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My nazam...

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Old 05-08-2008, 12:44 PM
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Kitni akeli hoon main
Maira dil jaanta hai

Kitna udaas hai maira mann
Maira dil jaanta hai

Kitni andheri hai ye raat
Maira dil jaanta hai

Kitna hai woh bewafa log kia jaane
Ye to bas maira dil jaanta hai

Kaise raat katti hai mairi
Kaise din guzarta hai maira

Usse kia maloom
Kitna main tarapti hoon uske liye
Koi bhi nahi jaanta
Ye to bas maira dil jaanta hai

Koi kia samjhe is dard-e-dil ko
Hai kitna dard is seenay main
Sirf maira dil jaanta hai!
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achi koshish hai...
rawani or wazan me behtri ki gunjaish hia...koshish karti rahen...inshAllah jald acha likhney lagen gi...
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achi koshish hai...
rawani or wazan me behtri ki gunjaish hia...koshish karti rahen...inshAllah jald acha likhney lagen gi...
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Aur dilon key bhaed OOPER wala ... achi kavish rahee likhti rahyeh share karti rahyeh
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buhut achi nazm hy aap ki
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very very nice................ .......
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Ji haan Bohat achhi nazam hay lakin bilkul lagta hay ke aik anari banday nay likhi hay....is ke liay aap aur bhi pukhtagi chahiay aur DARD....jab aap ko sahi dard se wasta paray gaa to aap ki yeh nazam aur bhi achhi ho jaay gi.
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