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Muqabla-e-Mazahia Ghazal ~*~Eid -ul-Azhaa Special~*~

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Old 12-04-2007, 07:11 AM
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As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto!!!

jesa k ham sab janty haiN k December meiN Eid-ul-Azhaa aa rahi hy, so baqr-Eid ki khushioN ko dobala krny k liay is baar muqabla-e-mazahiya ghazal ka inaqaad kiya ja raha hy... yaani samjhi'ay k

is baar aap sab ki his-e-mazaah ki aazmaish hy


so apni merzi se qaafia, radeef, zameen aur behr sellect kijiay aur aik khilkhilati hui hansti-muskurati hui ghazal keh daali'ay...

Muqably meiN shirkat ki last date 21st December 07 hy.

aur jesa k ham janty haiN k Eid bhi inhi dates meiN aa rhi hy, so judges se advance guzarish ho gi k wo EID ki masroofiat se faraghat paaty hi apny faisly se aagaah kr deN. inshaAllah 1st January 2008 ko winner announce kr diya ja'ay ga...

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Angry Re: Muqabla-e-Mazahia Ghazal ~*~Eid -ul-Azhaa Special~*~

chupke chupke raat din uska bartan manjvana yaad hai
humko ab tak kaprey dhonay ka woh zamana yaad hai

dopehar ki dhoop mein kaprey sukhanay kay liye
woh mera kothay pay bhi nangey panv jana yaad hai

Aa gaya jab sunday ki shab bhi kabhi zikr-e-shopping
woh mera meri biwi say, ATM card chupana yaad hai

saas sasur ki dostoN ab kiya sunaoun daastaaN
sasuraal na janey ka mujhey har ik bahana yaad hai

daaru pee kay jab bhi ghar mein aana para mujhey
woh mera daantoN taley, ilaichi chabana yaad hai

dekh liya jab bhi kabhi rastay mein kissi dusri larki ko
Biwi kay ghussay ko deikh kar mera thartharana yaad hai

waqt-e-rukhsat office, Ab bhi yaad aata hai mujhey
biwi kay purse say car ki chaabi churana yaad hai

second show deikh kar woh mera raat ko ghar dair say Aana
Biwi ka ghussay say darwaza na kholna yaad hai

Jub Kabhi Ittefaqan taway pey roti jal janay par
woh mera tere belan say sir phatwana yaad hai

Jub kabhi tujh say teree umar poochnay per who tera duppatay main
Sharmana aur 34 ko 17 bata tey huey muskurana yaaad hai

Apni umar chupanay kay liye who tera munnay ko peetna
Aur Tujhe Mummy nahi baaji bulanay ko kahna yaad hai

haftey baad hi moun utha kar meikey chalay jana tera
aur mera ghar mein jharu pochaa lagana yaad hai

kheench lena woh tera salary ka lifafa dafataan
aur tera beauty parlor pay woh paisay urana yaad hai

yaad hai begum ab bhi woh tera belan se mujhey peetna
aur baad pitney kay tera woh iodex lagana yaad hai

aaye din saley saliyooN ka aana ghar pay mere
woh tera unkey samney mujhey murgha banana yaad hai

shukr hai 'HumTum' teri shaadi nahi hui abhi
shaadi shuda YarooN ka woh, rona rulana yaad hai !!
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Talking Re: Muqabla-e-Mazahia Ghazal ~*~Eid -ul-Azhaa Special~*~

Tu paapee hai tiree khwaahiSh hai daaman meN savaab aa'ay

Magar kehta hai dil teraa hijaabii be.hijaab aa'ay

Nijas uss muNh se laytaa hai meri betii ka tuu jo naam

Dua hai khaak uss muNh meN tere bhii be.hisaab aa'ay

Hifaazat ab mere eemaaN kii Maalik hee kare logo!

Kii fermaa'iSh thi Zam Zam kee woh layker haiN sharaab aa'ay

Manaa kitnaa kiya maiN ne kahaaN sunte sasur jee haiN

ZameeN per gand phailee thee pah woh pehnay juraab aa'ay

Khuda e Lam.yajal tuu hee bataa yeh maajraa kya hai

Bajaa'ay sang k waaN se miree jaanib gulaab aa'ay

Najaane kaunsii aunty ne inko aaNkh maarii hai?

Ke peerii meN bhii buDDhay per bahaar aa'ay shabaab aa'ay

Jo sar apna jhukaa'ay hai, kahe roker wahii ganjaa

Sharaafat hai kahaaN kee yeh ke tohfay meN khizaab aa'ay

Mujhay khaao naheiN PUCCA ke hooN mazloom saa panchhii

Tumhaarii bhook kee khaatir mujhee per kyuN azaab aa'ay?

DIYA aapii na poochhaiN yeh "bataao hai kahaaN teetar?"

Usay PUCCA ne khaaya hai thay din uss k kharaab aa'ay

Meray duShman kii her murGhii ne sonay kay diay anDay

Merii murGhii se aa'ay jo sabhii anDay kharaab aa'ay

Ghareebii ka yeh aalam hai ke sabzii per guzaaraa hai

Terii qismat meN aay dur: najaane kab kabaab aa'ay ...
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Angry Re: Muqabla-e-Mazahia Ghazal ~*~Eid -ul-Azhaa Special~*~

Aaj tak woh band baje shaamiyana yaad hay
Khud ko itni dhoom se sooli chaRhana yaad hay

Teen moqay bhi diye qazi ne GHor-o fikr ke
Aaj tak who qeemati moqay gaNwana yaad hay

Aik nah kafi thi her muskil se bachne ke liye
hum ko haN ka faislaa who ehmaqana yaad hay

ghar jise laye the hum roti pakane ke liye
ab pakati hay hameN us ka pakana yaad hay

nah silaee janti hay nah cooking maloom hay
haN oose shohar ko ungli per nachaana yaad hay

uski her ik baat per kehna hi paRta hay ‘bajaa’
is tarah ooska hameN barsoN bajana yaad hay

mantay heN hum logoo hadesaa hoga shdeed
kiyon keh hum ko waqeaa itna puranaa yaad hay
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Aaj tak woh band baje shaamiyana yaad hay
Khud ko itni dhoom se sooli chaRhana yaad hay

Teen moqay bhi diye qazi ne GHor-o fikr ke
Aaj tak who qeemati moqay gaNwana yaad hay

Aik nah kafi thi her muskil se bachne ke liye
hum ko haN ka faislaa who ehmaqana yaad hay

ghar jise laye the hum roti pakane ke liye
ab pakati hay hameN us ka pakana yaad hay

nah silaee janti hay nah cooking maloom hay
haN oose shohar ko ungli per nachaana yaad hay

uski her ik baat per kehna hi paRta hay ‘bajaa’
is tarah ooska hameN barsoN bajana yaad hay

mantay heN hum logoo hadesaa hoga shdeed
kiyon keh hum ko waqeaa itna puranaa yaad hay
Bhai wahhhh....Farid Bhai....bohot umda....maza hi agaya parh kar....best of luck
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Default Re: Muqabla-e-Mazahia Ghazal ~*~Eid -ul-Azhaa Special~*~



ye ho gaye kia haalaat SADAR sahb

ik kero muj se mulakat SADAR sahb


apposition ki position khatar naak hai

ker do havaly jail khana jaat SADAR sahb


main kum sin shaitaan kaya mashwara don

aap to khud hoo bady chaalaak SADAR sahb


khud he ban jaoo sadar , wazir_e_azam be

nahin chayeh hamain ye wuzraat SADAR sahb


mangty rahoo amrica se amdaad roozana

har din hoo ap ka jumairaat SADAR sahb


zindgi main kabi b wardi na utarna ta k

door rahain afaat_o_billiyaat SADAR sahb


hakoomat ho apki jeet koi or jaye

ye kahan ki ''ikhlakiyaat'' SADAR sahb


aman ka suraj nikal he ana hai akhir

ho gaye hai kaafi raat SADAR sahb

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Default Re: Muqabla-e-Mazahia Ghazal ~*~Eid -ul-Azhaa Special~*~

[quote=WanderingThoug hts;3588505]
As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto!!!


tell me how to participate in the competition.
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Old 12-14-2007, 12:44 PM
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Default Re: Muqabla-e-Mazahia Ghazal ~*~Eid -ul-Azhaa Special~*~

I have sent my ghazal in your reply is it a right place to post in this muqabilah.