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This is a discussion on My peoms....plz ppl come and read them within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Salam to all, here are some of my favourite ones...of my own..tell me the feedback..thanks to all. Zindagi kisi ki ...
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05-20-2008, 04:01 PM
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Salam to all,  here are some of my favourite ones...of my own..tell me the feedback..thanks to all. Zindagi kisi ki Amanat nahi hoti, Amanat me kabhi khayanat nahi hoti, Dil ko sambhal ke rakhna DOST..... Ishq ki jail me kabhi zamant nahi hoti! My favourite one: Sab se chupa ker dard jo wo muskara dia, Uski hansi ne tu aaj mujh ko rula dia. Lehjay se uth rahi thi har ik dard ki dastan Chehra bata raha tha sub kuch ganwa dia, Awaz mein thehrao tha ankhon mein nami thi Aur keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya, Janay kia usko mukh se thein shikayatein Tanhaiyon k dais mein khud ko basa dia, Khud bhi woh hum say bichar k adhora sa ho gaya Muj ko bhi itnay logoon mein tanha bana dia..... Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 05-20-2008 at 10:37 PM. Reason: attachment removed, violence of HG nudity policy                  |
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05-20-2008, 06:43 PM
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good effort. keep writing.... |
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05-20-2008, 10:41 PM
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wa-alaikum-as-salam 1.gif ")1") and welcome to HG & Urdu Poets Clubzamanat waly sher khoob kahy aap ne. mager plz confirm kr deN k kya ye aap k apny sheir haiN, because 2nd ghazal to bohat mash'hoor-o-maqbool hy. aur ham bohat arse se sun aur paRh rahy haiN...
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05-21-2008, 03:42 PM
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very nice................ .............. |
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05-22-2008, 07:48 AM
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buhat khubsurat ghazal la jawab maqta k sath , nice effort ji |
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05-22-2008, 04:48 PM
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bahot acchey aise hi accha accha likhte rahiye -----------vibhavan |
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My peoms....plz ppl come and read them 
