Urdu Poetry Forum

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Yaad ke saarey mahal ham ney gira daley magar
aas ka tha aik kachcha sa makaan`, rehney diya

Allah hafiz

kiya huwa gar ussnay humay qadardaan na hoonay diya
jaan kar humnay unhay na meharbaan rehnay diya

ali-

sabt unn ki bewafai ka nishan rehne diya
jaan kar humnay unhay na meharbaan rehnay diya

sooiyan jo palkoon main theen,woh to chupani hi parin
daagh ik dill ka magar humm ne ayaan rehne diya

khol ke bethay the hum jub hisab-e-zindagi
soch ke kuch ishq ka sod-o-zian rehne dia

mausam to aaatay rahe, chatki na koi bhi kali
tere bin Amir ne har rut ko khizan rehne dia

Amir

salam!

zindagi nay hum ko asbab-e-safar to day dia
par safar main maziloon ka rasta rehnay dia

Bina Ahmed.

hum bhee kuch likhain

~teri yaad keh madham diye kee lau se
hum ne dil keh her konay ko roshan rehnay diya~


ab pata nahin sahih hay nahin

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[color=blue]to sir jee kab aa rahy hiaN aap? /happy

hum ko jis ki doosti per naz tha uss shaks nay
iss shikasta zaat ko, uljha hoa rehnay dia

<!--QuoteBegin-~*Atta*~ec 10 2003, 01:36 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (~*Atta*~ @ Dec 10 2003, 01:36 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Jaan ker ham ney unhei'n naa-meherbaa'n rehnay diyaa
KHud pay guzry daastaaN ko daastaaN rehnay diya

Apni her daastaan pe hum un say kiya gila karein
saaray sitam sah ker us ko ba'khabar rehnay diya



pata nahi kaisay lagay ga, lekin "fil-badee" shair may aisa hee hota hai. sirf try kee hai, baaqi aap doston ki marzi, is shair ko ghazal may shaamil karein ya na karein.

waisay bohat acha laga participate ker kay.

aap ka bohat bohat shukriya,

Atta/* [/b][/quote]
Bhai Atta aap kay sher main kafiya theik nahin hai. MehrbaaN kee tarz per bandhna hai kafiya jaisay dastaaN, bad-gumaN etc.

Dobara koshish karain.
Aatif