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Us ki jhuki hui palkoon ki hayaa nain
Humain jazbaat ki row main behnay na dia

<!--QuoteBegin-Shagufta Saleemec 13 2003, 01:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Shagufta Saleem @ Dec 13 2003, 01:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> AOA, chand aashaar meri taraf sey bhi

"JAAN KAR HUM NAY UNHAIN NA MEHAERBAA>N REHNEY DIYA"
wo they is main khush tu un ko shadmaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay chehrey per jami sab dhool tu dho di magar
dill pe teri bewafaai ka nishaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay sari chahatai.n unhi ko dey daalee.n magar
Aap apney app ko shola bajaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay apney dill ki sab baagai.n thama di thee.n usey
Haan magar zehan o fikar ka karwaa.n rehney diya

waqt nay tu thaan li thi hum ko khaak-aster karey
Per kisi ki yaad nay hum ko jawaa.n rehney diya

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Shagufta Saleem [/b][/quote]
wah shugufta je.. buhtu Khoobsoorat ashaar haiN....
beher meiN likhay gaye.... aur buhut Khoob likhay gaye

KHush rahaye (f)

<!--QuoteBegin-Frozen Tearsec 15 2003, 12:14 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Frozen Tears @ Dec 15 2003, 12:14 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Shagufta Saleemec 13 2003, 01:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Shagufta Saleem @ Dec 13 2003, 01:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> AOA, chand aashaar meri taraf sey bhi

"JAAN KAR HUM NAY UNHAIN NA MEHAERBAA>N REHNEY DIYA"
wo they is main khush tu un ko shadmaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay chehrey per jami sab dhool tu dho di magar
dill pe teri bewafaai ka nishaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay sari chahatai.n unhi ko dey daalee.n magar
Aap apney app ko shola bajaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay apney dill ki sab baagai.n thama di thee.n usey
Haan magar zehan o fikar ka karwaa.n rehney diya

waqt nay tu thaan li thi hum ko khaak-aster karey
Per kisi ki yaad nay hum ko jawaa.n rehney diya

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Shagufta Saleem [/b][/quote]
wah shugufta je.. buhtu Khoobsoorat ashaar haiN....
beher meiN likhay gaye.... aur buhut Khoob likhay gaye

KHush rahaye (f) [/b][/quote]
shukria shukria frozen tears , pehli baar kuch wazan main likha ha main na /happy

khush raheye /happy

<!--QuoteBegin-danmurfiec 13 2003, 04:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (danmurfi @ Dec 13 2003, 04:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> /aoa

bohut umdaaa bohut achchey...qafiya wazan aur behar sari cheezon ka khayal rakhtey huwe achchi ghazal pesh ki hai...Keep it up

Allah hafiz [/b][/quote]
thanks Danmurfi, hosla afzaai ka bohat shukria

khush raheye /happy

<!--QuoteBegin-Shagufta Saleemec 13 2003, 01:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Shagufta Saleem @ Dec 13 2003, 01:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> AOA, chand aashaar meri taraf sey bhi

"JAAN KAR HUM NAY UNHAIN NA MEHAERBAA>N REHNEY DIYA"
wo they is main khush tu un ko shadmaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay chehrey per jami sab dhool tu dho di magar
dill pe teri bewafaai ka nishaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay sari chahatai.n unhi ko dey daalee.n magar
Aap apney app ko shola bajaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay apney dill ki sab baagai.n thama di thee.n usey
Haan magar zehan o fikar ka karwaa.n rehney diya

waqt nay tu thaan li thi hum ko khaak-aster karey
Per kisi ki yaad nay hum ko jawaa.n rehney diya

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Shagufta Saleem [/b][/quote]
Bohat Umda Shagufta jee. Really impressed by ur talent.
Keep writing,
Aatif

/hammer /hammer >>hum shamat

hum phali dafa idhar
kuch shayri ki bhi /mast

kitnay hi ehsan un kay lay sakty thy hum
jaan kar hum nay unhain na mehrban rehny dia

har shakas ko bata kar hasil to hona kuch nahin
jo bhi thy qissay gum un ko neha'n rehny dia

sub ki baten sun kar hum khamosh rahty thy magar
is chak garyban ko na kabhi pinha'n rehny dia

samny unky namazy ishq un ki phar lety magar
aik jumbish-e-mijgan nay hukmy azan rehny dia

<!--QuoteBegin-danmurfiec 14 2003, 07:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (danmurfi @ Dec 14 2003, 07:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> /aoa

aik aur lijeye

Haal-e-dil ashaar ki soorat bayaan to kar diya
kon tha in mein mukhatib, yeh nihaan rehney diya

Allah hafiz [/b][/quote]
wonderful...bohat umda!

<!--QuoteBegin-tanha_musafirec 15 2003, 09:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (tanha_musafir @ Dec 15 2003, 09:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Shagufta Saleemec 13 2003, 01:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Shagufta Saleem @ Dec 13 2003, 01:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> AOA, chand aashaar meri taraf sey bhi

"JAAN KAR HUM NAY UNHAIN NA MEHAERBAA>N REHNEY DIYA"
wo they is main khush tu un ko shadmaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay chehrey per jami sab dhool tu dho di magar
dill pe teri bewafaai ka nishaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay sari chahatai.n unhi ko dey daalee.n magar
Aap apney app ko shola bajaa.n rehney diya

Hum nay apney dill ki sab baagai.n thama di thee.n usey
Haan magar zehan o fikar ka karwaa.n rehney diya

waqt nay tu thaan li thi hum ko khaak-aster karey
Per kisi ki yaad nay hum ko jawaa.n rehney diya

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Shagufta Saleem [/b][/quote]
Bohat Umda Shagufta jee. Really impressed by ur talent.
Keep writing,
Aatif [/b][/quote]
AOA Aatif bhai, app aur meri ghazal ki tareef :yessir :yessir bakhuda bara hosla bandha ha mera

khush rahee /happy