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RulesThis is a discussion on Nazm........final version within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; A.S.O.A Yeh nazm is se pehle bhi poet club maiN paish ki thi.....lekin us waqt yeh bohat kham halut maiN ...
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07-05-2008, 10:13 PM
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A.S.O.A Yeh nazm is se pehle bhi poet club maiN paish ki thi.....lekin us waqt yeh bohat kham halut maiN thi........ab iski khasi danting painting aur polish ho chuki he................aa p sab doostooN ki khidmat maiN dobara paish kerne ki jisarat is umeed k sath ki ja rahi he keh aap apne qeemti waqt maiN se chand lamhe ruk ker is pe bhurpoor tabsara karaiN ge.......  meiN bohut yaad aaoonga tujh ko jab samander main chand utre ga koi tara kaheeN pe tote ga raat ki surd si hawaooN main koi badal kaheeN berse ga tere chehre pe mah_o_saal ka rang jaal shiknooN k bun chukka hoga tere hatooN ki sab lakirooN k faisle waqt ker chukka hoga meiN bohut yaad aaoonga tujh ko jab tere roop ki haseeN chandi dusht_e_hijraN maiN jal chuki hogi jab teri aankh se sitarooN ki roshni bhi nikal chuki hogi jab tere is hojoom_e_yaraN main tera talib koi na thare ga aur koi deed ka tamanai tere pehlo main aa na baithe ga meiN bohut yaad aaoonga tujh ko chandni jab jalaye gi tujh ko teri tanhai khaye gi tujh ko khud ko dhoonde gi meri nazmooN maiN mujh ko dhoonde gi apni shamooN main is qadar phir tujhe sataooN ga tujh ko jab nazar bhi na aaooN ga tujh ko meiN bohut yaad aaoonga tujh ko Last edited by ikaify; 07-12-2008 at 04:53 PM. Reason: addition in roman urdu on request                  |
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#2
07-05-2008, 11:18 PM
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buhut khoobsoorat khayal buhut umdahhh nazm hy imran sahab buhut sari daad aap key liye
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#3
07-06-2008, 12:01 PM
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wah wah wah!! bht khub. artistic nazm hai. aap ne andaaz barkarar rakha beher barqarar rakhi. bht maza aaya parhne ka bht achha likhte hain. likhte rahiye
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#4
07-06-2008, 08:31 PM
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Wah janab wah, aap ki dantin painting aur polish ki hui nazm ne baRa mutaassir kiya. Kaash naye likhne wale bhi danting painting aur polish karne ka hunar seekh len. Aik bar phir dher saari mubarakbadeN. |
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07-07-2008, 08:47 PM
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Khush rahiye........... |
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07-07-2008, 08:51 PM
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Khush rahiye...... |
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07-07-2008, 08:56 PM
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aap ke comments aur tareef ka bohut shukria.... hum tou khud abhi tak tufl-e-maktab haiN.....roz seekhte haiN.....aur sab se seekhte haiN... doosre bhi seekh jaiN ge.....jis jis maiN seekhne ki lagan ho gi....Khush rahiye.... |
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#8
07-07-2008, 09:10 PM
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bhaut hi khoobsorat ghazal nazm leakhne per dheron daad qabool krain, bhuat lutf aya parh k, plez do keep sharing Tery badalney se es baat ki dalil hoti hai door hotey hain to mit'ti hai mohabt dil ki
__________________ ( Saqib Sahili ) Jo bhi hai magar kyun hai, ek bar bata dey Mery pas tery na hone ka koi to sabab ho |
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07-08-2008, 09:08 PM
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Khush rahiye......... |
Nazm........final version 
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