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RulesThis is a discussion on muqabla bra'y terhi ghazal (mah-e-May 07) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto, mah-e-May k terhi ghazal k liay derj zail misra tajveer kiya gya hy: sham k waqt parindoN ko ...
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05-03-2007, 09:43 AM
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 As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto, mah-e-May k terhi ghazal k liay derj zail misra tajveer kiya gya hy: sham k waqt parindoN ko raha kr dety qafia: raha Radeef: kr dety qafia aur radeef ka intakhab aap apni marzi se bhi kr sakty heN. na'ey likhny waloN ki aasani k liay aik bat btata chaluN k aap is misry ko bar bar paRheN, aur is ki rawani pr ghor kreN, is k ba'hao (rhythm) ko zehn-nasheen krny ki koshish kreN, is mashq se aap ko misra-e-trha k mutabiq sher kehny meiN aasani ho gi. wo dost jo shairi ki rumooz se aagahi rakhty heN, un k liay is behr ki taqtee kiay deta huN, taa'kay unheN ghazal kehny meiN aasani rahy: behr-e-ramal : fa-ila-tun fa'ila-tun fa'ila-tun fa-lun umeed hy aap tamaam dost muqablay meiN zuroor his'sa leN gy aur apny khubsurat kalaam se is mehfil ki ronaq ko do'bala kreN gy. hmaiN aap ki takhleeqat ka intazar rahy ga. aap se drkhawst hy k apni kawishaat isi thread meiN 21st May 2007 se pehly post kr deN... shukriya, ws-salam Administration www.hallagulla.com
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05-09-2007, 02:41 PM
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lagta hy sary poets so rahy haiN.... bai kahaN haiN sab log.... jaldi jaldi achi achi ghazleN likheN.... waqt kam hy.... |
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05-12-2007, 07:02 PM
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Wt means pehli line ghazal ki yeh honi chahiye .............. shaam k waqt parindoun ko riha ker dete ??? or aap ne likha k qafia or radeef apni merzi se bhee ker saktey hain ................. i couldnt get tht  .................... ..... waise mujhe idea hai k mein participate nahi ker paoun gi but poch rahi hoon may b .................... dil o dimagh chal pareyin to 1.gif ")1")
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05-13-2007, 03:40 PM
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ASLAAM O ALEKUM, kesey hain aap sab?umeed hai khush o khurm honge, misra to aap ne bahot khoobsurat chuna hai Faizan bhahi,umeed hai INSHA ALLAH bahot khoobsurat kalaam parney ko miley ga,so us lamhey ka intazaar kartey hain, aor doston se yeh gyzaarish bhi ke please jaldi jaldi hamain apney khoobsurat kalaam se mehzooz honey ka maoqa inaayat farmaaiye. bahot khush rahiye.
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05-14-2007, 10:56 AM
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maiN aap ko wazahat se bta deta huN.... ye aik tarhi ghazal ka muqabla hy jis maiN members, di'ay ga'ay misry k qaifa radeef k mutabiq apni apni ghazl likheN gy aur submit krwa'aiN gy... is bar ham ne misra tajweez kia hy: "shaam k waqt parindoN ko reha kr dety" ab ham ne isi misry maiN se qafia aur rafeef set kr k ghazal kehni hy, aur is misry ko kisi aik sher maiN use krna hy... ager misry ko aik nazr dekha ja'y to qafia banta hy "reha", aur radeef banta hy: "kr dety"..... mazeed qaif'ay ho sakty haiN: "bata kr dety", "juda kr dety", "fana kr dety", "dua kr dety", "bula kr dety", "saja kr dety", "hawa kr dety".... and so on... lekin ager koi chahy to apni merzi se bhi is misry maiN se qafia aur radeef set kr sakta hy, misal k tor pr: qaifa "kar", radeef "dety".... is surat maiN mazeed qafiay hoN gy: "ghar dety", "par dety", "sar dety", "samunder dety", "baraber dety"... and so on.... umeed hy maiN apni bat samjha saka huN ga aap ko.... aur ye maiN kya sun raha huN, aap participate kyuN nahi kr pa'aiN gi  ???itny aasan qaifa aur radeef to haiN... aap ko zuroor participate krna chahiay, because ye muqablay se baRh kr aik activity hy apni skills ko improve krny ki... hope to read a beautiful ghazal from u soon.... |
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05-14-2007, 11:07 AM
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wa-alaikum-as-salam Zain bhai! Poets Club maiN aik bar phir khush-aamadeed... umeed hy sab khyriat ho gi... bhai ji Intzaar kyuN krna hy  , aap bhi aik achi si tarhi-ghazal ta'yaar kreN is mah k liay...hmaiN aap ki ghazal ka intzaar rahy ga.... |
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05-15-2007, 09:41 PM
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aache baat hy .................... .....
__________________ ميں سچے رب كے رستے ميں سو بار لڑوں اور جاں دے دوں پهر لوٹ كے دنيا ميں آوں پهر جام شهادت نوش كروں |
muqabla bra'y terhi ghazal (mah-e-May 07) 
