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This is a discussion on Na'jany kya se kya hoty ga'ay haiN.... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by Tahir wonderfull har shair lajawab Tahir Bhai ap ka bhi bohat shukriya.... khush raheN, aabad raheN.......
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#21
02-08-2007, 07:12 AM
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khush raheN, aabad raheN....
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!!         |
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#22
02-08-2007, 08:05 AM
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Aslam o alikum faizan bhai bohut accha likha asusuall her lufz apni juga perfect kaash mujay bi kabhi aap jaisa likhna aa jaye bohut khush rahye aur dua kertay rahain meray liye bi
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#23
02-08-2007, 05:55 PM
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 Sada Lafzo'n Say Saji Aik Bouhat Umda Owr Mukammal Ghazal Read Kar Kay Bouhat Khushi Hui..Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...
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02-09-2007, 08:11 AM
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Allah Mola aap ko bhi hmesha shaad-o-aabad rakhy...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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02-09-2007, 08:12 AM
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__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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02-09-2007, 08:14 AM
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__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#27
02-09-2007, 01:26 PM
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Aas itny achy andaaz maiN ghazal ko sraahny ka bohat shukriya... infact aap mujh se bhi acha likh sakti haiN.. maiN ne aap ka jis qadar qalaam parha hy us se ye to zahi hy k aap maiN khyaal-aafreini bohat hy... bas problem us ko behter andaaz maiN bayan krny ki hy... mera mashwara hy k is Poets club maiN KKM(kanch ki mehroo) ki laga'ei gai sticky thread (poetry tutorials) se istifada kreN... aap bohat kuch seekh pa'aiN gi... Allah Mola aap ki madad kary, aur aap ko hmesha shaad-o-aabad rakhy....
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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02-09-2007, 01:32 PM
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__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#29
02-09-2007, 11:47 PM
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wahhhhhhhhh... kiya bat hai...behtareeeen ghazal...bohat hi khubsoorat...maiN bohat kam koi kalaam bar bar parhti hooN...aur yaqeenan apki ghazal itniii khubsoorat hai...ke barha parhnay ko ji chaha.. 1.gif ")1") Allah tala apke qalam ko aur taraqqi day...ameen sum ameen.. bohat khush rahiye
__________________  . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! |
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#30
02-10-2007, 10:01 AM
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hmm..wah faizi,,boht umda kawish hay..boht maazrat k main wqt nahi day pa raha is liye coments main taakheer hogae,, faizi is ghazal main tum ny daaira tora hy or ye tumharay andaz say kuch juda rahi hy..taghazzul bherpoor raha hy kuch arz keronga faizi..faizi main bahr or wazan ki baat to nahi krta,,,cuz main tum logon k paimanay say muttafiq nahi hon.. laikin ye kawish mujh boht achi lagi.. ghubar e rah bani hain kah kashaain sitary naqsh e pa hotay gaaiy hain hasil ghazal shar raha faizi khiyal k baad lafziyaat ki ahmiyet hoti hy..is ghazal main ager tum lafziyat ka theek istamal kr jatay to lutf dobala hojata..misaal k tor pr hotay ki radeef say |
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