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Muqabala-e-Sha'r O Shaeri

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Old 05-13-2004, 05:35 PM
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salamz to all here main nay bhi chunni munni koshish ki hay hope u like shike it hehhe
.........HAMDARD.... ......
IS PAANCH HARFI LAFZ KA MAFHOOM NIRAALA
HUM,DARD KI DUNYA MAIN BASAY SOOCHAIN HAWALA

JIS KO BHI HUM NAY SAMJHA KAY JAANAY GA DARD E SHAB
US NAY HI ZINDAGI SAY UJAALA MITA DAALA

AHSAAS KAY PANNO'N PAY LIKHAY THAY GHAME AYYAM
IN NASIHOO'N NAY SAB SAR E BAZAAR UCHAALA

SAB ZEEST MAIN DOOBAY HOAY HAIN ,SAR TA PA FARAIB
HAIN YE KAHAN KI ROSHNI AUR KAB KA UJAALA

UGALTAY NAHI BANTAY YE NIGALTAY NHI BANTAY
KYA BAN KAY RAHAIN GAY HAMAARAY HAATH K ACHAALA?

IN MUSHFIQOO'N KI SHAFQAT E NA MAHARBAAN SAY
NAA POOCHO APNAY AAP KO KIS TARHA NIKAALA
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adaab

yeh 2 ash'aar likh raha hon.. laikin yeh muqablay main shamil nahin hai..
issi unwan kay zail main hain to ao say share kar raha hon.. aur muqablay main agar hissa liya to bad main kuchh shamil karon ga.. yeh siraf parhh kay bhool janay kay liyeh...

HAI RAAH-E-WAFA MAIN YEH SABHI GARD USSI SAY
THEE AAG-E-MOHABBAT BHI KABHI SARD USSI SAY

EK AISA MASIHA HAI KAY DAY KARB HAMESHA
HAMDARD HAI AISA KAY SABHI DARD USSI SAY

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Old 05-15-2004, 02:57 PM
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I think mere poetry is qabil to neihn kay competition may participate ker sakon,anyway aik naqam koshish kernay main kia herj hay!!!!!

Lagta hay Is Baydard zamanay main
hamdard hamara koi neihn
Sukh bantany walay boht hain,
dukh sunta hamara koi neihn
Sati bhi yahan boht hain
per dost hamara koi neihn
Ke hay mohabat boht lekan
piyar deta yahan koi neihn
Ahsas say khali logh yahan
jazbaat samajhta koi neihn
Tabhi to yohn lagta hay
kay hamdard hamara koi neihn
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HAI RAAH-E-WAFA MAIN YEH SABHI GARD USSI SAY
THEE AAG-E-MOHABBAT BHI KABHI SARD USSI SAY

EK AISA MASIHA HAI KAY DAY KARB HAMESHA
HAMDARD HAI AISA KAY SABHI DARD USSI SAY

bahot umdah.........aur janab ye aisi tahreer ho nahi ke padh ke bhola di jaye....bahot hi acha likha hai aap ne
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humdard

mayray humdard mayray sathi
har pal har waqat mayray sath
raat ke tanhaioon may
din kay ujaloon may
khushi agher ho hasil to os may bhee
gum may to hay he wo sath sath
sub os say door rahaeen par
may os ko paa kar zinda hoon
wo hay mayraa sathi humdard
mayraa dukh mayraa gum
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adaab

yeh 2 ash'aar likh raha hon.. laikin yeh muqablay main shamil nahin hai..
issi unwan kay zail main hain to ao say share kar raha hon.. aur muqablay main agar hissa liya to bad main kuchh shamil karon ga.. yeh siraf parhh kay bhool janay kay liyeh...

HAI RAAH-E-WAFA MAIN YEH SABHI GARD USSI SAY
THEE AAG-E-MOHABBAT BHI KABHI SARD USSI SAY

EK AISA MASIHA HAI KAY DAY KARB HAMESHA
HAMDARD HAI AISA KAY SABHI DARD USSI SAY

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I think mere poetry is qabil to neihn kay competition may participate ker sakon,anyway aik naqam koshish kernay main kia herj hay!!!!!

Lagta hay Is Baydard zamanay main
hamdard hamara koi neihn
Sukh bantany walay boht hain,
dukh sunta hamara koi neihn
Sati bhi yahan boht hain
per dost hamara koi neihn
Ke hay mohabat boht lekan
piyar deta yahan koi neihn
Ahsas say khali logh yahan
jazbaat samajhta koi neihn
Tabhi to yohn lagta hay
kay hamdard hamara koi neihn

Achi kawish hai apki ,

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humdard

mayray humdard mayray sathi
har pal har waqat mayray sath
raat ke tanhaioon may
din kay ujaloon may
khushi agher ho hasil to os may bhee
gum may to hay he wo sath sath
sub os say door rahaeen par
may os ko paa kar zinda hoon
wo hay mayraa sathi humdard
mayraa dukh mayraa gum

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Originally Posted by mystique
HAI RAAH-E-WAFA MAIN YEH SABHI GARD USSI SAY
THEE AAG-E-MOHABBAT BHI KABHI SARD USSI SAY

EK AISA MASIHA HAI KAY DAY KARB HAMESHA
HAMDARD HAI AISA KAY SABHI DARD USSI SAY

bahot umdah.........aur janab ye aisi tahreer ho nahi ke padh ke bhola di jaye....bahot hi acha likha hai aap ne
aray bhai.. bohot shukriyya.. ap ko acca laga..