyo! hamary ghar meiN kamany wala koi nahiN, aur hamary ghar teen din se choolha nahiN jaala hay, tum apny bachoN k sadqy, rizq-e-halaal meiN se hamaiN bhi kuch hissa dety jao, hamari imdaad krty jao! khuda tumhari muraadeN pori kary tumhari kamaeioN meiN bhi daaly barkat, khuda tumhaiN apny baal bachoN smait Kaa'by ka hajj kara'ye maiN aisy bachoN ki iktijaoN ko sunty sunty ye sochta huN, agarchy in meiN bohat se bachy, ba-amr-e-majboori aisa kehty haiN, laikin in meiN se kuch ki aankhoN k aansu'oN se nikalty jazby pukaarty haiN, k in k hoNtoN pe aa k rukty kaei sawaloN k peechy kitny hi sach chupy haiN wo sach kuch aisy haiN jin ko ham be-hisi ki mary khyal any pe bhi taghaful se kaam le kr, bas aik sikka her aik bachy k dast-e-masoom pr rakhty haiN, bina ye sochy, k aik sikky k kitny hissy se ghar ka cholha jaly ga baqi se kitna rashan wo le sakeN gay, aur itna rashan bhi kitny din aur chal saky ga, ye lamha-e-fikriya hay logo, ham aisy bachoN k aany waly dinoN aur un k muqadaroN se, ye kya ki'ay jaa rahy haiN, socho! ay naik logo! zara to socho!!! --------------------- Faizan Ahmad ---------------------
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10-10-2008, 08:03 AM
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faizan sahi aap ne behad khoobsoorat nazm kahi hai: wo sach kuch aisy haiN jin ko ham be-hisi ki mary khyal any pe bhi taghaful se kaam le kr, bas aik sikka her aik bachy k dast-e-masoom pr rakhty haiN, bina ye sochy, k aik sikky k kitny hissy se ghar ka cholha jaly ga baqi se kitna rashan wo le sakeN gay, aur itna rashan bhi kitny din aur chal saky ga, aap ka mushahida bareek aur idraak gehra hai Mashallah, daad qubool kijye! Zemir.
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10-10-2008, 09:08 AM
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Hmmm muasharai ki tasveer bakhoobi biyan ki hai faizan bhai, Bohat khoob
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10-10-2008, 09:14 AM
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tasawer la jawab hai faizan bhai ,, + wording bhi tuchabl hai ,, keya khoob likha hai ,, esi tarahn likhte raho ,, or khush raho 
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10-10-2008, 11:18 AM
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Ahhh............ kya almiyaa hai........!!!! Allah Hamaray Watan par aur wahan k basiyoon par rehaam karay(AMEEN) bayhud khobsorat tasweer kashi ki hai app nay alfaaz ki roshni mein daad Qabool karain
__________________ Ham apne is mizaj mei kisi k bhi na ho sake Kisi se ham mile nahi,Kisi se dil mila nahi.. |
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10-10-2008, 11:44 AM
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Assalmaoalaikum wr wb faizan bhai bohat khoub bohat umda ap nain ak important bat ki tarf hm sab ka dehan dilaya waqi hm log boht behis hen............ l ....laikin in meiN se kuch ki aankhoN k aansu'oN se nikalty jazby pukaarty haiN, k in k hoNtoN pe aa k rukty kaei sawaloN k peechy kitny hi sach chupy haiN wo sach kuch aisy haiN jin ko ham be-hisi ki mary khyal any pe bhi taghaful se kaam le kr, bas aik sikka her aik bachy k dast-e-masoom pr rakhty haiN" Allah hmain dosron k dard ko samjnay or un ki hasb-e-toufiq help krny ki toufiq ata farmay ------------------- " abi utha bi na tha kisi ka dast-e-karam k sara shehr kasa-e-talab liya howay nikla" |
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10-10-2008, 11:59 AM
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Assalam-o-Alaikom Faizan bhai jab ikhtyaar rakhnay walon ki shaoor ki aankh band hojati hai tab moashray ma bay tarteebi janum laiti hai, or yahee bay tarteebi moashray ma aik aisa bigaar paida kerlaiti hai kay per jisko sawarnay ma saloon lag jatay hain magr yahan humari badnaseebi ya bay hesi dakiye kay abi sawarnay ka kaam start bi nahi howa balkay abi mazeed bigar jari hai, yaqeen karain ab dowa mangtay hoye bi sharam mehsoos karta hon, quka sab k sab tamasha daikhnay baitay hoye hain or her nojawan bi 80 saal kay borhoon ki tara srf dowain hi mangtay nazer atay hain. faizaan bhai apnay khoob likha ha Allah apko khush rakhay Ameen
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10-10-2008, 02:14 PM
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hamesha ki tarha lajawab nazm hy janab buhut khoobsoorti sey aap ny buhut takleefdehh halat ki aakkasi ki hy buhut si dada aap k liye
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