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**WanderingThoughts** · #21 05-21-2007, 09:35 PM

as-salam-o-alaikum dosto!

chuNkay kuch members ko misra-e-trha thoRa mushkil lag rha hy aur is bar muqablay maiN members ki shirkat bhi kam hy, to faisla kya gya hy k muqabla khatm hony ki aakhri tareek baRha di ja'ay...

muqaablay ki aakhri tareekh 25 May 2007 kr di gai hy....

lehaza jo members waqt ki kami ki waja se shmuliat na kr saky, un k liay aik moqa hy...

wish u all the best....

**Noor-al-sabah** · #22 05-22-2007, 05:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zaib.

sahi hy noor mohterma wah kamal ki gazal hy

kya sahi hai?ooperwala comment maine nahin likha hai"Arabian girl" ka hai.aur aap ko ghazal pasand aai iske liye thanx.

**faypal** · #23 05-22-2007, 12:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zain

bahot khoob Afzal saahib,bahot achhi koshish rahi yeh aap ki tarf se,so daad qabool kijiye,
albata pehley aor doosarey shair main wazn ke hawaaley se gar bar hai,ho sakey to aek nazar phir se dekh lijiye,
bahot khush rahiye.

Esteemed brother.........main ne mazkoorah verses mein wazan ko darust kerne ki try ki hai.Mujhe bahut khushi howi hai k aap ne ghazal k khad-o-khaal sanwarne mein mayri help farmaai........aap se ek request hai k aap jub bhi mayra kalaam read kerain, jahan bhi koi weakness nazer aae usse zaroor highlight kiya kerain.Main bahut duaain doun ga.May God bless you with longevity.

**Sunehri** · #24 05-23-2007, 09:06 PM

Assalam o alikum
WT ji k encourage kerne pe aik adnaa si koshish

**zain** · #25 05-23-2007, 09:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sunehri

Assalam o alikum
WT ji k encourage kerne pe aik adnaa si koshish

bahot khoob Sunehri,bahot achhi koshish ki aap ne,go ke abhi wazn main kaheen gar bar nazar aayi mujhey,lekin........ ash.aar ke khayalaat bahot achhey raheyso bahot achha laga par ke,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhna jaari rakhiye,,

**Sunehri** · #26 05-24-2007, 01:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zain

bahot khoob Sunehri,bahot achhi koshish ki aap ne,go ke abhi wazn main kaheen gar bar nazar aayi mujhey,lekin........ ash.aar ke khayalaat bahot achhey raheyso bahot achha laga par ke,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhna jaari rakhiye,,

bas koshish ki thee samajh nahi aa raha thaa k share karoun ya nahi but WT ji ne kaha k ker dein judges ki raaye se seekhne ko milta hai is liye ker di

.................... .. buhat shukriya khayalaat pasand kerne k liye wazn .............

.............. better luck to me next tyime

zaroor or aap sab isi tarah islah kertey rehiyein

**WanderingThoughts** · #27 05-25-2007, 09:53 PM

aap sab dostoN ka bohat shukriya jinhoN ne apni tehreeroN se is muqablay ki ronaq barHaei,

aap ki takhleqaat ab judges k samny pesh kr di gai haiN....

so ab ye thread close ki jati hy...

wish u all the best.

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