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This is a discussion on Muqabla-e-Tarahi ghazal.. May-08 within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; is mah muqabla-e-ghazal goi k liye jo misra-e-tarah diya ja raha hai.. woh hai; Wafa mai ab yeh hunar ikhtiyaar ...
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#1
05-01-2008, 07:15 PM
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 is mah muqabla-e-ghazal goi k liye jo misra-e-tarah diya ja raha hai.. woh hai; Wafa mai ab yeh hunar ikhtiyaar karna hai~.. Qawafi: ikhtiyar, intazar, aitbar, bay qarar, shumar, sharmsar waghaira Radeef: karna hai.. aur is behr k arkaan khuch youN haiN: mfa - ilun - fa'ila - tun - mfa - ilun - fa-lun yaani k: wfa - m'ab - y'h'nr - ikh - t'ya - r'kr - na - hy aap apni kawishat 21st May tak isi thread maiN share kar saktay haiN.. Note: misra-e-tarah ko girah lagana zaroori hai.. aisi ghazal ko jismaiN misra-e-tarah ko girah na lagai gai, muqablay say kharij kar diya jaye ga.. khush rahiye HG Administration.
__________________  . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 05-08-2008 at 01:32 PM.        |
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05-02-2008, 12:24 PM
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wafa meiN ab ye huner ikhtyaar krna hy Mehroo Sahiba! acha misra chuna hy terhi ghazal k liay! umeedkrty haiN k is bar bhi achi achi ghazleN paRhny ko mileN gi. mery zehn meiN bhi alfaaz gardish meiN aa rahy haiN...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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05-02-2008, 03:50 PM
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Mehroo Sahiba Meherbani Farma Ker Yeh Wazeh Kardein K Ghazal Ko Girah Lagane Se Kia Muraad Hai?apki Meherbani Hugi Apna Khayal Rakhyega |
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05-02-2008, 04:00 PM
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Cute Mary jee "giraah lagaane" se muraad hai ke aap kii ghazal may kisi aik shair may tarhii micra aanaa zaruurii hai. Micaal ke taur per: Jigar pe zaKhm bhii khaakar maiN muskuraaooNga "Wafa may ab yeh hunar iKhtiyaar kerna hai" Yeh ooper wala shair girah ka shair huva. MuKhlic, Qassim Mirza Ali :Qassim:
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05-04-2008, 04:23 PM
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thnx sir main is baar bbhi,,,koshish karu gi k achi ghazal pesh kar sakoun,,,plz aap sab bhi mery liye dua kijyee ga aur vote bhii |
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05-07-2008, 09:10 PM
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Salamz, Janab yeh to baayeen keh Ghazal kis thread ya email address per post karni hai? Waheed Akhtar Wahid |
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05-08-2008, 06:45 AM
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As-Salam-Alaikum Mohtarma "kanch ki mehroo", Moadbana arz hai keh agar hum misra-tarah ko kuch istarah badal dain to wazan aur bahar kay hisaab say behtar ho jaye ga. Wafa mai ab to yeh hunar ikhtiyaar karna hai Yah phir Wafa mai hum nain yeh hunar ikhtiyaar karna hai Khair Andesh, Waheed Akhtar Wahid |
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05-08-2008, 07:08 AM
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1.gif ")1") jnab aap ne ghazal isi thread meiN post krni hy, final date k bad sab members ki ghazloN ko akaTha kr k aik naei thread meiN Judges ki marking k liay rkha ja'ay ga. so aap apni ghazal isi thread meiN post kreN gy
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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05-08-2008, 07:42 AM
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ager wazn k hawaly se dekha ja'ay to mera hkyal hy misra mukamal hy... aap aik bar phir is ka wazn check kr leN... ager maiN is misry ki behr ki taqtee likh duN to shayad aap ko samajhny meiN aasani ho saky... is misry ki taqtee kuch youN hy: mfa - ilun - fa'ila - tun - mfa - ilun - fa-lun yaani k: wfa - m'ab - y'h'nr - ikh - t'ya - r'kr - na - hy mera khyal hy k ab aap ko is misry ka wazn krny meiN aasani rahy gi (sorry Mehroo Sahiba ki jaga maiN reply kr raha huN... chuNkay wo bhi kuch masroof haiN in dinoN to socha maiN hi ye point clear kr duN...)
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 05-08-2008 at 07:44 AM. |
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05-08-2008, 08:09 AM
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As-Salam-Alaikum, Bohat shukria tafseel ka. Main is ko kissi aur bahar per daikh raha tha. Meri aik suggestion hai, ainda kissisi tarah-misra kay saath agar us ki bahar bhe day diya karain to khoob ho ga kyoon keh yeh laazmi nahin keh har shair tmaam behron say ashna how. Khair Andesh, Waheed Akhtar Wahid |
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