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RulesThis is a discussion on Nazm-Aik larka pagal pagal sa!!!!! within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Bohat khoob ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, bohat hi khoobsurat nazam kahi aap nay,,,,,,,,,, keep sharing...
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#21
05-20-2007, 10:03 PM
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Bohat khoob ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, bohat hi khoobsurat nazam kahi aap nay,,,,,,,,,, keep sharing
__________________ jo rukay to koh-e-giraan thay hum, jo chalay to jaan se guzer gaye rah-e-yaar hum nay qadam qadam tujhay yaadgaar bana diya                  |
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#22
05-20-2007, 10:09 PM
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Cheers 1.gif ")1") ,Junki |
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#23
05-20-2007, 10:10 PM
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Cheers(*), Junki |
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#24
05-21-2007, 10:28 AM
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bohat khoobsurat nazm kahi hy aap ne Junki Funki Sahib! aaghaaz se hi aik rhythm banta hy jo paRhny waly ko lutf-andoz bhi krta hy aur nazm k aakhir tak le jata hy... mager aakhir meiN aa kr do bateN mehsoos hoti haiN, aik to ye k nazm ki ibtidaa meiN aur dermiyaab meiN jis trha khyalaat ko alfaaz k achy istamal se bayaN kiya gya tha, wo bat aakhir meiN nazer nai aa'ei.... dusri bat ye hy k nazm k ikhtataam pr aakhri do lines us trha wazn meiN nahi haiN jis trha baqi nazm hy.... bra'y mehrbani is janib kuch tawaju deN... majmoi tor pr aik achi nazm kehny pr dheroN dad qubool kreN@};-, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, aabad raheN...
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) |
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#25
05-21-2007, 03:48 PM
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05-21-2007, 08:29 PM
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wandering thought sab say pehlay tu bohot shukriya aap ki duaoon ka q keh dua say behter koi tohfa nahi.....or bohot shukriya nazm ki pasandeedgi ka....mughay bohot khushi hoi k aap ko nazm pasand aai......jee bilkul nazm k aakhri hissay k baray mein mein bhi yahi mehsoos kar raha hun jo aap nay mehsoos kiya...mughay bohot khushi hogi agar aap nazm k aakhri hissay ki correction ya tasheeh kardayn...mein isko apnay paas correct kar lun ga.....dubara bohot shukriya aap ki purkhuloos duaoon ka....Allah-Taala aap ko bhi bohot ziada ata karay or khush rakhay...Ameen @};-@};-@};-@};-@};-@};-@};-@};- Last edited by junkifunki; 05-21-2007 at 08:30 PM. |
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#27
05-22-2007, 06:35 AM
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v. nice.keep writing n sharing.
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#28
05-22-2007, 08:25 AM
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bohat khub wah kia ba'at hai very nice keep sharing
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