Urdu Poetry Forum

**faridnawaz** · #11 11-10-2007, 03:10 PM

saraab ji nice poem

autam · #12 11-10-2007, 03:41 PM

--------AKHRI SAAWAAL...!------

ager muhabat nahi kisee see

tu phir sar par guzarnee wali
qiyamatoon see piyar kiyoon?
hameen yee kesee na yad aayee?

gayee dinoo ki rafaqatoon meen bhi

tum ye keh kar bichar gayee thee "hameen muhabat nahi tum see""'

sooo aik mudat guzar kar bhi

milee hooo hum see tu aaj bhi tum

aesee sukhan meen udree huwee hoo

HAMEEN MUHABAT NAHI TUM SEE

tumheen muhabat nahi hum see

tumhara kehna baja hee lakin

tumhara chehra tumhari batoon ka sath denee see dar raha hee!

tumhari ankheen keh rahi heen

keh tum hijar,wasal,hijraan

sabhi azaboon koo chakh chukee hoo

chaloo yoonh kashakash meen akhir

ye maslehat hum nee maan li hee

tumheen muhabat nahi hum see

mager aee zood 0 ashnayee gheraan

aik AKHRI SAWAL HEE TUM SEE

yee mashwara maanloo tum

chaloo kisee see piyar kar loo

kiyoon kee

tumheen zarurat hee dosti ki
tumhari matti hee piyar wali
tumhara pekar hee ishq parwar
tumharee hontoon meen raas buhoot hee(keh jis ka qatra bhi baas buhoot hee)
tumharee pekar ki saltanat meen

gharoor bhi hee supurdagi bhi

tumhari ankhoon meen sagroon sa

sakoot bhi hee rawaniyaan bhi

woo meen nahi, na , sahi-mere jaan!

kisee kee shanee tu tumbhi thamooo

kisee kee dil par tu hath rakhoo

kiyoon apnee pekar meen aap gum hoo

kash maan jaoo mera ye AKHRI SAWAL

ore khud parasti ka yee

behunar aainaa badal doo

kisee kooa pnee siwa bhi chahoo

kisee koo dhundoo kuch iss talab see

keh ablee ju qadam meen aaeen

tu un ki talkhi bhi har tapak par

musaftoon koo nishat bakhshee

rafaqtoonkoo hayat bakhshee

yee akhri sawaal hee tum koo akhir

keh tum yonnhi raigaan na jaoo

tum yee tarmeen-e-zaat kar loo

maan jaoo yee sawaal meraa

gumaan ke asmaan see utroo

**Ik PaGla!** · #13 11-11-2007, 06:25 PM

Assalam O Alikum

Aek Adana Se Koshish Hamari Janab Say
.................... ....
Sahil Ke Rate Par
Sang Tanhai Kay Beth Kar
Ungliyon Say Rate Par
Naam Tera Likh Raha Thah
Aur Yadoon Kay Darpan Say
Teri Sorat Mujhay Jhank Rahe Theh
Teri Ankhon Ki Khamoshi Mujh Say Poch Rahe Theh
Kiya Tum Ko Yaad Hae ?
Kiya Tum Ko Yaad Hae ?
Woh Lamha Akhri Woh Sans Akhri
Wo Zindagi Ka Maeri Sawal Akhri
Tumheen Mujh Say Mohab'bat Hae ?
Kiya Mujh Say Mohab"bat Hae ?
Haan Mujh Ko Yaad Hae
Akhri Sawal ! Jo Kiya Mujh Say Thah
Sans Tham Rahe Theh Lamha Akhri Thah
Tumhen Mujh Say Mohab"bat Hae
Kiya Mujh Say Mohab'bat Hae!
Keasay Batlaon Jana!
Us Aek Lamhay Main
Main Ruk Sa Giya Thah
Waqat Tham Sa Giya Thah
Her Soch Her Yaad Say
Her Sans Her Khiyal Say
Zindagi Kay Guzray Howey Her Ik Saal Say
Main Nay Pocha Hae?
Kiya Mujh Ko Mohab'bat Hae ?
Kiya Tum Say Mohab'bat Hae ?
Her Ristay Her Mor Say
Apnay Us Ghar Say
Jis Main Sang Bitaey Thay
Zindagi Kay Tamam Pal
Un Chahtoon Kay Her Daor Say
Main Nay Pocha Hae ?
Kiya Mujh Ko Mohab'bat Hae ?
Kiya Tum Say Mohab'bat Hae ?
Chand Ke Chandni Say
Jhil Mil Sitaroon Say
Pholoon Ki Khushbo Say
Dilkash Nazaroon Say
Main Nay Pocha Hae ?
Kiya Mujh Ko Mohab'bat Hae ?
Kiya Tum Say Mohab'bat Hae ?
Her Pal Mujhay Jana !
Yeh Jawab Milla Un Say !
Woh Chaht Tumhari Hae
Tumhain Us Say Mohab'bat Hae
Ab Tum He Kaho Jana !
Yeh Baat Haqeqat Hae Ya Hae Ik Afsana
Maeri Chaht Tumhari Hae ?
Mujhay Tum Say Mohab'bat Hae ?
.................... ...

**Saraabs** · #14 11-11-2007, 11:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by faridnawaz

saraab ji nice poem

Bohot bohot shukria Farid Bhai....your poem is also very nice

**Stubborn Lioness!** · #15 11-13-2007, 06:26 AM

ASSALAM-O-ALAIKUM,

(Shuru ALLAH k ba barkat naam sey'Jo barra Mehrban'nihayat Rehm farmaney wala hai)

''AAKHRI SAWAL''

KHUDA-e-Bartar karam hai tera
Khalifa apna bana k Tu ney
ZameeN per insaan ko utara
Aqil'zahanat'fehm'im amat
Dee saari makhlooq per fazilat
Ye Tera insaaN barrha phir aagey
Barrhey phir arman-o-khuahishen bhi
Zarooraten bhi'
Karamaten bhi
Terey mazahir ko is ney socha
K maiN bhi aesa hi ker dikhaooN
Bananey phir ye chala ajoobey
Naee naee ronaqen banaeeN
ZameeN sey ho ker falak pey pohncha
Ye jaa pohncha hai chaand per bhi
Ye Tera insaaN...
Tha is pey lazim
Teri sannaee ki humd karta
To teri nemat ka shukr hota
Magar ye insaaN...
Fatah k aesey nashey mein dooba
Khudi mein apni 'Tujhey bhi bhoola
Tabahi apni hi phir bana li
K jis din Atom-Bum banaya
Wo aik zarra
Zara sa reza
Magar jo toota'tabahi laaya
Ejad is ney kiya boht kuch
Phir aik din ek masheeN(computer) banai
Ajab ajooba hai ye bhi is ka
Khazana-e-maloomat jis meiN
Jo us sey poocho'jawab aaey
Magar ye dar hai...
K aik din wo na aesa aaey
Ye Tera insaaN
Barra hi nadaN
Jo us sey poochey...
Mujhey bata tu
K kya ''KHUDA hai?''
Ho Akhri wo sawal is ka
Khalifa jis ko bana k bheja
Bus aik dam ho qehr sa nazil
Bikher parrey kaiinat sari
Aur Akhri us sawal ka ye
jawab aaey
K ''Han KHUDA hai!''
Barra KHUDA hai
Wo WAHDAHU LASHAREEK jis ney
Tujhey banaya
Qaraz tha tujh per terey Khuda ka
Tu shukr karta'tu humd karta
Tu Us k aagey sujood karta
Magar Aey Badbakht...!
Ye kya kiya hai?
Barri himaqat kari hai tu ney
Azeem Rub ney jo nemateN deeN
Tu un k zaryey azaab laaya
Tabahi paee
Khasara paya!
...................! !!
To sun ley ab Aey Khata k putley!
Hai waqt ab bhi'bus ab sudhar ja
Tu apney Rub ki taraf palatt ja
Ghafoor hai Wo
Raheem hai Wo
Wo bakhsh dega khataeN teri
Magar Aey insaaN...
Bus Akhri us sawal sey dar
Tu ab sudhar ja
Bus ab sudhar ja
K apney Rub ki mazeed kitni
InayatoN ko
Bhulaey ga tu...!!!

(S.N.Neha)

**rubinbiswas** · #16 11-13-2007, 11:00 AM

Akharee Saawaal

akharee saawal poochney
tum se aya hoon janey jana
suno faisala aub tum ko hi karna hai
meri ess chahat ka
itna kehna hai bus tum se
aub bhi tum meri zindagee ho
dili ehsaashat ko mery
ankhono main pharney waley
moh lya saadgee se merey dil ko
sub se aziz ho itni tum mughey
tumharey haatono main rakh di
mene apni ess jaan ko
dil mera muthee main band ker lo
ya phir phool samajh ke esey
jo guzrey nagawar tumhey
tor ke dil ki patayaina ura dena
kahin kisi weeraney main
shaid yunhi mujey sakoon ajaye
azm hai mera kar dee naam tumhrey
ye zindagee aub tu mayoos na krna
na rud karna mery jazbono ko
ya phir maan lo ess dil ka kaha
mumkin hai tumhrey es rawaye se
khain main tang ho kr mar hi na jaono
itney anjaan tu na bano
dil ki baat ankhono main pharney waley
kahbi khe na saaka ess dil ki tapkan ko
tum se main janey jana
koi kya janey meri ess maan ki laagan ko
dil ki lagee nahi hai ye
jub bhi tum se nigha milata hoon
sanbhaley nahi sanmbalta ye dil
girft inti mazboot hai ess ki
bina tumharey rehna aub mushkil hai
khud ko jala ke main apney aap ko
ye maashal e jisaam laya hoon
ye woh naghma hai jesy sun ke
chataney bhi samandar ban jayain
mubhaat ki shama haemsha apney
taaq e jaan main roshan rakhna
sawaal tum ko khoney ka nahi
sirf tum ko chahney sirf tum ko paaney ka hai

**RUKHSAAR** · #17 11-15-2007, 08:05 PM

iTtEfAaQ sE yE nAzam mAiNE aPnI sToRy k lIYe LikHi tHi jO yAhAn ShaMiL kAr RaHi hOn...

AAKHRI SAWAAL

IsI rEhgUzAr pAY tUm nE mUjH sE
cHaHaTo'N kA aPnI
iQrAaR yUn kiA tHa
mUhAbBaT k sabHi rAaStO'n sE
mUjHe aAsHnA kiA tHa
tUm hE nE mUjH sE kAhA tHa
"mUhAbBaT diL kO cHhOtI aGaR
rOoH mAiN uTaR jAaYe
tAu hAmEsHa ZiNdA rEhTi hAi
iSi tArhA tUm bHi aB
mErI sAaNsO'N mAin bAsTi hO
mErI rOoH mAiN rEhtI hO"
aUr uS gHaRi tUmHaRi
mUhABbAt k LuMs nE
mErI bHi rOoH kO cHhO LiA tHa...
mAgAr tUmhArE sAfAr kI mAnZiL
kiSi aUR rAaH paY tHi
tUm Se pHiR wOh mEri
MuLaAqAaT aAkHrI tHi
uS rAaH sE aAgAy
kOi rAaSta nAhi tHa
pALaT jAatI bHi TaU kAiSe
kOi rAHnUmA nAhI tHa
ChAro'N OoR mErE
sHikAsTaGi kA jAaL tHa
bEhTaY hUwE aShQo'N kA
RuKnA mUhAaL tHa
"bInA rOoH k mAiN aB
kiS tArhA'N JiYoN geE..?"
uSi rEhgUzAr pAY tUmSe yE
mErA aAkHrI saWaAL tHa
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