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Nafas Nafas meiN teri yad ki hararat hey

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Old 12-28-2007, 07:25 AM
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wah!!!!!!
bahot khoob Qamar saaheb,be had khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne,jis ke har aek sher ne be had lutf diya,lekin yeh ash.aar.............

Teri JabeeN sey terey naqsh-e pa ke daaman tak
Rah-e hayat ki itni si bas masafat hey

Woh jis ko sonp diya zindgi ka sermaya
Suna hey woh tow kisi aur ki amanat hey

Ab aaey hein tow zara dekh len theher ke Qamar
Dayar-e derd mein kis ka makaN salamat hey

khasoosi daad ke haqdaar hain,so dheron daad aap ki is khoobsurat tehreer ki nazar qabool kijiye,
aap ke mazeed kalaam ka yaqeenan intazaar rahey ga,
bahot khush rahiye,
Zain Saheb:

ye ghazal ek aisi kafiat mein tehreer huee thi ya yun kahun tow ziyada darust hoga ke "utri" thi mujh per jis kafiat ko siraf ahle dil hi samajh saktey hein. Aap jaisey sukhanwar ki ye daad aut tehseeni alfaz bohat ma'ni rakhtey hein merey liye.

Bey had shukria.

Niaz mand

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mashaAllah bahut hi khoob likha hai aap ne...
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Qamar bhai bohat maazrat k ap ki ghazal pr itni der baad reply kr raha huN... der-guzer kijiay ga...

jnab bohat hi umda ghazal kahi hy aap ne, bohat aala... lutf mila aap ki ye takhleq paRh kr... tamaam ashaar hi khoob haiN, mager ye shair to ajeeb sa lutf de raha hy...

Sharab-e derd piyo hasratown ke saaghir mein
Zuban-e dil ko inhi talkhiyon ki aadat hey

bohat khoob, meri janib se dhairoN daad is umda ghazal ki nazr, qubool kreN, youNhi khoob sek khoob ter likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary khush raheN aabad raheN....
Faizan Bhai

Koi baat naheeN hazoor, der sey aaey per aaey tow aap, aur phir itni tawujuh sey aap ney meri is kawish ko parha aur itni bherpoor daad........bohat hosla afzaai huee meri ke aap jaisa sukhanwar aur meri ghazal...........

Bohat bohat shukria. Isi tarah tawujuh detey rehiye aur aghlaat ki nishan dehi bhi bey takulfi sey ker diya ki jiye tow inayat ho gi.

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bohut khubsurat ghazal kahi he qamar sahab , mubarak baad qabool kijye
Khalid saheb:

Janab aap ka husn-e nazar hey bas. Bohat shukria saheb ghazal ki pasandeedgi aur daad ka.

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Ghazal ki pasndeedgi aur daad ke liye shukria swera ji.

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Sharab-e-dard piyo hasraton ke saghar mein
Zuban-e-dil ko inhi talkhiyon ki aadat hai...


wahhhhhh.. kay hi kehnay.. janab-e-Qamar.. kya khoob likhtay hein aap.. MashaAllah, tamam tar ghazal behtreen ashaar se aarasta hai.. mundarja bala shair to dil mein uter gaya.. dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen aap ke fun ki nazr.. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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