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My Own Poetry....~*Dard May Pinhaan*~

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Old 10-06-2006, 08:20 AM
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~*Dard May Pinhaan*~




Dard May Pinhaan Hoon Hamesha Sey May Easey
Jeyse dard Khoon Ban Ke Aankhoon Sey Nikal Jaye


Tanha Ratoon May Hoon May Beqarar Etna
Khash Meri Rouh Ko Sukoon Mil Jaye


Ab Qadam Rakh Hi Diya Teri Rahoon May
Ab To Jaan Jaye Ya Ye Dil Jaye


Tu Aajaye Mere pass Udaas Lamhoon May
Ey Khuda meri duwaoon Ko Asar Mil Jaye


Yaad Karti Hoon May Furqat May Wisel Key Lamhein
Shayaid Iss Tarha Hi Mera Dil behal jaye


Gham Ki Ratoon May Kyon Etna Tarapta hai Dil
Ek Khushi Paney Ko Kyon Din Raat Mchalta Hai Dil


Mujhey Bhi Mil Jaye Gi Kabhi Manzil ,Ey Khan
Tu Ek Sarab Hai ,Kyon Ye Samajhta Hai Dil …!!



Poetry Written By Me

Miss Khan


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Old 10-06-2006, 08:28 AM
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Tu Aajaye Mere pass Udaas Lamhoon May
Ey Khuda meri duwaoon Ko Asar Mil Jaye

very nice miss khan ....bahut daad kubool kijiye
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Tanha Ratoon May Hoon May Beqarar Etna
Khash Meri Rouh Ko Sukoon Mil Jaye

Is Shair Mai'n Shayed Aap '' Itni '' Likhna Chahti Ho'n Gi... No Doubt Kay Aap Mai'n Likhnay Ki Salahiyat Mowjood Hay..Likhnay Ka Amal Jaari Rakhiye Insha Allah Mashq-e-Sukhan Jaari Rakhnay Say Aap Ki Shaairi Mai'n Mazeed Nikhaar Aa Jaey Ga.. Mairi Taraf Say Daad Qubool Kijiye...
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~*Dard May Pinhaan*~




Dard May Pinhaan Hoon Hamesha Sey May Easey
Jeyse dard Khoon Ban Ke Aankhoon Sey Nikal Jaye


Tanha Ratoon May Hoon May Beqarar Etna
Khash Meri Rouh Ko Sukoon Mil Jaye


Ab Qadam Rakh Hi Diya Teri Rahoon May
Ab To Jaan Jaye Ya Ye Dil Jaye


Tu Aajaye Mere pass Udaas Lamhoon May
Ey Khuda meri duwaoon Ko Asar Mil Jaye


Yaad Karti Hoon May Furqat May Wisel Key Lamhein
Shayaid Iss Tarha Hi Mera Dil behal jaye


Gham Ki Ratoon May Kyon Etna Tarapta hai Dil
Ek Khushi Paney Ko Kyon Din Raat Mchalta Hai Dil


Mujhey Bhi Mil Jaye Gi Kabhi Manzil ,Ey Khan
Tu Ek Sarab Hai ,Kyon Ye Samajhta Hai Dil …!!



Poetry Written By Me

Miss Khan





Miss Khan, beautifully written! :clap5

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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Salam....Thnx ap sab Ka Ke Ap sab ko meri poetry achi lagi......bye all take care Allah hafiz(dua)
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achi kawish hai...khayalat bohat achay haiN...likhti rahiye ke maiN aap maiN likhnay ki salahyataiN daikh rahi hooN

khush rahiye
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achhi thought hai miss khan bas zara fouran se peshter
tanha raaton main hoon main be qarar etnaaaaaa

is sher k etna ko itniiiiiiiiiiiiiii kardein to zabar10 kaam hojaaye
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Ab Qadam Rakh Hi Diya Teri Rahoon May
Ab To Jaan Jaye Ya Ye Dil Jaye

wah,,,,,,,,,,

bohat khoob.......

aap ki ghazal main khayalaat bohat achay hain.......

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