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Muqabla-e-ghazal goi.. (March-08)

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Misra-e-Tarhi...(Hamaray Bakht Kay Taray Zamee'n Pay Aa Kay Rahay)

(Tarhi Ghazal)

Jo Khuaab Ham Ko Thay Pyaray, Zamee'n Pay Aa Kay Rahay
Hamaray Bakht Kay Taray, Zamee'n Pay Aa Kay Rahay

Khayal.O.Khuaab Mai'n Guzri Thi Zindagi Ab Tak
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Bujha Hay Dil To Charagho'n Ka Zikr Bay Maani
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Bisaat Kiya Hay Charagho'n Ki Aaftaab Kay Baad
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Woh Aaei'n Owr Yeh Tufaan-e-Gham Theher Jaey
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Hamara Bhi Koi Ghar Ho, Hamai'n Bhi Aaey Sukoo'n
Háya Kay Khuaab Yeh Saray, Zamee'n Pay Aa Kay Rahay

(Háya)
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kia paya ger ishq main na sub luta k rahay

irada tha k dil main kuch na sajayen gay hum
lekin woh derd se dil mera sajaa k rahay

gerdish-e-ayam ko laakh rokna chaha hum ne
lekin wasl k baad hijr k din aa k rahay

gulshan se soo-e-dasht hum nikal paray
phir gulshan k rahay na dasht-o-sehra k rahay

dil-e-veeran main veerani akhir kab tak
koi to is dil main gher bana k rahay

ab tak kaisay guzri yeh mat pooch Majid
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Old 03-15-2008, 09:37 AM
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Asalam o Alaikum!!!!
kia haal hai sab ka....main hallagulla urdu poetry & community forum main neya hoon....meri posts b abhi sirf 17 hain....aap sab mujh se senior hain or shair goi main b aap sab ko ustaad samajhta hoon because main to neya hoon is duniya-e-shair goi main.....
aik shair meri ghazal ka...
TERI YEH TEHREER B KOI NA PERHAY GA MAJID
K SHAIR GOI MAIN TU ABHI MAHIR NAHI HUA
....aap sab ki help chahiye hogi mujhay.....main ne tarhi ghazal k muqablay main apni ghazal send ki hai lekin mujhay nahi pata k meray shair aap ko achay lagain gay ya nahi.....mujhay aap sab ki comments ka intezaar rahay ga taa k main improve ker sakoon....
REGARDS....
MAJID ZULFIQAR MUGHAL
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Asalam o Alaikum!!!!
kia haal hai sab ka....main hallagulla urdu poetry & community forum main neya hoon....meri posts b abhi sirf 17 hain....aap sab mujh se senior hain or shair goi main b aap sab ko ustaad samajhta hoon because main to neya hoon is duniya-e-shair goi main.....
aik shair meri ghazal ka...
TERI YEH TEHREER B KOI NA PERHAY GA MAJID
K SHAIR GOI MAIN TU ABHI MAHIR NAHI HUA
....aap sab ki help chahiye hogi mujhay.....main ne tarhi ghazal k muqablay main apni ghazal send ki hai lekin mujhay nahi pata k meray shair aap ko achay lagain gay ya nahi.....mujhay aap sab ki comments ka intezaar rahay ga taa k main improve ker sakoon....
REGARDS....
MAJID ZULFIQAR MUGHAL
wa-alaikum-as-salam Majid Bhai

aap ko Urdu Poets Club aur Hallagulla pr khush-aamadeed... ham umeed krty haiN k aap ka waqt yahaN acha guzry ga.

ye dekh kr khushi hui k aap ne contest meiN his'sa liya, yaqeenan aap ko apni is kawish pr judges ki ra'ye se kafi kuch seekhny ko mily ga...

likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN...
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