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This is a discussion on Muqabla-e-Tarahi ghazal.. May-08 within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by waheedakhtar As-Salam-Alaikum, Bohat shukria tafseel ka. Main is ko kissi aur bahar per daikh raha tha. Meri ...
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#11
05-08-2008, 01:28 PM
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 aap ne durust kaha k her sha'ir tamaam behroN se waqif nahiN hota, hamari koshish bhi yahi hoti hy k her bar muqabla-e-terhi ghazal meiN behr ko wazeh tor pr likh deN, wesy abhi bhi ziada waqt nahiN guzra, maiN is behr k arakeen ko wahaN add kr deta hun... 1.gif ")1")
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!!        |
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#12
05-08-2008, 02:07 PM
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Bohat shukria Ejaz sahib. Main asal main shair kehnay kay liye tareqa-e-taqtee istamaal nahin karta. Jo bahar mujhay samajh aa jaatee hai, us ki tarz (singing) bana kar us main misray laga daita hoon, aisa mujhay aasaan lagta hai aur amooman main 15/20 mins main 5-7 shairon ki ghazal/nazam keh laita hoon. Main nain kuch kalam is forum per post kia hai, us ko perh kar aap ko andaza ho ga keh is tareeqay say main wazan say nahin hatta... App ka mashwaron ka talbga, Waheed Akhtar Wahid. |
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05-08-2008, 04:59 PM
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"Ejaz Shakir" Hafizabad k aik bohat acha likhny waly sha'ir ka nam hy jo k mery aik azeez dost aur baRy bhai ki tarha haiN mujhy bhi kuch ziada ilm to nahiN hy mager shayad aap sauti-awzan ki bat kr rahy haiN.. bilkul isi terz pr sahiri krny waly hamary aik aur member haiN "Faypal" (Afzal Chauhdhry) aajkal shayad masroofiat ki wja se forum pr nahiN aa rahy... wo bhi alfaaz ki aawaz k wazn pr sheir kehty haiN aur bohat zood-go sha'ir haiN, aap ka kuch kalam nazer se guzra, aur yahi khayal aaya k ap ko behr aur wazn pr kafi aboor hasil hy... khair, aap k sath acha waqt guzry ga, ab hmaiN aap ki terhi ghazal ka intzar rahy ga, jald hi share kijiay ga
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#14
05-08-2008, 05:26 PM
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Name ki Ghalti ki maafi "Faizan Ahmad" sahib. Kia aap meri madad karain gay, mujhay nahin maaloom ke jab main ghazal likh loong ga to kahan, kis email address, thread per post karoon? Waheed Akhtar Wahid |
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05-08-2008, 05:29 PM
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As-Salam-Alaikum, Aik aur mashwara hai, jab kissi muqablay ka faisla hota hai to kam az kam pehlii 3 positions kay liye hona chahiye... + Agar 3 kay saath saath, 2/3 qabl-e-zikar koosishoon ko bhi jaga di jaye nateejay kay safat per to khoob hoga... is say nay likhnay waalon ka dil barhay ga. Waheed Akhtar Wahid |
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05-08-2008, 06:30 PM
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jnab aasan sa tareeqa hy, jab aap gahzal likh leN to jis trha aap ne is thread meiN meri batoN ka reply kiya hy thek isi trha yahaN isi thread meiN apni ghazal post kr deni hy. so simple...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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05-08-2008, 06:46 PM
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acha mashwara hy jnab... is andaaz meiN sochny aur izhar-e-ra'ay ka bohat shukrya... let me discuss this with other mods and judges...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#18
05-09-2008, 07:09 PM
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Hmmmmmmm Nice ............... I Will Try Insha Allah
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05-10-2008, 04:50 AM
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here is my try................. ...................  Last edited by sohail2008; 05-10-2008 at 04:52 AM. |
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05-10-2008, 08:05 PM
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slam aaj phir iss forum meen ik ghazal ke sath hazir hoon pata nahia ap koo pasand bhi ati hee ya nahi. کچھ ذکر حسن کچھ یاد یار کرنا ھے بے کار زندگی کو مصروف کا ر کرنا ھے چشم نم سے بھی عیاں راز نہ ہونے پاے وفا میں اب یہ ھنر ا ختیار کرنا ھے تمام ھمسفروں نے تو پا لیں منزلیں اپنی فریب مجھ سے مقدر نے ھر بار کرنا ھے ًًمیرے محبوب نظر ,،میرے مسجود خیال جو زخم تو نے دیے، انکو شمار کرنا ھے یہ جانتا ھوں آپ نہ آئیں گے میرے پاس پھر بھی نجانے کیوں تیرا انتظار کرنا ھے جب بھی کوئ حسین سر راہ مل گیا اس پے گماں کیوں شکل یار کرنا ھے وعدے پہ آئیں گے وہ نواز یقین جانو صبرآزما ہیں گھڑیاں کچھ انتظار کرناھے Last edited by faridnawaz; 05-10-2008 at 08:18 PM. |
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