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This is a discussion on My nazam... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Kitni akeli hoon main Maira dil jaanta hai Kitna udaas hai maira mann Maira dil jaanta hai Kitni andheri hai ...
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| Kitni akeli hoon main Maira dil jaanta hai Kitna udaas hai maira mann Maira dil jaanta hai Kitni andheri hai ye raat Maira dil jaanta hai Kitna hai woh bewafa log kia jaane Ye to bas maira dil jaanta hai Kaise raat katti hai mairi Kaise din guzarta hai maira Usse kia maloom Kitna main tarapti hoon uske liye Koi bhi nahi jaanta Ye to bas maira dil jaanta hai Koi kia samjhe is dard-e-dil ko Hai kitna dard is seenay main Sirf maira dil jaanta hai!
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#2
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| achi koshish hai... rawani or wazan me behtri ki gunjaish hia...koshish karti rahen...inshAllah jald acha likhney lagen gi... ![]()
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Last edited by Princess Of Hearts; 05-08-2008 at 12:56 PM. |
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#4
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| Aur dilon key bhaed OOPER wala ... achi kavish rahee likhti rahyeh share karti rahyeh
__________________ ![]() H'am Woh Saya'h Bakht Hain Tariq! K Shehar Main Jo Kholein Dukan Qaf'an Ki Toh Loag Marna He Chor Dain |
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#5
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| good buhut achi nazm hy aap ki |
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#6
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| Thank u................... ....... |
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#8
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| very very nice................ ....... |
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#9
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| Ji haan Bohat achhi nazam hay lakin bilkul lagta hay ke aik anari banday nay likhi hay....is ke liay aap aur bhi pukhtagi chahiay aur DARD....jab aap ko sahi dard se wasta paray gaa to aap ki yeh nazam aur bhi achhi ho jaay gi. |