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Old 05-18-2007, 09:13 AM
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bohat khub
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wah,wah,wah
bahot khoob Faizan bhahi,bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne,har aek shair ne bahot lutf diya,bahot maza aaya par ke,so dheron daad meri jaanib se bhi qabool kijiye,
albata doosara shair thora mubham laga,shaaid yeh meri samajh ka qasoor ho, phir bhi ho sakey to aek baar phir dekh lijiye ga,
hamari rooh tak neeli hui hy,
yahi bateN ager tum par khuleN to..

bahot khush rahiye,likhtey aor ham se share kartey rahiye,ALLAH karey zor-e-qalam aor ziyaada,aameen,
bohat bohat nawazish zain bhai... k aap ne is ghazal ko pana qeemti waqt diya aur isy pasand kiya... bohat shukriya daad ka....

jahaN tak bat hy dusry sher ki:

hamari rooh tak neeli hui hy,
yahi bateN ager tum par khuleN to..

is sher maiN ne ye kehna chaha hy k wo bateN jin ko jan kr hamari rooh tak neeli hui hy, wohi bateN ager tum pr zahir hoN to....

ap ki bat bhi durust hy. Pehla misra (ager alag paRha ja'y to) sher k mafhum maiN abhaam paida krta hy, lekin dusra misra paRhny k bad mera khyal hy matlab wazeh ho jata hy....

mujhy bohat khushi hui Zain Bhai k aap ne meri ghazal ko is qadar ghor se paRha aur apni qeemti raa'y se nawaza... maiN zuroor is bat pr aik bar phir sochuN ga..

aur umeed hy aap aainda bhi isi trha apni mukhlisana raa'y se ham sab ko nawazty raheN gi...
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bohat khub
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Foqia Sahiba is qadar mustaqil mizaji se meri kawishaat paRhny aur is andaaz maiN tareef krny ka bohat bohat shukiya....
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Salam,

Faizan yaar kia baat hay, app itna dilkash likhtay hein kay mein hamesha lutf andoz hota hoon, wah wah, bohat maza aaya yeh ghazal parh kay. Meri janib say daad qubool kijeh. waisay to poori ghazal hi lajawab hai laikin yeh ashaar bohat achay lagay.


ye la-mehdood bhi goya qafas hy,
mery sai'yaad mery par khuleN to...

abhi bahar ki janib khul rahi haiN,
meri aankheN kabhi andar khuleN to...


Raza Alam
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Baar Baar Parhnay Kay Qaabil Hay Her Her Shair...Aik Bouhat Umda Ghazal...Maqta To Haasil-e-Ghazal Hay...Bouhat Si Daad Is Khoobsurat Ghazal Kay Liye Qubool Kijiye...
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Salam,

Faizan yaar kia baat hay, app itna dilkash likhtay hein kay mein hamesha lutf andoz hota hoon, wah wah, bohat maza aaya yeh ghazal parh kay. Meri janib say daad qubool kijeh. waisay to poori ghazal hi lajawab hai laikin yeh ashaar bohat achay lagay.


ye la-mehdood bhi goya qafas hy,
mery sai'yaad mery par khuleN to...

abhi bahar ki janib khul rahi haiN,
meri aankheN kabhi andar khuleN to...


Raza Alam
wa-laikum-as-salam Raza Alam Sahab!!!
kesy haiN aap???
mahabat se bhari hui daad aur tehseen k liay bohat suker-guzaar huN aap ka...
aap sab dostoN ki hosla'afzaaei hy jo kuch likhny ka hosla paida krti hy.

Allah Mola aap ko khush rakh'y....
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Baar Baar Parhnay Kay Qaabil Hay Her Her Shair...Aik Bouhat Umda Ghazal...Maqta To Haasil-e-Ghazal Hay...Bouhat Si Daad Is Khoobsurat Ghazal Kay Liye Qubool Kijiye...
bohat shukriya Haya Sahiba!
ap ne gahzal pasand ki is k liay bohat mamnun huN aap ka....

khush raheN, aabad raheN....
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Esteemed brother.......you have really added a new star in the sky of poetry.I hope its words would remain twinkling in the eyes of the readers.May God perpetuate your pleasures and aggrandize you with His special treasures.
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