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Nafas Nafas meiN teri yad ki hararat hey

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Old 12-23-2007, 08:37 AM
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Shaeri ki duniya ke doston ke liye ek ghazal hazir hey

Nafas Nafas MeiN teri yad ki hararat hey
Tera khayal meiN aana meri ibadat hey

Jigar pe naqsh hein sab merhaley judaai ke
Palown ke faasley katna baree qayamat hey

Teri JabeeN sey terey naqsh-e pa ke daaman tak
Rah-e hayat ki itni si bas masafat hey

Woh jis ko sonp diya zindgi ka sermaya
Suna hey woh tow kisi aur ki amanat hey

Raho gey kab talak doobey yunhi sarabon mein
Sadaf ko dhundna sahraaon mein himaqat hey

Sharab-e derd piyo hasratown ke saaghir mein
Zuban-e dil ko inhi talkhiyon ki aadat hey

Ab aaey hein tow zara dekh len theher ke Qamar
Dayar-e derd mein kis ka makaN salamat hey


Shukria

Qamar uz Zaman
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Old 12-24-2007, 01:11 PM
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Ab aaey hein tow zara dekh len theher ke Qamar
Dayar-e derd mein kis ka makaN salamat hey
wahhhhh..........boh at he shandaar aik aik lafz acha laga
Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziydah...khush rahin..
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Old 12-25-2007, 04:23 AM
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nice................ ......
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Bohot hi umda Qamar Sahab....bohot khoob ghazal hai....sabhi shair itne achche hain ke kisi aik ko muntakhib karna mumkin nahin...isi tarah shandaar likhte rahye aur ham se share karte rahye
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Old 12-26-2007, 03:34 PM
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wah!!!!!!
bahot khoob Qamar saaheb,be had khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne,jis ke har aek sher ne be had lutf diya,lekin yeh ash.aar.............

Teri JabeeN sey terey naqsh-e pa ke daaman tak
Rah-e hayat ki itni si bas masafat hey

Woh jis ko sonp diya zindgi ka sermaya
Suna hey woh tow kisi aur ki amanat hey

Ab aaey hein tow zara dekh len theher ke Qamar
Dayar-e derd mein kis ka makaN salamat hey

khasoosi daad ke haqdaar hain,so dheron daad aap ki is khoobsurat tehreer ki nazar qabool kijiye,
aap ke mazeed kalaam ka yaqeenan intazaar rahey ga,
bahot khush rahiye,
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Qamar bhai bohat maazrat k ap ki ghazal pr itni der baad reply kr raha huN... der-guzer kijiay ga...

jnab bohat hi umda ghazal kahi hy aap ne, bohat aala... lutf mila aap ki ye takhleq paRh kr... tamaam ashaar hi khoob haiN, mager ye shair to ajeeb sa lutf de raha hy...

Sharab-e derd piyo hasratown ke saaghir mein
Zuban-e dil ko inhi talkhiyon ki aadat hey

bohat khoob, meri janib se dhairoN daad is umda ghazal ki nazr, qubool kreN, youNhi khoob sek khoob ter likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary khush raheN aabad raheN....
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bohut khubsurat ghazal kahi he qamar sahab , mubarak baad qabool kijye
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Ab aaey hein tow zara dekh len theher ke Qamar
Dayar-e derd mein kis ka makaN salamat hey
wahhhhh..........boh at he shandaar aik aik lafz acha laga
Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziydah...khush rahin..
Kanwal Saheba:

meri ghazal aap ko pasand aayee aap ka husn-e nazar hey janab. Bey had shukria meri is kawish ki pasndeedgi ka aur itni achi daad ka.

Niaz Mand

Qamar
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