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This is a discussion on My Fresh Ghazal within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Salaam ! I joined the forum long time ago but could'nt post much. Hereby I am gonna post one of ...
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#1
05-10-2008, 10:16 AM
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Salaam ! I joined the forum long time ago but could'nt post much. Hereby I am gonna post one of my fresh ghazal... I hope to get some response from all the friends of this forum. 1... Gila tab ho, jab main sahooN nahin .... Tojhay kya gila, jo kahooN nahin 2... Khood hee bakhsh dee, haq-e-maasiyat .... Ab ye hokm, hadd say baRhooN nahin 3... Teray hijr main chalooN dasht bhar .... Kabhee apnay g'har main, p'hirooN nahin 4...Mazaa aa rahaa hai jo dard ka .... To ye kaisay ho k haNsooN nahin 5... Teri yaad dill say widaa karoon .... HaaN agar k jab main rahooN nahin 6... Tojhay shokr hai, samajh aa gayi .... Na ho ishq, p'hir bhee sokooN nahin 7... Bhalaa kaisay niklay bhaRaas bhee .... Aur main gheebatain bhee karooN nahin 8... Jo hareef maira naheef ho .... Mojhay izn hai k laRooN nahin 9... Main nay khooN say lik'hee hai ye ghazal .... Wo ye chaahtaa hai paRhooN nahin waiting for the comments from all the friends of this forum. Apni duaaon main yaad rak'hiye ga. Allah Haafiz Saadiq
__________________ Tomhaara Dard Amaanat Hai, Zimmay Daari Hai Duaa Karo Tera Saadiq, Ameen Ho Jaaye         |
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#2
05-10-2008, 10:30 AM
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wa-alaikum-as-salam Sadiq Sahab 1.gif ")1") aap ko aik taweel arsy baad yahaN dekha! so HG ki janib se aap ko is mehfil meiN wapsi pr aik bar phir khush-aamadeed... umeed hy k hmaiN yahaN aik dusry se kafi kuch seekhny ko mily ga.ab aaty haiN aap ki ghazal ki taraf, jnab kya khoob matla hy bohat khoob... aur kya umda sheir hy... hansuN nahiN.... baei bohat mukhtalif zaviy se dekha hy, bohat khob, aur 6th sheir to ji kamaal hy, bohat si daad is sheir k liay, wahhh... baei maqta bhi khoob hi kaha hy, zabardast.... meri janib se bohat si daad is achi ghazal ki nazr, qubool kreN, sirf dusra aur satweN sheir k dusry misroN k aaghaz meiN aik aadh rukan wazn se kam ho raha hy... aik bar nazr-e-sani kr lijiay ga. aap ki is umda ghazal ko paRh kr aap ki baqi shairi paRhny ka bhi ishtiaq ho gya hy, so umeed hy aap apna kalam share krty raheN gy, Allah Taala aap ko aur ziada nawazy, khush raheN aabad raheN... duago faizan
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 05-10-2008 at 10:52 AM. |
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#3
05-10-2008, 12:08 PM
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v nice................ ........khush rahian |
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#4
05-10-2008, 01:50 PM
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welcome back janab acha likhty hain aap likhty rahaiye or khush rahiye |
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#5
05-10-2008, 02:29 PM
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very nice................ ......... |
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#6
05-10-2008, 07:22 PM
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 wahhhhhh... kia hi umda ghazal kahi aapne... bhaee wah.. bohat si dad qubool kijiye humari janib say.. baqi Faizan ne jo points bataye.. unsay maiN bhi muttafiq hooN.. zara phir say daikh lijiye.. khush rahiye
__________________  . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! |
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#7
05-12-2008, 10:15 AM
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Salaam ! Thank u so much friends..... for such warm welcome and appreciaton... I am honoured. Special thanks to Wandering Thoughts.... Yasmin Ahmad... Ayesha Baig.... Sohail2008 and Kanch Ki Mehroo for their sweet comments and replies. Will try to post something soon. Allah Haafiz Saadiq !
__________________ Tomhaara Dard Amaanat Hai, Zimmay Daari Hai Duaa Karo Tera Saadiq, Ameen Ho Jaaye |
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#8
05-12-2008, 10:32 AM
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buhat khooob ...her shair aik se bhar ke aik hai |
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