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RulesThis is a discussion on My Nazam within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Mairi chahat ko ruswa karke Maza aaya tujhe Wafa na aai to bewafai karke Maza aaya tujhe Maire aabaad ghar ...
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08-05-2008, 04:30 PM
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Mairi chahat ko ruswa karke Maza aaya tujhe Wafa na aai to bewafai karke Maza aaya tujhe Maire aabaad ghar ko barbaad karke Maza aaya tujhe Mairi mohabbat ki saza ban kar Tu mairi nas nas main basa Maire pyar ko jhutlaa kar Maza aaya tujhe Kisi ghair ki banhon main jaakar Tujhe najane kaisa sukoon mila Maire seenay ko jala kar Maza aaya tujhe Jafa bhi ki to ehsaan jata kar mujh par Jafa ki nahi wafa ki bhooki thi main Wafa ke badle jafa karke Maza aaya tujhe Pehle apnaya aur phir chordiya mujhe Khilone ki tarha Mujhse khel kar Maza aaya tujhe EK arsa beetgaya tujhe bhulane main Phir maire khayalon main aakar Maza aaya tujhe Maira dil tha pehle se hi tarpa howa Maire dil ko aur tarpa kar Maza aaya tujhe Mairi hansti khelti dunia main aakar Mairi dunia ko tabah karke Maza aaya tujhe!
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08-05-2008, 04:50 PM
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nice 1 dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,, |
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08-05-2008, 05:14 PM
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wah achhi nazm hai magar har aazaad nazm ka matlab yeh nahin hota ke aap wazan(rythm) ka kuch khayal hi na rakhen meri raaye hai ke aap baRe shora ki aazaad nazmein parhen ghaur se, matlab un ke wazan par ghaur karte hue, phir aap ki nazmgui improve karti jaayegi. kiun kay aap kay khayaal bht achhay hain aur aap ko yeh bhi pata hai ke alfaaz kis tarha chune jaate hain likhti rahen inshallah bht achhi ho jaayegi.
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08-05-2008, 06:31 PM
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actually is jagah mujhe bhi kuch sahi na laga Jafa bhi ki to ehsaan jata kar mujh par Jafa ki nahi wafa ki bhooki thi main par isse kaise sahi karoon samjh na aaya main INSHALLAH ab isse bhi ziada acha likhne ki koshsih karoongi theek tarah se 1.gif ")1") thank u so much once again. |
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08-05-2008, 06:31 PM
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08-05-2008, 06:42 PM
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. Nice 
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08-05-2008, 07:12 PM
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mujhe thoRa sa darr lag raha tha aap ko advice dete hue. kahin aap bura na maan jaayen. but thank God aap apnay jaisi hain, tanqeed ko sahi nigaah se dekhti hain. mujhe likhne ki zyada aadat nahin hai magar parhne ki bht hai, is liye kuch baaten samajh mein aati hain. thak u Last edited by mobi91; 08-05-2008 at 08:09 PM. |
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08-05-2008, 07:14 PM
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superb bohat achi nazam hai thx 4 share wid us
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