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my own new ghazal

This is a discussion on my own new ghazal within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ik Lamhe Ko Sahi Riha Qaid Say Sayyad To Kare Jo Sheher Ujde Hein Koi Unhein Aabad To Kare Hazeen ...


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ik Lamhe Ko Sahi Riha Qaid Say Sayyad To Kare

Jo Sheher Ujde Hein Koi Unhein Aabad To Kare
Hazeen Pur Malal Logon Ko Aaye Koi Shad To Kare

Mein Apni Uddan K Huner Ko Jaan Payoon Gi Magar
Ik Lamhe Ko Sahi Qaid Say Riha Sayyad To Kare

Mein Aik Pal Mein Usski Sari Khatayein Bhula Doon
Woh Aik Baar Khud Ko Bhula Mujhe Yaad To Kare

Ye Dard K Mousam Uss Ko Bhi Samjh Mein Aayein Gein
Surmayi Sham Mein Ik Din Woh Dil Ko Na Shad To Kare

La Haasil Safar Ki Azziyoton Ko Woh Tabhi Jaan Paye Ga
Meri Tarah Muhabat Mein Shaz Khud Ko Barbad To Kare
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DARD KI AIK ADHOORI NAZM

DARD KI AIK ADHOORI NAZM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
SHEHER E DIL K TALISM KADE
MEIN
GHUM KI MAKDDI
DARD KA JAAL BUNTI HAY!!!!!!!
TO
YAADON K DHUNDHLE AAYIONO KA RAABITA
ISS DUNIYA K HUNGAM SAY
KUCH DEIR K LIYE KATT SA JATA HAY
TAB
KHWABON KI UDDATI RAKH SAY
KHAMOSHI K CHEHRE GARD AALOOD HO JATE HEIN
AUR IN LAMHATMEIN
AANKHON K SEHRA MEIN
BARISHEIN APNA DEIRA DAAL DEITI HEIN!!!!!!!!
AUR BARAS BARAS K RUKNA BHOOL JATI HEIN
BHOOL JATI HEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wAH KIA ACHI TASWEER KASHI KI HAIN APNE HAYALAT KI.

JETAY RAHIN AUR APNI SHAIRI HUM SAY SHAIR KARTE RAHIN
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Wah Bohut Khoob

Janab Alfaz Aur Jomlon May Rawani Honi Chahain
Umeed Hain App Hamari Tarah Naraz Nahi Hongay.

Hg Per Sab Dost Aik Dosrey Ko Acha Mashwara Aur Isslah Kartey Rehtay Hain.
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DARD KI AIK ADHOORI NAZM

DARD KI AIK ADHOORI NAZM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
SHEHER E DIL K TALISM KADE
MEIN
GHUM KI MAKDDI
DARD KA JAAL BUNTI HAY!!!!!!!
TO
YAADON K DHUNDHLE AAYIONO KA RAABITA
ISS DUNIYA K HUNGAM SAY
KUCH DEIR K LIYE KATT SA JATA HAY
TAB
KHWABON KI UDDATI RAKH SAY
KHAMOSHI K CHEHRE GARD AALOOD HO JATE HEIN
AUR IN LAMHATMEIN
AANKHON K SEHRA MEIN
BARISHEIN APNA DEIRA DAAL DEITI HEIN!!!!!!!!
AUR BARAS BARAS K RUKNA BHOOL JATI HEIN
BHOOL JATI HEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Salam janab,
bohat khoob kahi kaawish...
meri janab se daad qabool kijiye..
khush rahein aur likhte rahien...
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apna khayal rakhyega
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