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~~~!!~~ Naye Saal Ki Aamadh~~~!!~~

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Old 01-02-2006, 10:30 AM
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naye saal ki paheli raat,
waqt muntazir hai apni bahaein phelaye
main guzron jaise hi,
apne agosh me le phasaye..
Kala hai maatha uska,
mang bhari hai zakhm se,
dil uska hai jala hua,
jaise bhuna ho usse sulaghti aag mein.
saath humara hai ek baras ka,
abke bhi usne mujhi ko chunna.
apni nawazishein mere dil aangan
pe barasane ko,
is saal bhi meri sehera aankhein
hai tarsae woh..
koi rahaguzar chain nahi dega,
har taraf hai nafrat ki aandhi.
khushi ki gathri (goni-sack) ko
kismat ne kass ke ganth bandhi..
jeevan patri (patri-track) par aa ruki,
hai bina engine kki rail gaadhi,
jismein hain un ginatt dabbe toh,
par nahi uski manzil hai safar,
na koi savari bithane ko.
na koi saathi rail gaadhi batiyane(guppe-gossip) ko.


Akele khadhi pahene dhul ki poshak,
dhoop mein padh gaya hai rang pila,
khadak te hain sare purze uske,
sawan ne badan zang (rust) kiya,
thodhi hi dur hai sardiyan bhi,
kanpti,thartharati is gaddhi ko,
thandh tither bither degi.
Kuch hisse girengi ge patri no. 2 pe,
kuch udenge platform no. 4 pe,
bachi kuchi kasar bhi,
aati jaate yaatri (passengers)
aur safar karti
musafir gadiyan kardengi puri hi..
kardengi puri hi...........
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
salam doston,
naye saal ki aamad yeh meri zindagi ko..
umeed hai kabile-bardasht ho..
aapi aara ki muntazir...FameanALL AH..
khush rahein sab..
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Adaab!

Achi kawish hai aap ki....
Aap ko naya saal mubarak ho

Wa'salam
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Adaab!

Achi kawish hai aap ki....
Aap ko naya saal mubarak ho

Wa'salam
salam jee, :wave1
bohat shukriya aapka is tareef aur hausla afzai ka..
aapko bhi naya saal mubarak..:flower3
ALLAH(swt) aapko khush rakhe aur naye sal mein buri nazar
or har burai se pare rakhe.. AMEEN
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naye saal ki paheli raat,
waqt muntazir hai apni bahaein phelaye
main guzron jaise hi,
apne agosh me le phasaye..
Kala hai maatha uska,
mang bhari hai zakhm se,
dil uska hai jala hua,
jaise bhuna ho usse sulaghti aag mein.
saath humara hai ek baras ka,
abke bhi usne mujhi ko chunna.
apni nawazishein mere dil aangan
pe barasane ko,
is saal bhi meri sehera aankhein
hai tarsae woh..
koi rahaguzar chain nahi dega,
har taraf hai nafrat ki aandhi.
khushi ki gathri (goni-sack) ko
kismat ne kass ke ganth bandhi..
jeevan patri (patri-track) par aa ruki,
hai bina engine kki rail gaadhi,
jismein hain un ginatt dabbe toh,
par nahi uski manzil hai safar,
na koi savari bithane ko.
na koi saathi rail gaadhi batiyane(guppe-gossip) ko.


Akele khadhi pahene dhul ki poshak,
dhoop mein padh gaya hai rang pila,
khadak te hain sare purze uske,
sawan ne badan zang (rust) kiya,
thodhi hi dur hai sardiyan bhi,
kanpti,thartharati is gaddhi ko,
thandh tither bither degi.
Kuch hisse girengi ge patri no. 2 pe,
kuch udenge platform no. 4 pe,
bachi kuchi kasar bhi,
aati jaate yaatri (passengers)
aur safar karti
musafir gadiyan kardengi puri hi..
kardengi puri hi...........
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
salam doston,
naye saal ki aamad yeh meri zindagi ko..
umeed hai kabile-bardasht ho..
aapi aara ki muntazir...FameanALL AH..
khush rahein sab..


Na'ay saal kii aamad kya khoosuratii se kee hai aap ne ... Very well written 3

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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Old 01-02-2006, 07:22 PM
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Na'ay saal kii aamad kya khoosuratii se kee hai aap ne ... Very well written 3

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aawww...:blush4
thank u so much...
wish u a very happy new year...
khush raho.. AMEEN
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khush raho.. AMEEN
All wishing you a very happy 2006
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naye saal ki aamad par bohat umda nazm kahi sweety

naya saaal bohat bohat mubarik ho @};-

khush raho
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wah jadeed nazm ka behtreen namoona hai ye nazm aap ki

bohat umdagi sey nay saal ki amad ko bayan kya hai

khush raheye
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