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RulesThis is a discussion on Mushtarika Ghazal... Basit & Shagufta..Mehwar Sey Hatna Gawara Nahi Hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As'salam O Alaikum, ye ghazal Basit nay likhi thi arsa pehley ... isi pe chand sher aise hi likh daley ...
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03-22-2006, 02:52 PM
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As'salam O Alaikum, ye ghazal Basit nay likhi thi arsa pehley ... isi pe chand sher aise hi likh daley hain ... aap isey mushtarika ghazal keh saktey hain 1.gif ")1") mehwar sey hatna gawara nahi hai milna ab tum sey dobara nahi hai jhuk jain ya un k qadmoo.n parain hum chalan ye kisi tour humara nahi hai Tum apni eenayat sanbhaley hi rakho dum-e akhir shouq-e sahara nahi hai tumanna tu hum nay bhi sahil ki kee thi magar qismatoo.n main kinara nahi hai dhondha tamam um'r mil k nahi diya aasman pe merey naam ka tara nahi hai ------------- Basit Habib dill k phapholey ko nishter chobo dain faqat is k koi bhi chara nahi hai qasam hai Khuda ki bohat tum hasee.n ho haqeeqat hai ye ista'ara nahi hai usey dekh loon main kisi sang hanstey merey dill ko itna bhi yara nahi hai hijr ki chokhat pe dill bethey bethey khudi mar gaya main nay mara nahi hai kaha us nay mujh sey tha dill ki ye babat ye saarey ka sara tumhara nahi hai Suno Larkiyoo tum zara door rehna ye shohar hai mera kunwara nahi hai ------------- Shagufta Basit
__________________ hai zindagi sey nibah mumkin!!!! Main zindagi sey nibha rahi hoon Hai us nay pocha udaas ho tum! main tunziya muskura rahi hoon Shagufta Basit                  |
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#2
03-22-2006, 03:34 PM
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Waah Kia Kahneyn Bhabii Behnaa Allah Jee Sey Duaa Sadda Hastii Muskuratii Rahey Aameen
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03-22-2006, 03:44 PM
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buhat khubsurat andaz mai ap ne un ki ghazal ko aagein tak likha  buhat sari dad qabool farmaein  khush rahaein  
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#4
03-22-2006, 04:11 PM
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hamein to aakhri shair achha laga bus ............ kya warning di hai shayeraana andaaz mein  hijr ki chokhat pe dill bethey bethey khudi mar gaya main nay mara nahi hai zabardast shair hai
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#5
03-22-2006, 04:24 PM
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Buhat achay ji.. laikin iss misray mein garbar hay... faqat is k koi bhi chara nahi hai issko aisay kerlein faqat is k siwa koi bhi chara nahi hai ya phir siwa is k koi bhi chara nahi hai
__________________ I am a hardworker, I hardly work  |
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03-22-2006, 04:50 PM
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Suno Larkiyoo tum zara door rehna ye shohar hai mera kunwara nahi hai Wah AAPI , yahni k aab shairi mein bhi dhamkiyaaN aur badmashi shorouh...hahahahah bohat acha ralli milli kavish hai  Daad Qabool kijiay @};- Regards
__________________ ISS LIAY KOI ZIADAA NAHI RUKKTA HAI YAHAN....... LOWG KEHTAY HEIN MERAY DIL PE TERA SAYA HAI ! |
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03-22-2006, 04:57 PM
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wah wah bht hi khoob api  kamal ki gazal likhe ha kush rehe ap
__________________  No Body Is Perfect  I Am No Body  |
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03-22-2006, 05:45 PM
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Mushtarika Ghazal... Basit & Shagufta..Mehwar Sey Hatna Gawara Nahi Hai 
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