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RulesThis is a discussion on muqabla bra'y terhi ghazal (mah-e-May 07) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by Sunehri me ne try ki thee WT mager woh me k hisaab se choun choun ka muraba ...
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05-18-2007, 08:08 AM
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aik aur bat btata chaluN aap ko k ye sirf aik muqabla hi nahi hy, yahaN Judges her entery pr mukhtalif angles se comments deN gy, us ki khobiaN aur khamiaN bta'aiN gy jis se aap ko apni skills improve krny aur aainda behter likhny maiN madad milay gi.... so is muqably maiN aik trha se members k liay moqa hy k wo apni mehnat se ghazal kaheN aur judges se us pr comments leN...
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05-18-2007, 02:54 PM
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 hmm competitions se kafi kuch seekhne ko milta hai but ................ for me i think next time ................ aisa hi lag raha hai phir se choti si koshish kerti houn woh bhee nakaam huee to better luck next time to me 
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05-19-2007, 06:07 PM
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bahot khoob Afzal saahib,bahot achhi koshish rahi yeh aap ki tarf se,so daad qabool kijiye,  albata pehley aor doosarey shair main wazn ke hawaaley se gar bar hai,ho sakey to aek nazar phir se dekh lijiye, 1.gif ")1") bahot khush rahiye.
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05-20-2007, 09:39 PM
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topic buhat mushkil hy kosis pori per ham jaisay shair ky liyay yay mushkil hy
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05-21-2007, 12:43 PM
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05-21-2007, 12:58 PM
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bai wah... Afzal Sahab, aur Noor Sahiba aap dono ne achi contributions ki haiN... lets see aur kon kon aj raat tak apni kawishaat submitt krwata hy... |
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#18
05-21-2007, 01:10 PM
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Re: muqabla bra'y terhi ghazal (mah-e-May 07) 
.................... . share kerne laik nahi 
Re: muqabla bra'y terhi ghazal (mah-e-May 07) 
