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Mushtarika.. Aatif Saeed, Aik Lamha, Mehru (Part 1)

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Thanx Tanhayee... @};-
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yeh judai jan lewa hadsa bann jaye gi
tum se bichre the to hum ne istarha socha na tha

yeh meri ghar mojoodgi mei'n yahan to bare bare kaam ho gaye .."smile is qadar khoobsurat ghazal kehne per aap teeno'n dhair sari daad qubool karein
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Kuch Arse pehlay Aaatif Bhai, Mein , aur Mehru nay aik mushtarika ghazal kahi thi...

uss ghazal ka misra-i-tarhaa ye tha


Samnay beitha tha meray, aur wo mera na tha

waisay tou itna asaan nahin lag raha tha... laikin Jab shayer hazraat shuru huway.. .tou poooori raat guzar gayee... laikin ghazal kay shair sarzad hotay rahay...

ussi halat mein ye asha'ar aap ki khidmat mein paish-i-khidmat heiN...

ShairouN ko khaliq ko aap uss ka color se pehchan saktay heiN..

Aatif Sayeed.... Blue

Aik Lamha.... Magenta

Mehrun ....... Red

kahin aisa bhi huwa kay aik misra kisi ka.. aur dooosra kisi aur ka... wahaN bhi aisa hi kiya gaya hay....

ab iss taveeel mushtarika ghazal ka pehla hissa mulahiza kijiye...

wahhhhhhhhh janab buhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut zabardast

mehroo ka ye shear to buhuuuuuut hi umda laga

tab talak qaaim rahi goyai meri is jaga
jab talak sachai ka naghma yahan gaya na tha>-v
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wow its really awesome ....
Weldone all

Moin is terah poetry kerna "aik game hooti hai "
yaad nahen aa raha
senior high skool main ye game kheltey the
is terah se poetry kerney ko kia kehtey hein ??

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ab iss taveeel mushtarika ghazal ka pehla hissa mulahiza kijiye...
Asslamo alikum wahhh bohut khoon sir ji moin bhai nad mehroo
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bohat bohat shukriya aap tamaam sathiyoN ka.. ke apko humari yeh kaawish pasand aai @};-

khush rahiye
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