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ASLAM O ALIKUM
YEH MERI PEHLI POETRY HAI MAINAY LIKHI HAI
MERI URDU BOHAT KHARAB HAI
PLZZ AP IS MAIN GHLTIYAN BATAEIN
APKE COMMENTS KA INTEZAR HAI
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buhat achi kawish hai areeba
keep it up
Khuda Kare zore qalam or ziyaada
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wahhhh.. kya kehnay..Poet's Club mein bohat sa warm

bohat acha qitta kaha.. jitni aap ki umar darj hai .. agar itni hi hai .. to phir to aap ne aur bhi kamal likha.. likhti rahiye.. ke aap mein qabliyat hai.. MashaAllah..

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bohat acha qitta kaha.. jitni aap ki umar darj hai .. agar itni hi hai .. to phir to aap ne aur bhi kamal likha.. likhti rahiye.. ke aap mein qabliyat hai.. MashaAllah..

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URDU POET CLUB main khush aamdeed Areeba saaheba,
bahot khoobsurat qitta kaha hai aap ne,aor jesa ke aap ne bataya yeh aap ki pehli kaawish hai to us aetabaar se aor bhi achha hai,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye,
aap main yaqeenan likhney ki salaahiyat mojood hai,so mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,
bahot khush rahiye,
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URDU POET CLUB main khush aamdeed Areeba saaheba,
bahot khoobsurat qitta kaha hai aap ne,aor jesa ke aap ne bataya yeh aap ki pehli kaawish hai to us aetabaar se aor bhi achha hai,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye,
aap main yaqeenan likhney ki salaahiyat mojood hai,so mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,
bahot khush rahiye,
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buhat hee khoob kia kehny

tusi chha gaye oo ji

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AOA,

Achhi kawish hay Areeba, jaisa kay yeh app ki pehli koshish hay to mera mashwara yeh hay kay isay aakhri koshish mat baniye ga, likhti rahiye aur hum say share karti rahiye ga.

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ok thnxxxxxxxx sabh ka thnx alot
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