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Naghmay maiN teri khatir, kia kia na bana daita

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Old 12-16-2007, 08:46 PM
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Naghmay maiN teri khatir, kia kia na bana daita
Darta tha zamanay say, afsana bana daita

Aaye waqt! sukooN chHeenaa, kioN hosh mujhay dai kar?
Aaye kaash mujhay un ka, deewana bana daita

Zalim ki adaalat maiN, taulee na wafa ham nay
Marzi ka koyee apnee, payemana bana daita

Paala na gham-e-ulfat, to shukr karo warna
Jeevan ko tamanna ka, jurmana bana daita

Parwana agar rakhta, ilm ishq ki taqat ka
Shamma ko khud apna wo, parwana bana daita

Sab zulm khirad Dhaaye, hota jo mere bas maiN
maiN saaray zamanay ko, mayekhana bana daita

Jalwa jo dikha mujh ko, gar tujh ko bhi dikh jata
Dunya ko to lamhoN maiN, baygana bana daita

TaRpaa maiN bohot laikin, shaikhoN ne jakaR Daala
SajdoN ko zara apnay, rindana bana daita

Bad-bakht Saraab apnay, sehra maiN hi achcha tha
ShehroN ko bhi warna ye, weerana bana daita
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bahot khoob Saraab saaheb,bahot khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne,alfaaz o khayalaat to be had khoobsurat hain,albata bayaan ke hawaaley se abhi mazeed mehnat ki zaroorat mehsoos huyi mujhey,(yeh sirf aor sirf meri zaati raaye hai),so itni khoobsurat ghazal kehney par bahot si daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,
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Bohat umdaah ghazal janab

Tabiyat khush ho gaee perh ker


Khush rehiya

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wah! Kya khoob ghazal likhi hai aapne. Daad qubool kijiye.

Mujhe yeh sher khaas taur par pasand aaya hai:

Jalwa jo dikha mujh ko, gar tujh ko bhi dikh jata
Dunya ko to lamhoN maiN, baygana bana daita

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Naghmay maiN teri khatir, kia kia na bana daita
Darta tha zamanay say, afsana bana daita

Aaye waqt! sukooN chHeenaa, kioN hosh mujhay dai kar?
Aaye kaash mujhay un ka, deewana bana daita

Zalim ki adaalat maiN, taulee na wafa ham nay
Marzi ka koyee apnee, payemana bana daita

Paala na gham-e-ulfat, to shukr karo warna
Jeevan ko tamanna ka, jurmana bana daita

Parwana agar rakhta, ilm ishq ki taqat ka
Shamma ko khud apna wo, parwana bana daita

Sab zulm khirad Dhaaye, hota jo mere bas maiN
maiN saaray zamanay ko, mayekhana bana daita

Jalwa jo dikha mujh ko, gar tujh ko bhi dikh jata
Dunya ko to lamhoN maiN, baygana bana daita

TaRpaa maiN bohot laikin, shaikhoN ne jakaR Daala
SajdoN ko zara apnay, rindana bana daita

Bad-bakht Saraab apnay, sehra maiN hi achcha tha
ShehroN ko bhi warna ye, weerana bana daita
Saraab sahab , intahai khubsurat ghazal he, aur bohut he sada aur pu asar he, is ghazal ki khaas baat ye he ke is main her sher barah-e-raast asar ker raha he, tamam ashaar hi bohut khubsurat hain mager apni jagah alag alag ahmiyat ke hamil hain, is khubsurat kalam per meri taraf se mubarak baad qabool kijye,
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hmmm bohut hi khuubsurat ghazal hai.....gr8 sharing..........
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Zalim ki adaalat maiN, taulee na wafa ham nay
Marzi ka koyee apnee, payemana bana daita
wahhh....bohat khoob Dr sahib...aap bhi parhnay walon
ki nabz khoob pakrtay hain...very nice...
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bahot khoob Saraab saaheb,bahot khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne,alfaaz o khayalaat to be had khoobsurat hain,albata bayaan ke hawaaley se abhi mazeed mehnat ki zaroorat mehsoos huyi mujhey,(yeh sirf aor sirf meri zaati raaye hai),so itni khoobsurat ghazal kehney par bahot si daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,
Janab Zain Sahab, is bazm main itne din ke baad aap ko dobara dekh kar khushgawar hairat hui, aap ki pazeerai ka bohot bohot shukria aur tameeri tanqeed ka mazeed shukria, meri koshish hogi ke andaz-e-bayan par mazeed tawajju doon