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**Owys Zemir** · #11 08-22-2008, 10:47 AM

zabardast...bahut hi umda!

**Saraabs** · #12 08-25-2008, 06:13 AM

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Originally Posted by zain

be had mamnoon hooN Faisal bhaahi ke aap ne na cheez ki tehreer ko pasand kiya,aor hosala afza kalmaat se nawaaza,aap jesey achha likhney waaley dostoN ke hosala afza alfaaz bahot taqwiyat detey haiN,
is se bhi ziyaada khushi is baat ki huyi ke aap ne meri tehreer ko baghor paRha,aor jahaaN aap ko kami beishi ka aehsaas huwa aap ne khuley alfaaz maiN us ki nishaandahi ki,yaqeenan yahi woh cheez hai,jo maiN apne is forum maiN aor khaas tor se apni tehreeroN par dekhna chaahata hooN,ke seekhaney ka yahi behtareen tareeqa hai,is ke liye aek baar phir mamnoon hooN,
aap ne "shutar gurba" ki bilkul sahee nishaandahi ki hai,darhaqeeqat is ka aehsaas mujhey nazam post karney ke baad ho gaya tha,lekin time ki kammi ki wajah se is ka kuchh na kar sakaa,beharhaal ab edit kar di hai,
jahaaN tak "daa.ee" ki baat hai to arz hai ke lafz "daa.ee" bahot se mataalab maiN istamaal hota hai,jin maiN se aek "dua karney waala" aor "mud.da.aee" ke bhi haiN,aor yahaaN maiN ne isse inhee ma.anee maiN istamaal kiya hai,
wesey aap ke bataaye huye ma.anee bhi sahee haiN,aor "daa.ee" ka mutbaadil bhi bura naheen hai,is muhabbat ke liye aek baar phir shukriya qabool kijiye,
umeed karta hooN ke aap aainda bhi meri tehreeroN ko issi tawajah se paRhaiN ge,aor jahaan kaheeN koyi khaami nazar aaye us ki nishaandahi bhi zaroor karaiN ge,mujhey khushi ho gi,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

Wahhhh janab...aap ne kis kamal umdagi se islaah ki hai....ke nazm ka husn dobala hogaya hai.....aur baqi rahi "daa.ee" wali baat to ab mera confusion clear hogaya hai bulke dobara paRhne per baRa lutf mil raha hai.....

**dua_e_sehar** · #13 08-25-2008, 02:53 PM

so touching n lovely poem
lafzoon ka chunao bohat hi aala hai
khush rahiye

**zain** · #14 08-28-2008, 07:50 PM

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Originally Posted by *soniaa_jee*

Zain Bhai its really an Amazing piece of poetry.............. .App ki Nazam bay hud khobsorat hai.........app logon kay kalam ko parh kar bohat acha lagta hai,aur app logon say bohat kuch seekhnay ko milta hai......
Thoughts are impressive.......... aur alfaaz ka chunao baymisal hai..liktay rahaiy n share kartay rahiay
Allah app ko khush rakhay(AMEEN)

bahot shukriya is izzat afzaayi ke liye Sonia_jee,yaqeenan aap ke alfaaz mera hosala baRhaaney ke liye bahot kaafi haiN,aap ki is izzat afzaayi aor pur khaloos muhabbatoN ka qarz daar rahooN ga,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

**WanderingThoughts** · #15 08-29-2008, 12:44 PM

wah zain bhai bohat umda nazm kahi hay ap ne....... bohat acha laga paRh kr... aur is sair-hasil guftugu ko paRhny ka bhi bohat lutf aaya... meri janib se bhi bohat si daad qubool kreN... khush raheN aabad raheN... aur youNhi khoob se khoob ter likhty aur ham se share krty raheN....

**zain** · #16 09-01-2008, 05:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Owys Zemir

zabardast...bahut hi umda!

be had mamnoon hooN Zemir saahib is hosala afzaayi ke liye,
bahot khush rahiye,

**cute mary** · #17 09-03-2008, 09:28 AM

bohat achay zain sahab apki nazm bohat khoob rahi ziyada tar hazrat ka ajkal yahi masla hai

magar halaat se waqt nikal k kuch na kuchkarnama anjam ker hi dena chahye

.daad qubool kejye
apna khayal rakhyega

**Men Hon Na** · #18 09-05-2008, 08:11 PM

bohat khoob Zain bhai mashaAllah bohat khobsorat takhleq lafzon ka kamal parhte hoe eik kefeat se tare ho gaye nazam goye ka ye andaz bohat acha laga bohat se daad ap kalee qabol farmayen bohat sa khosh rahen

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