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wah boht "lazeez" behs paRhnay ko mili....
bahar haal aik baat hay........ agar singing kay tareeqay say wazn sahih ho sakta hay to boht achi baat hay lekan mera mashwara hay ke tarz banatay huay asatiza-e-ghazal ko hi zehn mein rakhna chahiay na ke malkoo aor Jazzi B ko .....
maslan

GuloN mein rang bharay bad-e-naubahar chalay.

kiya hay piar jisay ham nay zindgi ki tarah
wo aashna bhi mila ham say ajnabi ki tarah

buray naseeb meray vairi hoya piar mera
nazar mila kay koi lay gya qrar mera.

kabhi kaha na kisi say teray fsanay ko
najanay kaisay khabar ho gai zmanay ko.

to kia yeh tay hay ke ab umr bhar nahin milna
to phir yeh umr bhi kiooN tum say gar nahin milna.

waghera waghera

khush rahiay aor aisay hi khush kartay rahiay....
aap ka bilkul apna
azam

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bohat achi baat ki aap nain azam sb. Agar JazziB ya Malkoo ko ghazal liktay wqat zahan main rakha jaye ga to ghazal ka PHALOODA ban jaye ga aur likki gayee ghazaal kuch aissi ho ge

AaaAAAA, Thaaa, hummm, pyaaaar hai
eee, cheeen, paaaan, thusss, aaaj kis ka intzaar hai


aik misra lamba, aik chota aur bay maani

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Waheed Akhtar Wahid
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Iss micre ka naam hai Behr Mujtas Musamman Makhbuun Maqsuur aur iss ka wazn kuch youN hai:

(Ma - faa - i - lun) (Fa - i - laa - tun) (Ma - faa - i - lun) (Fa - i - lun)
(1 - 2 - 1 - 2) (1 - 1 - 2 - 2) (1 - 2 - 1 - 2) (1 - 1 - 2)

(Ma - faa - i - lun) (Fa - i - laa - tun) (Ma - faa - i - lun) (Fa - lun)
(1 - 2 - 1 - 2) (1 - 1 - 2 - 2) (1 - 2 - 1 - 2) (1 - 2)


Iss maah ka tarhii micra, taqtee ke saath:

(Wa - faa - meN - ab) (yeh - hu - nar - ikh) (ti - yaa - r - ker) (naa - hai)
(Ma - faa - i - lun) (Fa - i - laa - tun) (Ma - faa - i - lun) (Fa - lun)
(1 - 2 - 1 - 2) (1 - 1 - 2 - 2) (1 - 2 - 1 - 2) (1 - 2)




Jo micra Azam_hfd bhai ne micaal kii taur per dia hai woh Faiz Ahmed :Faiz: saahib kii ghazal ka aik shair hai:


GuloN meiN rang bhare baad-e-nau-bahaar chale
Chale bhii aao ki gulshan ka kaar-o-baar chale

Yeh shair iss behr per baandhaa gaya hai:

(Ma - faa - i - lun) (Fa - i - laa - tun) (Ma - faa - i - lun) (Fa - i - lun)
(1 - 2 - 1 - 2) (1 - 1 - 2 - 2) (1 - 2 - 1 - 2) (1 - 1 - 2)



Umeed kerta hu iss se dosto ko kuch madad milaygii

MuKhlic,

Qassim Mirza Ali :Qassim:

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As-Salam-O-Alaikum,

Main Taranum kay saath shair kehnay kay Tutorial per kaam kar raha hoon, jo jald hi post karoon ga...

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Khair Andesh,
Waheed Akhtar Wahid
Cell: +92.321.427.0776

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Waheed bhai aap ke tutorial ka intezar rahayga

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samandar main sahary ka aetbaar karna hai
wafa main ab yeh hunar ikhtiyaar karna hai

kay tujhy deakhy bina hi tujh main khin kho jaoun
kay talaash karna bhi chahoun to na kar paoun
k teri deed ki talaash main kahin door jo jaoun
kay kisi kay bulany par kabhi lout na paoun
kay jesay umer bhar kisi ka intezaar karna hai
wafa main ab yeh hunar ikhtiyaar karna hai

main manind,e, parwaana shamma say lipat jaoun
kay titli ki tarhan phooloun k gird mandlaoun,,,,,,,
main gulshan main jugnou ki chamak damkaoun
ya sehra main kahin door paani ki chamak paoun
mujhy youn hi teri neamatein shumaar karna hai
wafa main ab yeh hunar ikhtiyaar karna hai

ab jis jagah say takht,e, suleeman ka hai guzar
ab is jagah say sheahr,e, saba ka deedaar karna hai
ab raah kho chuki hai musafat ki dhund main
ab dasht,e, aabla paa tujhy paar karna hai
ab kaatib,e taqdeer ko khud ka parastaar karna hai
wafa main ab yeh hunar ikhtiyaar karna hai

ous nay kaha k lougoun k darmiyaan main houn
ous nay kaha kay sab say aashna bhi houn,,,,,,,
ous nay kaha kay tere liye meharbaan bhi houn
us nay kaha kay dunya say ayaan bhi houn,,,,,
phir bhi aye jalwa gar tera deedaar karna hai
wafa main ab yeh hunar ikhtiyaar karna hai,,

deedaar ,e, khuda by
nageen

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اس کا ایک بھی وعدہ وفا ھوا نہ کبھی
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