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This is a discussion on Mushtarika.. Aatif Saeed, Aik Lamha, Mehru (Part 1) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam-0-Alaikum SathioN... @};-- Kuch Arse pehlay Aaatif Bhai, Mein , aur Mehru nay aik mushtarika ghazal kahi thi... uss ghazal ...
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| Assalam-0-Alaikum SathioN... @};-- Kuch Arse pehlay Aaatif Bhai, Mein , aur Mehru nay aik mushtarika ghazal kahi thi... uss ghazal ka misra-i-tarhaa ye tha Samnay beitha tha meray, aur wo mera na tha waisay tou itna asaan nahin lag raha tha... laikin Jab shayer hazraat shuru huway.. .tou poooori raat guzar gayee... laikin ghazal kay shair sarzad hotay rahay... ussi halat mein ye asha'ar aap ki khidmat mein paish-i-khidmat heiN... ShairouN ko khaliq ko aap uss ka color se pehchan saktay heiN.. Aatif Sayeed.... Blue Aik Lamha.... Magenta Mehrun ....... Red kahin aisa bhi huwa kay aik misra kisi ka.. aur dooosra kisi aur ka... wahaN bhi aisa hi kiya gaya hay.... ab iss taveeel mushtarika ghazal ka pehla hissa mulahiza kijiye... ![]() |
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#2
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| buhat khoob........... buhat lutf ayea pher ker......her shair per daad wasool kijiye ga app teeno....... teen rangoon ney hi qoso qaza k sath rangoon ka maza dey diya. part 2 ka intezaar rahey ga.
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#3
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| khoobsoorat janab ..@};- aap teenoo'N Sho'ra daad quboool kijiay ...@};- khush rahiay ..@};-
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| wah.....bohut khub ghazal takhliq howi hai .....app teeno'n ko dhair sari daad meri taraf say .......@};- ![]() Khush Rahiyea ![]()
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#5
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| bauhat hee khoobsurat likha hai Thanx 4 sharing jee.................
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| roman urdu mein likh de plzzzzzzzzzzzzz..... ... plzzzzzzz....... plzzzzzzzz.......... ...
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#7
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| nice post all three of you!! thanks for sharing |
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#8
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| wahhhhhhh.. Behad khoob.. tamam ashaar hi barhiya hein.. majmoee tor per eik behtreen ghazal rahi .. iss kamyabi per..aap teeno ki khidmat mein.. dhairo'n mubarakbaad.. Pesh kernay ka Behad Shukria.. @};- wafa aur dua ke saath withlove @};-
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