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**zain** · #61 11-24-2006, 10:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Zaib.

yaha per buhat sanjedah sanjedah shairi hoo rahe hy au mashah'Allah buhat ache hoo rahe hy main kuch muazahiya shairi kerlaita hoon maira yay misrah perah ker dill buhat machal raha hy muzahiya kahny ko agher allow hy tou kahdoon?

Zaib bhaahi,is baar to shaaid aap ko itna waqt na mil sakey ke aap muqaabala main shirkat kar sakain,kiyoon ke 25/11 ko yeh thread close ho jaaye ga,albata hamain bahot khushi ho gi agar aap ghazal kahain,aor ham se share karain to,aor saath hi yeh darkhawaast bhi zaroor karna chaahata hoon ke PLEASE agley maah ke muqaabala main zaroor shirkat kijiye,jo ke INSHA ALLAH 1st dec ko shuru ho ga,hamain aap ko yahaan dekh kar be had khushi ho gi,
meri ghazal ko saraahaney aor hosla afzaai ke liye bhi mamnoon hoon,
bahot khush rahiye,

**Zaib.** · #62 11-24-2006, 10:49 PM

sahi kah rahay hoo zain insha'Allah kosis keroon ga

**Pehli``Barish** · #63 11-24-2006, 11:47 PM

lucky libra , asif shahzad, my dear sis haya ji , saahir , zain ji, zaib.....
meri hosla afzai k liye aap sab ka bahat shukriya.......
our zain aap ka khas tour per thanks q k meri correction ki aap ny.
main ny edit kar k " " laga kar dobara post kar di hai ........
ak dafa phir sab ka bahat bahat shukriya.........

**asif shahzad** · #64 11-25-2006, 11:32 AM

**kanwal Hussain** · #65 11-25-2006, 12:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by luckylibra

bohat boht acha likha hai aap nay kanwal sahiba really aap nay bohat boht acha likha hai yaqeen kerin koi alfaaz nahi mil rehay kay jiss say main aap ki is lazwal kawish ki tareef ker sakoon to is liye inhin alfaaz say guzara kerin
but after all ghazal waqaiy bohat achi thi her shair aik say bher kay tha her shair doosraay say ziada ghehra ore acha laga wish you best of luck

bohat bohat ziada duaaon kay sath
jahan rahin bohat ziada khush rahin
imran

Bohat hi shukria Imran sb@};-
ye sab aap ka hussan-e-nazar hai aur kuch bhi nahin...behadd shukar guzar hon@};-

**kanwal Hussain** · #66 11-25-2006, 02:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pehli``Barish

wah bahat he khubsurat ghzal aapki
itni achi ghazal likhny per bahat bahat daad qubool kijiye
khush rhaiye...........

Zarah nawazi k liye behadd shuker guzar hon@};-

**kanwal Hussain** · #67 11-25-2006, 02:34 PM

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Originally Posted by haya n

Masha Allah Kiya Khoob Likhti Hai'n Aap...Aap Ki Yeh Tarhi Ghazal Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aai..Har Shair Hi Aap Nay Bouhat Behtreen Likha Hay...Mairi Taraf Say Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye Is Behtreen Ghazal Kay Liye...

Haya payri salam@};-
aap k inn alfaz ne meray aam se lafzon ko rangon se aashnaee di hai lihaza......
main jitna bhi shukriya ada keron kam hai @};-
bohat khush raho aabad raho@};-

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