It seems that you are unregistered. Please register with us by clicking Here, or if you are already registered login here
User Name: Password:
Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum

Urdu Poetry Forum

Welcome to Urdu Community & Poetry/Shayari Forum

 


Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)

This is a discussion on Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ...


Go Back   Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum > Urdu Poetry > Urdu Poet Club

Video Photo Books Games Sites Register Groups FAQ Calendar Mark Forums Read Chat [6]

Notices

Rate This Thread - Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07).
(0)
Thread Rating: 0 votes, average.

Closed Thread
 
Thread Tools
  #1  
Old 06-04-2007, 06:39 AM
WanderingThoughts's Avatar
Just Kidding
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Islamabad
Posts: 7,244

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 1,636
Thanked 670 Times in 484 Posts
Nominated 25 Times in 13 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1821
WanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)


Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
The Following User Says Thank You to WanderingThoughts For This Useful Post:
noon_noon (04-13-2008)
  #2  
Old 06-04-2007, 07:30 AM
Shehr-e-Wafa's Avatar
Hawa burd!
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Hairat kada
Posts: 1,475

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 611
Shehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond reputeShehr-e-Wafa has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month Writer of the Month 
Total Awards: 2
Default Re: Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)

aray wah.. topic to bohat zabberdast hai nazm ka...
ab dekhte hain k hamaray shayar hazraat kaise is mehfil ki ronaq barhatay hain ...
ager mumkin ho saka to main bhi part zuroor loon gi.. nahi to parh ker lutf andoz honey walo'n main to shamil hongi hi mile
__________________

.
.
Tere is jahaN maiN aye Khuda..woh nahi to lagta hai kuch nahi

Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
The Following User Says Thank You to Shehr-e-Wafa For This Useful Post:
noon_noon (04-13-2008)
  #3  
Old 06-04-2007, 10:47 AM
ArAbIaN gIrL's Avatar
`~Dreamer~`
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: ~`Tanhai~`
Posts: 14,971

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 17
Thanked 17 Times in 13 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 3204
ArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Best Cook Award Best Cook Award 
Total Awards: 2
Default Re: Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)

acha title diya hia
ab ki bar mein b try karun gi
__________________
Signature Removed - Image exceeds 650 px by 350 px
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
  #4  
Old 06-04-2007, 11:07 AM
WanderingThoughts's Avatar
Just Kidding
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Islamabad
Posts: 7,244

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 1,636
Thanked 670 Times in 484 Posts
Nominated 25 Times in 13 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1821
WanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shehr-e-Wafa View Post
aray wah.. topic to bohat zabberdast hai nazm ka...
ab dekhte hain k hamaray shayar hazraat kaise is mehfil ki ronaq barhatay hain ...
ager mumkin ho saka to main bhi part zuroor loon gi.. nahi to parh ker lutf andoz honey walo'n main to shamil hongi hi mile
ji aap koshish kreN, mumkin khud hi ho ja'ay ga...


wish u best of luck...
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
The Following User Says Thank You to WanderingThoughts For This Useful Post:
noon_noon (04-13-2008)
  #5  
Old 06-04-2007, 11:19 AM
WanderingThoughts's Avatar
Just Kidding
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Islamabad
Posts: 7,244

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 1,636
Thanked 670 Times in 484 Posts
Nominated 25 Times in 13 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1821
WanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)

Quote:
Originally Posted by ArAbIaN gIrL View Post
acha title diya hia
ab ki bar mein b try karun gi
ji zuroor, aap ko to zuroor shamil hona chahiay, because judges k comments bohat helpfull sabit hoN gy aap k liay bhi aur baqi new likhny waloN k liay bhi...
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
The Following User Says Thank You to WanderingThoughts For This Useful Post:
noon_noon (04-13-2008)
  #6  
Old 06-04-2007, 11:38 AM
ArAbIaN gIrL's Avatar
`~Dreamer~`
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: ~`Tanhai~`
Posts: 14,971

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 17
Thanked 17 Times in 13 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 3204
ArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond reputeArAbIaN gIrL has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Best Cook Award Best Cook Award 
Total Awards: 2
Default Re: Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)

Quote:
Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts View Post
ji zuroor, aap ko to zuroor shamil hona chahiay, because judges k comments bohat helpfull sabit hoN gy aap k liay bhi aur baqi new likhny waloN k liay bhi...
koshish karun gi

acha ik sawal hai

nazam mein ZINDAGI word ana chahiye? ya phr ZINDAGI pe likhni hai ?

mujhe ye cheez samjh nahi ayee
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
The Following User Says Thank You to ArAbIaN gIrL For This Useful Post:
noon_noon (04-13-2008)
  #7  
Old 06-04-2007, 11:42 AM
friend4u's Avatar
Star Members
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Chand ke us par
Posts: 2,682

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 149
friend4u is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)

Quote:
Originally Posted by ArAbIaN gIrL View Post
koshish karun gi

acha ik sawal hai

nazam mein ZINDAGI word ana chahiye? ya phr ZINDAGI pe likhni hai ?

mujhe ye cheez samjh nahi ayee
as such word Zindagi hona lazmi nahi hai Main idea of poem iss related to zindagi hona chiya

simple is that over all nazam zindagi ko represent kerti ho

baqi bheter toor per Faizan bhai bata saktey hain k iam right or wrong?
__________________
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
The Following User Says Thank You to friend4u For This Useful Post:
noon_noon (04-13-2008)
  #8  
Old 06-04-2007, 12:00 PM
WanderingThoughts's Avatar
Just Kidding
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Islamabad
Posts: 7,244

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 1,636
Thanked 670 Times in 484 Posts
Nominated 25 Times in 13 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1821
WanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: Muqabla bra'ay Nazm-goi (June 07)

Wasim bhai ap ne durust kaha,
nazm pa markazi khyal "zindgi" ho.... kisi bhi aspect se, lekin jab nazm ko over'all dekheN to zehn meiN khyal aa'ay k ye nazm zindgi pr likhi gai hy....

i hope Rabia sahiba k ap ko wasim bhai ki aur meri bat ki samajh aa gai ho gi....

mazeed kuch pochna chaheN gi???
Digg this Post!