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This is a discussion on Na'jany kya se kya hoty ga'ay haiN.... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Aadaab Dosto! aj aik sada si ghazal le kr hazir hua hu. is umeed k sath k aap isy parheN ...
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| Aadaab Dosto! aj aik sada si ghazal le kr hazir hua hu. is umeed k sath k aap isy parheN gy aur apni raa'y se aagah kreN gy. ![]() Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 02-05-2007 at 07:47 PM. Reason: typing mistake, now removed.... |
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| Wah Wah Wah Kia he sada si ghazal hay JANAB Buhat he umdah aur behtreen maza agay parh kar ghazal ko Har shair he lajawab hay bhai dil karta hay bar bar parhen Meri taraf se buhat si daad qabool kijiay aur shabasi bhi #4 shair k misra-e-owla main zara si typing mistake lagi usay dekh lain Meri wouqat he kia jab us KAY agay mere khayal main US k bad KAY hona chahiay tha Khush Rahiay buhat ![]() ![]() ![]()
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#3
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ap ki daad bhi qubool hui aur shabashi bhi... ji aap ne jis error ki taraf nishan'dahi ki, usy remove kr diya gya hy... bohat shukriya k aap ne itny ghor se parha aur pasand kiya. Allah Mola aap ko khush rakhy.... |
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| aree wahhhhhhhhhhhh kia khooooooooob hai kittn amuskal kam hai gazal likhna orr app ne bohat hi khoooob soeart gazal likh di hai wahhhhhhhh
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#5
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| wha buhat achi ghazal hi
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#6
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| kuch un ka qurb youn barhta raha hai K hum khud say juda hotay gaey hain kyaa baat hai, buhat khooob buhat khobsorat andaz ki ghazal bhetreen diction k sath lajawab Regards Samra |
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#7
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| ghubar e reh bani kehkashain sitaray naqsh e paa hotay gay wah ![]() boht lutf aya parh kar ik shahkar ghazal boht c daad qabool karain or isi tarah likhtay rahain ![]()
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#8
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| kuchh un ka qurb yun barhta gaya hai ke hum khud se juda hote gaey hain yun to har sher lajawab hai.behad khoobsurat ghazal hai. |