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Na'jany kya se kya hoty ga'ay haiN....

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Old 02-12-2007, 07:22 AM
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wahhhhhhhhh... kiya bat hai...behtareeeen ghazal...bohat hi khubsoorat...maiN bohat kam koi kalaam bar bar parhti hooN...aur yaqeenan apki ghazal itniii khubsoorat hai...ke barha parhnay ko ji chaha..

Allah tala apke qalam ko aur taraqqi day...ameen sum ameen..

bohat khush rahiye

ghazal ko is qadar pasand krny aur duaoN ka bohat bohat shukriya KKM...

Allah Mola aap ko bhi hmesha shaad-o-aabad rakhy[-<
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hmm..wah faizi,,boht umda kawish hay..boht maazrat k main wqt nahi day pa raha is liye coments main taakheer hogae,,

faizi is ghazal main tum ny daaira tora hy or ye tumharay andaz say kuch juda rahi hy..taghazzul bherpoor raha hy

kuch arz keronga faizi..faizi main bahr or wazan ki baat to nahi krta,,,cuz main tum logon k paimanay say muttafiq nahi hon..

laikin ye kawish mujh boht achi lagi...

ghubar e rah bani hain kah kashaain
sitary naqsh e pa hotay gaaiy hain

hasil ghazal shar raha

faizi khiyal k baad lafziyaat ki ahmiyet hoti hy..is ghazal main ager tum lafziyat ka theek istamal kr jatay to lutf dobala hojata..misaal k tor pr hotay ki radeef say taghazzul mutasir ho raha hy

wo aisay aashna ho gaiy hain
meri naqis raaiy ye hy k tay nikalny say taghazzul barh raha hy

aik or misra daikho

meri wuqaat hi kiya hay us kay aagay

is main jab ki jaga hay aanay say taghazzul barhta hy(ye sirf mera khiyal hy)

isi terha ,,waqtan fa waqtan..ki trkeeb pr ghor kero...

faizi tum drust simt pr chal paray ho.....sada khush raho
Saahir Bhai bohat mashkur huN k aap ne waqt nikaala aur meri ghazal pr tabsara kiya...
ap ko ghazal pasand aai, bohat shukria,
aik bat pochna chahuN ga k aap is wazn aur behr k paimany se kyuN mut'tafiq nahi haiN...

jahaN tak radeef pr tanqeed ki bat hy to mera khyaal hy k ye radeef (hoty ga'ay haiN) waqt k sath sath tabdeel hony waly jazbaat-o-waqiat ki taraf ishara krti hy...

"meri wuqaat hi kiya jab us kay aagay"

mera khyaal hy is misry maiN "jab" ki baja'ay "hay" lagany se sher k dono misroN maiN koi taaluq nahi rahy ga...

meri wuqaat hi kiya hay us kay aagay
samunder bhi hawa hoty ga'ay haiN...


wesy aap ka ishara bhi durust hy maiN dobara is sher pr ghor kruN ga..
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Jab aur faqat,
Kisii aik shaks Kii Badulat,
Tumhare ander ka mousam badalnain lagey,
chilchilatee dhup thandak ka ahsas de,
hawa main us kii kamii mehsoos karo,
har chehre main us ka chehra nazar aae tu.........

SAMAJH LENE K MUHABAT KII IBTIDA HAI.


Jab ankhoon main us ka aks dikhae de,
har pal us ko apney qareeb mehsoos karo,
beqarar dil ko qarar,
aur laboon per muskaan,
faqat us k khayall sey hee reng jae tu...........

JAN LENA K YE MUHABAT HAI.


Jab raat nend churaney lagey aur,
akhiyan bekhuwabe kii aade ho jain,
tanhae tumharee sahalii sathii,
khamoshii bateen karne lage.
nenna sawan bhadu,
aur dil sehra ho gae.
aur barish ka garam pani
qatra qatra tumhara dil pighlaney lagey,
aur tum besabab roney lago tu..............

YAQEEN KAR LENA K YE HII MUHABAT HAI.
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tumhari khamushi bhi moajza hai
kai uqday kusha hotay gaey hein

waah bohat khoob Faizan bhai.
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faizan bhai bohut khoob is shandar ghazal keliye meri taraf sey dad qabool kejiye, humaishah khush rahoo
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ghubar-e- reh bani hain kehkashain
sitaray naqsh e paa hotay gay hain

wahh wahhh wahhhhh.........

kyaa khobsurat ghazal kehi faizan bhai...............

bohat achi lagi mughay..........

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Gooooood thought ..
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Jab aur faqat,
Kisii aik shaks Kii Badulat,
Tumhare ander ka mousam badalnain lagey,
chilchilatee dhup thandak ka ahsas de,
hawa main us kii kamii mehsoos karo,
har chehre main us ka chehra nazar aae tu.........

SAMAJH LENE K MUHABAT KII IBTIDA HAI.


Jab ankhoon main us ka aks dikhae de,
har pal us ko apney qareeb mehsoos karo,
beqarar dil ko qarar,
aur laboon per muskaan,
faqat us k khayall sey hee reng jae tu...........

JAN LENA K YE MUHABAT HAI.


Jab raat nend churaney lagey aur,
akhiyan bekhuwabe kii aade ho jain,
tanhae tumharee sahalii sathii,
khamoshii bateen karne lage.
nenna sawan bhadu,
aur dil sehra ho gae.
aur barish ka garam pani
qatra qatra tumhara dil pighlaney lagey,
aur tum besabab roney lago tu..............

YAQEEN KAR LENA K YE HII MUHABAT HAI.

jnaab kya ye aap ki apni takhleeq hy???
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tumhari khamushi bhi moajza hai
kai uqday kusha hotay gaey hein

waah bohat khoob Faizan bhai.
bohat bohat shukriya Ahsan bhai k aap ko ghazal pasand aai....
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