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muqabla-e-nazm goi (Nov. 07)

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Old 11-02-2007, 06:58 PM
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As-salam-o-alaikum dosto,

is bar November 2007 k liay ham nazm goi k muqably ka in'aqaad kr rahy haiN. nazm ka unwan ho ga:

"Aakhri Sawal"
aap sab dost apni kawishaat isi thread meiN 21st November 2007 tak post kr sakty haiN....

to jnab, kaghaz qalam sambhal leN aur aik nazm ba-unwaan "aakhri sawal" likh daaliay... dekhty haiN is bar kon is unwaan k tehat behtreen nazm kehta hy...

wish u all best of luck...
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akhri sawaaal



Bicharnee walee


meen kab tak yoonhi;oodass sa;besahara sa


sardiyoon ki yakh basta ratoon meen


zindagi ki tareek rahoo par


apnee mann meen tere milaan ki aass liyee


tere yadoon kee deep jalaoon


ore aab AKHRI bar TUM se SAWAL karta

hoon


iss see pehlee keh muntazir ankheen

tere dedar ki tamanna meen


kabhi na khulnee kooband hoo jaeen

ore mere rooh!!!!!

azab-e-faraq see ghabraa kar

chaand na mukamal si khuwahishoon koo

liyee

mujh see roth kar chali jaee

tumheen apni majboriyoon ki qasam


tum faqat aik baar aa jaoo

yee akhri sawal maan jaoo

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AKHRI SAWAL
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TUM TAHI DAMAAN

SANG HATHOON MEN LIYEE

KHULTEE AABB KE CHENTTEE

MERE SAR GASHTA ROOH PAR DALTEE HOO

MERE GESOOO PAOON TALEE LEE KAR

MUJHEE KHUD SEE DOOR DHAKEELTEE HOO

MERE DIL KI UN CHUEEE BULANDIYOON PAR

GADRR KAR MUHABAT KEE JHANDEE

MUJHEE GEHRAIYOON MEEN PHEENKTEE HOO

HAR AIK SE MERA PATAA PUCH KAR

MUJHEE AJNABI BANA DETEE HOO

TU PHIR

AIK AKHRI SAWAL HEE TUM SEE

KIYA MEEN TERE SACHAIYOON KA BHARAM RAKHOON?

KIYA TERE BE TABIYOON KI DASTAAN KAHOON?

TERE BE QARARIYAAN KESEE BEYAAN KAROON?

TERE CHAHATT KOO KIYA HARF KE JAMEE PEHNAOON?

KEH MEEN NEE TU
TERE ANKHOON KI BANJAR ZAMEENEEN

APNEE NAAM SEE ABAD HUTEE DEKHI HEEN

TERE SUKHEE LABOON PAR

APNI MUSKURAHATT KI CHAMAK PARKHI HEE

TERE TALASH MEEN BHATAKTI BECHAIN NAZREEN

KHUD PAR QARAR PAYEE JATI HEEN

TERRE ANDER UTHTI KHUHAESHOON KI CHAAP

MERE MEHSOOSAAT MEEN SUNAI DETI HEE

TERE SOCHOON KI ZUBAAN

MERE ANDER GUNJTI HEEE

TERE JAWAR BHATOON KA SHOOR

MERE RAWANI MEEN TALATAM BARPA KARTA HEE

TU PHIR AEE JANAM

MAAN LEE YEE AKHRI SAWAL MERA

ORE KAR LEE IQRAR TU BHI

MERE TARHA
MERE KHATIR

TAHI DAMAAN HEE TU BHI
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nazam


kia tanhaaiuo'n mai'n tujh ko mairi yaad aatai hai

bohot rota hoo'n jub meri anaa ki baath aati hai

mai'n aisey hall mai'n hoo'n tum say taira hall poochhoonga

wo guzray kaisey tairey saarey maah-o-saal poochhoonga

kabhi tanhaaiaa'n tum say mera tho poochhti hongi'n

meri yu'n tazkiray mai'n jub bhi koi baath aati hai

kia tum say bhi jhagrda karnay ko tayyar hoti'n hai'n

meri koi nishaani jub tumhaarey haath aati hai

meri jaa'n tum say mai'n ik aakhri sawaal poochhoonga

mai'n tum say tanhaa rehnay ka ye ik kamal poochhoonga

mujeh tho dus lia tanhaaiuo'n k khof nay aisa

meray sub hosh urd jaatey hai'n jub bhi raath aati hai

meray dil per ghubaar aata hai jub bhi lait jaata hoo'n

mai'n jub ro loo'n kahi'n phhir neen'd uss k baad aati hai
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Salam-o-Adaab,

Umeed hia sab ba Fazl-e-Tala Khairiyaat Sye Hoon Ghay, mian kabhi bhi iss haq mian nahi raha kay diye huway unwaan par likha jaye, yeh nazam sirf iss liye app ki khidmat mian peesh kar raha hoon, kye shayed har kisi ki zaat par uthnay wala "AKHRI SAWAL" TANHAI hia........



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AKHRI SAWAL



Bicherny waly,


Main kaisy bhula doon tujy


Ager mil jaye kahin tu


Zakham dil k dikha doon tujy


Wo beety dinoo ki yaad


Buhat sata'ti hai mujy


Loot aaoo janaan,


Meri zindgi ka nisaab tuj se hai


Guzer raha hai meri jaan pe jo


Sara azaab tuj se hai


Ab k baras


Loot aaoo na


Ye mera ''AKHRI SAWAL'' tuj se hai
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Main tujh ay piyaar itnaa kartaa thaa
Kah saka naa kuch bhee tujh ko kabhi
Har ek sitam ko tere sahtaa gaya
Main wafaaon kaa shanawar thaa, bahtaa gaya
Kabhi naa harf e shikayat mairee zubaan nay liya
Tere karam kaa, rafaqat ka, talabgaar raha

Magar

Ab sansain hain kam, waqt kee garanee hay
Dil kay baher main, ghamon kee bhee rawanee hay
Chalney lagey hain chor kar teree dunyaa FAISAL
Kyun man main maire ubaal aataa hay
Sookhatey , kanpatey labon pay yahee
Ek, aakharee sawaal aataa hay

Kia aisaa bhee hotaa hay kabhi ?
Tairee aankhon kee chamak barh jaye
Tairee sanson main mehak aa jaye
Khilnay lag jain dil main tairey gulaab
Rangeen hotey chaley jaain tairee aankhon main khawaab
Jab kabhi sochataa hay tu mujh ko !
Jab bhee mairaa khayaal aataa hay !!!
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