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This is a discussion on Nafas Nafas meiN teri yad ki hararat hey within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Shaeri ki duniya ke doston ke liye ek ghazal hazir hey Nafas Nafas MeiN teri yad ki hararat hey Tera ...
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| Shaeri ki duniya ke doston ke liye ek ghazal hazir hey Nafas Nafas MeiN teri yad ki hararat hey Tera khayal meiN aana meri ibadat hey Jigar pe naqsh hein sab merhaley judaai ke Palown ke faasley katna baree qayamat hey Teri JabeeN sey terey naqsh-e pa ke daaman tak Rah-e hayat ki itni si bas masafat hey Woh jis ko sonp diya zindgi ka sermaya Suna hey woh tow kisi aur ki amanat hey Raho gey kab talak doobey yunhi sarabon mein Sadaf ko dhundna sahraaon mein himaqat hey Sharab-e derd piyo hasratown ke saaghir mein Zuban-e dil ko inhi talkhiyon ki aadat hey Ab aaey hein tow zara dekh len theher ke Qamar Dayar-e derd mein kis ka makaN salamat hey Shukria Qamar uz Zaman
__________________ Kyun Teri Chashm-e mast ka ehsaaN uthaaiye Zehrab-e may sey ho gham-e hasti ager ghalat |
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#2
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| Ab aaey hein tow zara dekh len theher ke Qamar Dayar-e derd mein kis ka makaN salamat hey wahhhhh..........boh at he shandaar aik aik lafz acha laga Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziydah...khush rahin.. ![]() |
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#3
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| nice................ ...... |
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#4
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| Bohot hi umda Qamar Sahab....bohot khoob ghazal hai....sabhi shair itne achche hain ke kisi aik ko muntakhib karna mumkin nahin...isi tarah shandaar likhte rahye aur ham se share karte rahye
__________________ ******************** ******************** **** Adaab teri bazm ke jeenay nahiN daitay DeewanoN ko jeenay ki tamanna to baRi hay (Qabil Ajmeri) |
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#5
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| wah!!!!!! bahot khoob Qamar saaheb,be had khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne,jis ke har aek sher ne be had lutf diya,lekin yeh ash.aar............. Teri JabeeN sey terey naqsh-e pa ke daaman tak Rah-e hayat ki itni si bas masafat hey Woh jis ko sonp diya zindgi ka sermaya Suna hey woh tow kisi aur ki amanat hey Ab aaey hein tow zara dekh len theher ke Qamar Dayar-e derd mein kis ka makaN salamat hey khasoosi daad ke haqdaar hain,so dheron daad aap ki is khoobsurat tehreer ki nazar qabool kijiye, ![]() aap ke mazeed kalaam ka yaqeenan intazaar rahey ga, bahot khush rahiye, ![]()
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#6
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| Qamar bhai bohat maazrat k ap ki ghazal pr itni der baad reply kr raha huN... der-guzer kijiay ga... jnab bohat hi umda ghazal kahi hy aap ne, bohat aala... lutf mila aap ki ye takhleq paRh kr... tamaam ashaar hi khoob haiN, mager ye shair to ajeeb sa lutf de raha hy... Sharab-e derd piyo hasratown ke saaghir mein Zuban-e dil ko inhi talkhiyon ki aadat hey bohat khoob, meri janib se dhairoN daad is umda ghazal ki nazr, qubool kreN, youNhi khoob sek khoob ter likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary khush raheN aabad raheN....
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) |
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#7
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| bohut khubsurat ghazal kahi he qamar sahab , mubarak baad qabool kijye |
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#8
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meri ghazal aap ko pasand aayee aap ka husn-e nazar hey janab. Bey had shukria meri is kawish ki pasndeedgi ka aur itni achi daad ka. Niaz Mand Qamar |