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Na'jany kya se kya hoty ga'ay haiN....

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Old 02-05-2007, 06:43 PM
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Aadaab Dosto!

aj aik sada si ghazal le kr hazir hua hu. is umeed k sath k aap isy parheN gy aur apni raa'y se aagah kreN gy.


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Wah Wah Wah
Kia he sada si ghazal hay JANAB
Buhat he umdah aur behtreen maza agay parh kar ghazal ko
Har shair he lajawab hay bhai dil karta hay bar bar parhen
Meri taraf se buhat si daad qabool kijiay aur shabasi bhi

#4 shair k misra-e-owla main zara si typing mistake lagi usay dekh lain

Meri wouqat he kia jab us KAY agay

mere khayal main US k bad KAY hona chahiay tha

Khush Rahiay buhat
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Old 02-05-2007, 08:39 PM
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Wah Wah Wah
Kia he sada si ghazal hay JANAB
Buhat he umdah aur behtreen maza agay parh kar ghazal ko
Har shair he lajawab hay bhai dil karta hay bar bar parhen
Meri taraf se buhat si daad qabool kijiay aur shabasi bhi

#4 shair k misra-e-owla main zara si typing mistake lagi usay dekh lain

Meri wouqat he kia jab us KAY agay

mere khayal main US k bad KAY hona chahiay tha

Khush Rahiay buhat
Mehtab bhai ghazal pasand krny ka bohat shukriya!
ap ki daad bhi qubool hui aur shabashi bhi...

ji aap ne jis error ki taraf nishan'dahi ki, usy remove kr diya gya hy...
bohat shukriya k aap ne itny ghor se parha aur pasand kiya.

Allah Mola aap ko khush rakhy....
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aree wahhhhhhhhhhhh

kia khooooooooob hai kittn amuskal kam hai gazal likhna

orr app ne bohat hi khoooob soeart gazal likh di hai


wahhhhhhhh
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wha buhat achi ghazal hi
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kuch un ka qurb youn barhta raha hai
K hum khud say juda hotay gaey hain

kyaa baat hai, buhat khooob
buhat khobsorat andaz ki ghazal bhetreen diction k sath
lajawab

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ghubar e reh bani kehkashain
sitaray naqsh e paa hotay gay
wah

boht lutf aya parh kar
ik shahkar ghazal
boht c daad qabool karain
or isi tarah likhtay rahain
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kuchh un ka qurb yun barhta gaya hai

ke hum khud se juda hote gaey hain


yun to har sher lajawab hai.behad khoobsurat ghazal hai.
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