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This is a discussion on muqabla-e-nazm goi (Nov. 07) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum dosto, is bar November 2007 k liay ham nazm goi k muqably ka in'aqaad kr rahy haiN. nazm ka ...
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| As-salam-o-alaikum dosto, is bar November 2007 k liay ham nazm goi k muqably ka in'aqaad kr rahy haiN. nazm ka unwan ho ga: "Aakhri Sawal" aap sab dost apni kawishaat isi thread meiN 21st November 2007 tak post kr sakty haiN.... to jnab, kaghaz qalam sambhal leN aur aik nazm ba-unwaan "aakhri sawal" likh daaliay... dekhty haiN is bar kon is unwaan k tehat behtreen nazm kehta hy... wish u all best of luck...
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| akhri sawaaal Bicharnee walee meen kab tak yoonhi;oodass sa;besahara sa sardiyoon ki yakh basta ratoon meen zindagi ki tareek rahoo par apnee mann meen tere milaan ki aass liyee tere yadoon kee deep jalaoon ore aab AKHRI bar TUM se SAWAL karta hoon iss see pehlee keh muntazir ankheen tere dedar ki tamanna meen kabhi na khulnee kooband hoo jaeen ore mere rooh!!!!! azab-e-faraq see ghabraa kar chaand na mukamal si khuwahishoon koo liyee mujh see roth kar chali jaee tumheen apni majboriyoon ki qasam tum faqat aik baar aa jaoo yee akhri sawal maan jaoo Last edited by faridnawaz; 11-02-2007 at 09:03 PM. |
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| AKHRI SAWAL ---------------- TUM TAHI DAMAAN SANG HATHOON MEN LIYEE KHULTEE AABB KE CHENTTEE MERE SAR GASHTA ROOH PAR DALTEE HOO MERE GESOOO PAOON TALEE LEE KAR MUJHEE KHUD SEE DOOR DHAKEELTEE HOO MERE DIL KI UN CHUEEE BULANDIYOON PAR GADRR KAR MUHABAT KEE JHANDEE MUJHEE GEHRAIYOON MEEN PHEENKTEE HOO HAR AIK SE MERA PATAA PUCH KAR MUJHEE AJNABI BANA DETEE HOO TU PHIR AIK AKHRI SAWAL HEE TUM SEE KIYA MEEN TERE SACHAIYOON KA BHARAM RAKHOON? KIYA TERE BE TABIYOON KI DASTAAN KAHOON? TERE BE QARARIYAAN KESEE BEYAAN KAROON? TERE CHAHATT KOO KIYA HARF KE JAMEE PEHNAOON? KEH MEEN NEE TU TERE ANKHOON KI BANJAR ZAMEENEEN APNEE NAAM SEE ABAD HUTEE DEKHI HEEN TERE SUKHEE LABOON PAR APNI MUSKURAHATT KI CHAMAK PARKHI HEE TERE TALASH MEEN BHATAKTI BECHAIN NAZREEN KHUD PAR QARAR PAYEE JATI HEEN TERRE ANDER UTHTI KHUHAESHOON KI CHAAP MERE MEHSOOSAAT MEEN SUNAI DETI HEE TERE SOCHOON KI ZUBAAN MERE ANDER GUNJTI HEEE TERE JAWAR BHATOON KA SHOOR MERE RAWANI MEEN TALATAM BARPA KARTA HEE TU PHIR AEE JANAM MAAN LEE YEE AKHRI SAWAL MERA ORE KAR LEE IQRAR TU BHI MERE TARHA MERE KHATIR TAHI DAMAAN HEE TU BHI |
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| nazam kia tanhaaiuo'n mai'n tujh ko mairi yaad aatai hai bohot rota hoo'n jub meri anaa ki baath aati hai mai'n aisey hall mai'n hoo'n tum say taira hall poochhoonga wo guzray kaisey tairey saarey maah-o-saal poochhoonga kabhi tanhaaiaa'n tum say mera tho poochhti hongi'n meri yu'n tazkiray mai'n jub bhi koi baath aati hai kia tum say bhi jhagrda karnay ko tayyar hoti'n hai'n meri koi nishaani jub tumhaarey haath aati hai meri jaa'n tum say mai'n ik aakhri sawaal poochhoonga mai'n tum say tanhaa rehnay ka ye ik kamal poochhoonga mujeh tho dus lia tanhaaiuo'n k khof nay aisa meray sub hosh urd jaatey hai'n jub bhi raath aati hai meray dil per ghubaar aata hai jub bhi lait jaata hoo'n mai'n jub ro loo'n kahi'n phhir neen'd uss k baad aati hai |
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| Salam-o-Adaab, Umeed hia sab ba Fazl-e-Tala Khairiyaat Sye Hoon Ghay, mian kabhi bhi iss haq mian nahi raha kay diye huway unwaan par likha jaye, yeh nazam sirf iss liye app ki khidmat mian peesh kar raha hoon, kye shayed har kisi ki zaat par uthnay wala "AKHRI SAWAL" TANHAI hia........ ![]() Waqas
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#7
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| AKHRI SAWAL Bicherny waly, Main kaisy bhula doon tujy Ager mil jaye kahin tu Zakham dil k dikha doon tujy Wo beety dinoo ki yaad Buhat sata'ti hai mujy Loot aaoo janaan, Meri zindgi ka nisaab tuj se hai Guzer raha hai meri jaan pe jo Sara azaab tuj se hai Ab k baras Loot aaoo na Ye mera ''AKHRI SAWAL'' tuj se hai |
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![]() Main tujh ay piyaar itnaa kartaa thaa Kah saka naa kuch bhee tujh ko kabhi Har ek sitam ko tere sahtaa gaya Main wafaaon kaa shanawar thaa, bahtaa gaya Kabhi naa harf e shikayat mairee zubaan nay liya Tere karam kaa, rafaqat ka, talabgaar raha Magar Ab sansain hain kam, waqt kee garanee hay Dil kay baher main, ghamon kee bhee rawanee hay Chalney lagey hain chor kar teree dunyaa FAISAL Kyun man main maire ubaal aataa hay Sookhatey , kanpatey labon pay yahee Ek, aakharee sawaal aataa hay Kia aisaa bhee hotaa hay kabhi ? Tairee aankhon kee chamak barh jaye Tairee sanson main mehak aa jaye Khilnay lag jain dil main tairey gulaab Rangeen hotey chaley jaain tairee aankhon main khawaab Jab kabhi sochataa hay tu mujh ko ! Jab bhee mairaa khayaal aataa hay !!!
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#9
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| "Aakhri Sawaal" Yaad aati hai aaj tak mujh ko Us haseeN iztiraab ki lazzat Pehle pehle sawaal ki wo rut Uljhe uljhe jawaab ki lazzat Aik badle hue ta'alluq ki Aik baRhte hijaab ki lazzat Dekhte hi nazar jhuka dena Is qadar ijtinaab ki lazzat Phir hamaiN bhi khabar ye hone lagi Ham ko kitni shadeed thi chahat Aur un ko bhi, jo gurezaN the Is ta'alluq ki hogai adat Rafta rafta badal gaye wo bhi Apne saaNche main Dhal gaye wo bhi Dil ki baateN samajh mai |