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This is a discussion on Muqabala-e-Sha'r O Shaeri within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; salamz to all here main nay bhi chunni munni koshish ki hay hope u like shike it hehhe .........HAMDARD.... ...... ...
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#21
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| salamz to all here main nay bhi chunni munni koshish ki hay hope u like shike it hehhe .........HAMDARD.... ...... IS PAANCH HARFI LAFZ KA MAFHOOM NIRAALA HUM,DARD KI DUNYA MAIN BASAY SOOCHAIN HAWALA JIS KO BHI HUM NAY SAMJHA KAY JAANAY GA DARD E SHAB US NAY HI ZINDAGI SAY UJAALA MITA DAALA AHSAAS KAY PANNO'N PAY LIKHAY THAY GHAME AYYAM IN NASIHOO'N NAY SAB SAR E BAZAAR UCHAALA SAB ZEEST MAIN DOOBAY HOAY HAIN ,SAR TA PA FARAIB HAIN YE KAHAN KI ROSHNI AUR KAB KA UJAALA UGALTAY NAHI BANTAY YE NIGALTAY NHI BANTAY KYA BAN KAY RAHAIN GAY HAMAARAY HAATH K ACHAALA? IN MUSHFIQOO'N KI SHAFQAT E NA MAHARBAAN SAY NAA POOCHO APNAY AAP KO KIS TARHA NIKAALA
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#22
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| adaab yeh 2 ash'aar likh raha hon.. laikin yeh muqablay main shamil nahin hai.. issi unwan kay zail main hain to ao say share kar raha hon.. aur muqablay main agar hissa liya to bad main kuchh shamil karon ga.. yeh siraf parhh kay bhool janay kay liyeh... HAI RAAH-E-WAFA MAIN YEH SABHI GARD USSI SAY THEE AAG-E-MOHABBAT BHI KABHI SARD USSI SAY EK AISA MASIHA HAI KAY DAY KARB HAMESHA HAMDARD HAI AISA KAY SABHI DARD USSI SAY ------------------------------------------------------------------- HASHIM
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#23
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| I think mere poetry is qabil to neihn kay competition may participate ker sakon,anyway aik naqam koshish kernay main kia herj hay!!!!! Lagta hay Is Baydard zamanay main hamdard hamara koi neihn Sukh bantany walay boht hain, dukh sunta hamara koi neihn Sati bhi yahan boht hain per dost hamara koi neihn Ke hay mohabat boht lekan piyar deta yahan koi neihn Ahsas say khali logh yahan jazbaat samajhta koi neihn Tabhi to yohn lagta hay kay hamdard hamara koi neihn |
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#24
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| HAI RAAH-E-WAFA MAIN YEH SABHI GARD USSI SAY THEE AAG-E-MOHABBAT BHI KABHI SARD USSI SAY EK AISA MASIHA HAI KAY DAY KARB HAMESHA HAMDARD HAI AISA KAY SABHI DARD USSI SAY bahot umdah.........aur janab ye aisi tahreer ho nahi ke padh ke bhola di jaye....bahot hi acha likha hai aap ne |
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#25
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| humdard mayray humdard mayray sathi har pal har waqat mayray sath raat ke tanhaioon may din kay ujaloon may khushi agher ho hasil to os may bhee gum may to hay he wo sath sath sub os say door rahaeen par may os ko paa kar zinda hoon wo hay mayraa sathi humdard mayraa dukh mayraa gum |
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#26
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bohat khoob , Zaroor mukamal kejeay ga is ghazal ko Intezar rahay ga Khush rahain @};-
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#27
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Achi kawish hai apki , Khush rahain @};- |
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#28
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Irfan bhai MashaAllah say Khoob dhawa bola hai aap nay Poets club main /weldone Khushamdeed poets club main :flower |
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#29
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