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This is a discussion on Muqabla-e-ghazal goi.. (March-08) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; is martaba hum muqabla-e-ghazal goi maiN bhi kuch tabdeeli kar rahay haiN... naamwar sh'ora ka misra-e-tarah dainay ki bajaye... humne ...
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#1
03-01-2008, 09:24 PM
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 is martaba hum muqabla-e-ghazal goi maiN bhi kuch tabdeeli kar rahay haiN... naamwar sh'ora ka misra-e-tarah dainay ki bajaye... humne faisla kia hai k guzishta maah maiN HG Poets Club k jis member ka misra sab say khubsoorat hoga, muqablay k liye usi k misray ko misra-e-tarah k taur par dia jayega... is martaba HG Administration ne jo misra muntakhib kia hai.. woh PC ki bohat khubsoorat shayera.. Kanwal Hussain ka hai.. humaray bakht k taaray zameeN pe aa k rahay.. aap bhi bharpoor andaz maiN Poets Club maiN apni takhaleeq share kartay rahiye.. ho sakta hai agli martaba misra-e-tarah aapka ho... 1.gif ")1") aur .. jaldi say muqablay k liye bhi kuch likh daliye... aap apni takhaleeq isi thread maiN 21st March tak share kar saktay haiN.. khush rahiye HG Administration.
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#2
03-02-2008, 11:48 AM
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bohot pyara misra hai..... i will also try it
__________________ Ihsan Elahi Last edited by silent_wishes; 03-02-2008 at 11:51 AM. |
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#3
03-03-2008, 03:14 AM
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Misra,a bahut achha he I would also like to participate,agar mumkin ho to Qaafia wazeh kar den ke "Zameen,Jabeen,Wahee n" waghera he ya "AA, Jaa , Dua ,Dikhha" waghera he .Thanks, Tahir Adeem(Geramany) |
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#4
03-03-2008, 06:37 AM
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bohat khoob, bohat acha misra muntakhib kiya hy Mehroo!!! Kanwal Hussain Sahiba ki is ghazal ne bohat mutasir kiya tha, aur khas kr ye misra to abhi tak lutf de raaha hy... ager waqt mayasar aaya to maiN bhi is zameen meiN kuch likhny ki koshish kruN ga.
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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03-03-2008, 06:54 AM
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ham aap ko urdu poets club meiN khush-amaded kehty haiN umeid hy k aap ka waqt yahaN acha guzry ga aur ab hmaiN is misry pr aap ki tarhi gahzal ka intzar rahy ga. yahaN maiN wazeh krna chahuN ga k members is misry meiN se apni marzi ka qaafia radeef muntakhib kr sakty haiN, lekin ager koi member khas Kanwal Hussain sahiba ki ghazal k qaafia radeef meiN hi taba-aazmaei krna chahy to ye khubsurat ghazal yahaN se paRhi ja sakti hy: http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/urdu-...in-183096.html wish u best of luck....
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 03-03-2008 at 06:56 AM. |
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03-03-2008, 04:33 PM
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Asalam-o-Alaikum ittefaq se jis din muqablay ki thread lagi, mera bhi yahan guzar ho gaya, socha ku na taba a'amayi kerli jaye, ussi waqt se kaghaz qalam pakra or khasi mehnat ke baad ghazal likhi, lekin mera rishta shayiri se taqreeban 8 saal baad dobara jura hai, na hi mai urdu shayiri ki basics janta hoon, tou kya muqablay mai shamil kerne se pehle mai ghazal yahan kisi ko dikha sakta hoon  kaheen aisa na ho baad mai major ghaltiyan nikal aayen. 
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#7
03-03-2008, 05:28 PM
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ye jan kr bohat khushi ho rhi hy k aap bhi shairi ka shoq rakhty haiN, hmaiN ap k kalam ka intzaar rahy ga. ager aap samajhty haiN k aap ki ghazal meiN major ghalati k chances haiN to aap is tutorial (~*~Poetry Tutorials...~*~) meiN se ghazal k basic components k bary meiN detail jan len, aur koshish kreN k khud se hi aisi mutawaqy ghalati ko dur kr deN... is contest ka asl maqsad bhi members meiN acha likhny ka jazba baidar krna aur un ki islah krna hy, so ager aap apny tor pr ghazal final kr k judges k samny rakheN gy to judges ki ra'ye se aap ko apni ghalatioN ko thek krny ka moqa mily ga, jo k aaeina k liye kafi mufeed sabit hoga...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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03-03-2008, 10:48 PM
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03-03-2008, 11:57 PM
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#10
03-04-2008, 08:23 PM
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humaray bakht ke taaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe sabhi inaam tumhaaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe humeiN jo log thay pyare falak pe jaatay rahe tujhe jo log thay pyare zameeN pe aa kay rahe kahiN jo zulf ghani ho kabhi jo chehra diya laga ke tere ishaare zameeN pe aa kay rahe koi khata hui humse ke ik zamana hua tabhise humse bechaaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe qashish hai is mein koi, seher tak jo jaaga raha dikha,farishtay yeh saaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe farhaad-o-qais thay, ik waqt meer aur ghalib tamaam ishq ke maare zameeN pe aa kay rahe? falak ka shola hai har roz jalta hai, maana faqat ik roz guzaray, zameeN pe aa kay rahe nazar mein aaya hai jabse woh phool, andaleeb kay sukhan mein naqsh utaaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe mudabbar, suna hai kal ke meri jaan ka dushman, main jaauN uske bhi waare, zameeN pe aa kay rahe Mobi
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