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RulesThis is a discussion on Natija baray Muqabla-e-nazm goi August 2008 within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! August 2008 k Muqabla-e-nazm goi k liay hmeiN kul 5 nazmen mosul huiN... tamaam nazmeN khoob haiN, ham ...
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08-31-2008, 03:07 PM
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As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! August 2008 k Muqabla-e-nazm goi k liay hmeiN kul 5 nazmen mosul huiN... tamaam nazmeN khoob haiN, ham aap sab sathioN ka shukriya ada krty haiN k ap ki nazmoN ki waja se is muqbly aur is mehfil ki ronaq meiN izafa hua hamary judje ki marking kuch youn hy 1: Aleemanwer Andaz-e-beyan: 3 rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul: 2 Total: 5 2: Oralover2005 Andaz-e-beyan: 1.5 rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul: 1.5 Total: 3 3: Shoaib Andaz-e-beyan: 2 rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul: 2 Total: 4 4: Saharey2020 Andaz-e-beyan: 3.5 rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul: 3.5 Total: 7 5: Owys Zemir Andaz-e-beyan: 4 rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul: 4 Total: 8 to is hisaab sey is martaba winner qarara paay Owys Zemir Meri Pehchaan ....Tum! Dil bhi tum, rooh tum, jaan tum ! Fakhr tum, maan tum, shaan tum Saans tum, tum ragon ka lahoo! Aarzoo tum meri, tumhi ho justuju Tum nazar, soch tum, tum khayal Tum ghame hijr bhi, tum sukoone wisaal! Tum khushi, dard tum, chain tum, tum hi gham! Tum sa'i ka hasal, ishq tum, tum dharam! Tum meri ho fiza, tum samaan, tum hi mera jahaan Waqt ho tum mera, tum zamaan, tum makaan Sab mera "hai" bhi tum, tum nahin kuch nahin ! Mein jahaan, mein kaheen , tum yaheen! Tum jawaabe sawaal Tum wujoode khayaal Paikare tum jamaal Tum ho mera kamaal! Bach agar kuch rahe, Woh houn mein! Hai magar "equation" yeh mumkin nahin.... Mein bhi tum ! ******************** ********* Hamari janib sey aap ko buhut buhut mubarak ho
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09-01-2008, 05:57 AM
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Allah Azzawajal farmate hain " 'allamahul bayaan ", to karam us zaate baari taala ka hai.... Mein sabhi judges aur ehbaab ka behad mamnoon houn, aap logoun ki bahut nawazish. Zemir. |
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09-01-2008, 08:10 AM
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MASHALLAH mubarak ho ji ;rose
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09-01-2008, 10:54 AM
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behad nawazish janaab! |
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09-01-2008, 12:25 PM
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mubarik ho bohat bohat aap ko
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09-01-2008, 12:30 PM
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bahut nawazish, bahut shukriya Zemir. |
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09-01-2008, 12:37 PM
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MASHALLAH bohat acha likha hai aapne likhte rahiye 1.gif ")1") aur apko bohat bohat mubarak ho
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09-02-2008, 08:07 AM
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bahut shukriya princess....yeh aap ki karam nawazi hai, bahut nawazish. Zemir |
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