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My 1st Poetry

This is a discussion on My 1st Poetry within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by aryan bahut hi achhi sharing hai gul, designing aur poetry dono bahut hi achhi hain pahli koshish ...


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Old 05-04-2008, 06:03 PM
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bahut hi achhi sharing hai gul, designing aur poetry dono bahut hi achhi hain

pahli koshish bahut hi achhi hai tumhari, sukhangoi ka hunar aur nikharta jayega sirf kuchh tabdeeli karti rahna.

main ek baat kahoon


nikal hi aati hai kahin na kahin se gunzaish koi
kisi ka bhi pyar aakhiri nahi hota hai
ok thnxxx

apkoi baat mat kahaen to accha hogha
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very nice and a nice art work.
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Bohat khoob!
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bohat zabardast areeba ist attempt k lehaz sey tu excellent

ghalti tu shayad koi nahe per mostly shaair apna takhallus pehley misray mai use nahe kertey hain
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ok thnxxxxxa lot edi
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