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This is a discussion on nataaij baraye muqabla-e-nazam goi..."Eid Special"...(oct-06) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; jaisa ke aap sab jantay haiN ke subh Pakistan maiN eid hai...isliye aaj kal kaam ka khasa bojh hai...humaray sab ...
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#1
10-24-2006, 02:52 PM
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 jaisa ke aap sab jantay haiN ke subh Pakistan maiN eid hai...isliye aaj kal kaam ka khasa bojh hai...humaray sab judges ghayab haiN  ...isliye jin 2 judges ne marks diye...unhi ki base par hum fateh ka ailaan kar rahay haiN...Ankaboot ne chooNke 3 hi entries ki marking ki..isliye unke diye gaye marks hum shumar nahiN kar rahay 1.gif ")1") ...nataaij kuch yooN rahay... 1) Shehr-e-Wafa = 14.5 2) Tariq Aziz = 13.5 3) chiraghay akhir shab = 12 4) kanwal Hussain = 15 5) sameera_pearl = 13.5 6) sleepy_eyes96 = 12.5 7) haya n = 14.5 to is martaba ki winner qarar paii haiN "Kanwal Hussain"... bohat bohat mubarak ho Kanwal.. ... chaliye interview ke liye tayyar ho jaiye... deegar shurka ka bhi bohat shukriya Main ne chaha k tujhay EID pe kuch peshkeroo'n ....!!! Main ne chaha k tujhay Eid pe kuch pesh keron titliyan ded'on mager rang hain kachay un k chand bhejo'n to hai be'jaan sa pather janaa'n! phool bin khushboo k kuch dair hi ji paayen gay taray bhejo'n to kahain toot k khoo jayen gay achay mosam bhi bohat dair nahin rehtay hain ye khizaoo'n ka koi waar kahan sehtay hain kehkashaa'n se to teri aankh kahain roshan hai jugno patay hain zia aankh se teri aksar chandni dhoonday panah aankh main teri aksar sochati ho'n k koi qeemati guhar bhejo'n koi neelam koi yaqoot ya heera dedoo'n phir ye socha hai k tum kanch k nazuk pekar! kis trah dedo'n tujhay tohfay main janaa'n pathar? teri peshani ka perto hai ye soraj janaa'n! teri zulfoo'n ki ghata raat se berh ker janaa'n khushbooyen tera badan oodh k ji paati hain gull ruttain teri hansi dekh k loat aati hain teray meyaar ka kuch bhi to nahin hai janaa'n to hai aakash meri soch zamee'n hai janaa'n zehan uljha hai k...ab kia tujhay soghaat kero'n? thak k socha hai k ab Dil se koi baat kero'n....! Dil main jhanka to jaha'n or tha aabad waha'n tha sitara koi roshan ya tha mahtaab waha'n main ne hanstay hoay dekhay hain kaee khawab wahan titliyaan phool ghata or chamaktay lamhay ghum ko bholay hoye khushiyoon se mehaktay lamhay! aik mandir tha jahan aik sanam roshan tha dilnashee'n aa'kas samaitay hoay ik derpan tha shabnami qatray wahan laal-o-guhar jaisay thay saray hi waqt wahan ujjli saher jaisay thay ye ajab dunya thi jo sab se juda lagti thi meri umroo'n ki duaao'n ka sila lagti thi Dil ki khush bakht si dunya ka sabab naam tera jis k cho lenay se ye DIL hoa anmool mera! naam jo rooh main tehleel hai khushbo ki trah meri nas nas main rawaa'n khoon ki gardish ki trah Dil k band seep main ik qeemti gohar ki trah Iss liye sab se hasee'n cheez ye Dil hai janaa'n hai teray naam se anmool ye dunya janaa'n apni iss chaah ka anjaam main aisay ker doo'n kyun na iss EID pe.... ye DIL tujhay "Toohffa" kerdoo'n..........!! !!! humari janib say HG ke sabhi members ko Eid mubarak @};-...Eid ki khushiyoN maiN apne sab behan bhaiyoN ko yad rakhiye... khush rahiye HG Administration.
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#2
10-24-2006, 04:57 PM
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bai Kanwal meri janib se bhi bohat bohat mubarak ho ap ko, ap ki tehreer waqai ye deserve krti thi... sath hi ap ko, aur ap ki wasatat se HG Poets Club k sab members ko dilli Eid Mubarak ho, Allah Mola ap ko aur ap se munsalik sab logoN ki Eid KhushioN aur MusarratoN se bher dy... aur ap k her din ko eid ka din kr dy... Aamin!!!
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#3
10-24-2006, 05:47 PM
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bohat bohat mubarak ho kanwal  mile
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#4
10-24-2006, 08:24 PM
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 Kanwal Ji Aap Ko Eid Ki Khushiya'n Aur Us Kay Saath Hi Is Nazm Goi Mai'n Shaan'Daar Kaar'Cardigi Ki Bouhat Bouhat Mubarak'Baad Qubool Ho..Aap Ki Nazmei'n Aur Deegar Kaawishei'n Bouhat Showq Say Read Karti Hoo'n...Aap Ko Yeh Khushi Bouhat Bouhat Mubarak Ho....
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10-24-2006, 08:56 PM
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Mubarik hoo jee bohat bohat
__________________ ميں سچے رب كے رستے ميں سو بار لڑوں اور جاں دے دوں پهر لوٹ كے دنيا ميں آوں پهر جام شهادت نوش كروں |
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10-24-2006, 09:55 PM
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Asslamo alikum kanwal bila shuba aap ki nazam inaam ki mustahiq bhi thi bohut khoob k aap ki nazam winner karar di gai meri janib se bhi aap ko bohut dher saari daad k sath mubarak aur eid ki bohutbohut Mubarak bad kabool ho 
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#7
10-24-2006, 10:11 PM
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kanwal......aap ko bohat mabarak........... jaisay k faizan bhai nay kaha app ki poem deserve kerti thi.... bohat hush rahiye........ take care Allah hafiz
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nataaij baraye muqabla-e-nazam goi..."Eid Special"...(oct-06) 
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